Heroic Years

Let me talk about my opinion: The author is a novice, and I can see that after 100,000 words, many plot settings, words and sentences are unfamiliar and naive. However, the first few chapters are okay, but the further back, the more awkward it becomes. If someone gives up, it is not necessarily because they don't like the story, but because the author, as a novice, lacks the ability to control novels. The author should keep writing. Although what you are writing now makes me want to scratch the wall sometimes, which is very embarrassing, but the content, I am talking about expressing things, has its own ideas. Only if you keep writing and improve your writing skills, will it be recognized by more people. If you give up, it will be your own loss. Encourage you: Your creativity is the best, you only lack hands-on ability. This hands-on ability refers to the ability to tell a good story. You already have a good story. Only by keeping writing and improving your writing skills can you write a good story for everyone to see. I voted for the recommendation because it was for the author's potential. 😡 Personal suggestion: You can write slower. You are a novice. Let yourself write slower and improve your quality. This is the way to retain the few fans you have now.

It's okay, not very poisonous, and can be watched. .

Come on, work hard

I haven't read it. Personally, I prefer fantasy or fantasy novels. I support you because you have the patience and courage that most novice writers don't have. Come on!

Don't stop updating, be sure to write it down 😡, voted for recommendation

The author's writing style is very good, and it is definitely not something that ordinary authors can write, but he lacks the ability to make readers empathize! When looking at the Japanese spies caught, my humble opinion is that it lacks certain psychological descriptions or actions that reflect psychological activities.

It's very interesting. It's different from ordinary spy novels. It smells really good.

It feels like I'm watching a spy drama 🤭

Didn't the author talk to the editor? I'll give you more recommendations, your writing is very good.