Great Entertainer of the Republic of China

I read the article and felt there was something wrong. 1. The content of the article is compact and lacks the meaning. Too much output is dizzying, and it is not good when introducing the background and current situation. 2. The emotional line is too fast and too abrupt, the writing method is single when describing the characters, the characters are thin, the heroine's character, Xu Zhimo's language is not in line with the emotional development. 3. The language is too bland and does not feel like a historical article. The information seems to be pasted, which makes the article less cultural. Obscure points that the author should write when writing 4. Although he is a copywriter, some works should not be too abrupt and rigid. It is recommended that the author first write an idea of ​​​​entertaining everyone or not overemphasize that he is a copywriter. It will be better to have a foreshadowing. 5. The protagonist's emotional expression should be more rich and specific when he teaches students his patriotic emotions. The author should strengthen his writing here, so that the article will be much more vivid. Here you can watch (Zhou Hexuan)'s speech on the train. 6. The author's conversion between the third perspective and the first and second perspectives was unsuccessful, making it difficult for readers to emotionally enter the characters. Of course, the author is not taught writing here, just some personal opinions

Well, I started as a college English teacher in the early stage, and then established myself in the translation and cultural circles.

You have to ensure at least one update a day 😭😭😭

The beginning is very poisonous. I use it as a shield for a woman I just met (actually it's nothing). After beating the second villain, the second villain turns around and brings people to the factory, and then a big awesome guy pops out, fuck.

Don't be like Lao Wang and get a 404 while driving.

There are not many articles about the Republic of China. Generally speaking, the main part is about literature and the secondary part is about business.

Yes, come on, author, quality is more important than quantity.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good piece of literature about the Republic of China. It's currently non-toxic Not bad.

It's well written, but I'm a little afraid of the river crab master. Please support me as much as possible 😅😅