Konoha's Thousand Hands Flame

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After reading it, let me share my thoughts. First, the sentence fragmentation and paragraph layout of the article are a bit messy. Secondly, the title and introduction of this book say that the pig's feet come with the Shao Shao fruit and the Six Postures, but after reading it, I felt that they were all mentioned in one stroke. During the period, they only mentioned increasing the temperature, without any development at all. The Six Postures body has reached the standard but has not been practiced. Third, since the main focus is the Burning Fruit and the Six Styles, why do we need to awaken a Wood Release and learn some other ninjutsu (sealing techniques are not counted), and then we have been fighting with the Wood Release all the time, and the Burning Fruit is only attached to the Wood Release. Isn't it a bit neglectful to write like this? Fourth, I don't know if you have an outline. From the first time I received the system to the time I happily accepted it, and then after the time travel, Pig's Feet didn't feel like a time traveler to me, and you didn't shape the protagonist's character well. Fifth, I came in after seeing your profile, the Burning Fruit and the Six Styles, so why not write according to your profile, and become a ninja who mainly develops the Burning Fruit and the Six Styles, and specializes in Fire Release and Fire Release (Sealing Technique is not included). Because I feel that the Burning Fruit should be regarded as having attribute exclusivity. If you want to write about other attributes, you can awaken a yang chakra in the later stage. Wouldn't it be nice to combine it with the Burning Fruit and Fire Chakra? The Senju clan only needs his physique. Why should I write about Wood Release? I feel a little outrageous here. And since there are six types and weapons, these two are also another powerful ability, no better than Wood Release and Wind Release? Of course these are some of my small opinions. If the author really wants to write this novel well, I think you can think about it before writing, and finally establish an outline. Also, although many people have written about the subject of this novel, there are still people who like this subject as much as I do. I am also looking forward to how far the Yasuo Fruit and the Six Styles combined with Naruto's ninjutsu can develop the Yasuo Fruit. Finally, come on, author, don't let my words affect your writing mood. Come on, I will always pay attention!