A Hotel Without Time

It is recommended to write a main line to advance the story. Each story is separate. While adding depth, there are fewer readers and there can be more interaction between the characters and the protagonist. For example, doing business with a cat, and finally letting the cat stay in the store, which not only satisfies the reader's sense of accumulation, but also can add the cat in the following plot to achieve the connection between the stories... Or continue this separate narrative style and make each story longer (three or five chapters upward), ahem (convenient to leave suspense/appetite)...

The rat is coming! The author's book is very innovative ✔ Now it seems that the author wants to use a special store as the central unit. The shopkeeper Ahong and the heroine are the two protagonists to describe small stories one after another, telling us a lot about the true feelings and truths of the world. However, Shuzi has read the novels written by Shuangshu Shuang before. Among them, "Floating Creatures" is similar to the writing form of the author's novel, and it also revolves around a floating tea. The story of the museum, each small story is closely connected to the center, surrounding the mystery of Suo Chen's background and life experience, that is, the most important plot is slowly developed in one branch plot after another, which will make people continue to pay attention to the novel in their daily happiness and be attracted by the clues. I personally suggest the author to read her novel, which will be of great help and benefit to your current novel! Now that we have made suggestions, let's praise the author! The subject matter must be very novel, the theme is clear, and the text is artistic. Let's work hard together with Shuzi! It's pretty cool. Let's read Shuzi's novels and encourage each other to make progress together >3<

There are four female channel recommendation votes every day, but after reading it for a while, I suggested merging chapters, two or three chapters into one, otherwise it would look awkward and feel like one chapter doesn't say anything.

Collected, recommended, author cheers

Recently, I've had some lovely people point out flaws in my work to me. I've sorted it out and will slowly improve it in the future! Next, we will consider letting the characters who appeared before appear again. And to increase the coherence of the story, we will update not only the stories that seem to have little connection! Please continue to pay attention to the story of A Hong and Lu Xiaoke! Thank you all for your support along the way! Grateful! Grateful!

Did Ah Hong encounter something he couldn't solve? What will be the fate of Lu Xiaoke and A Hong? A new story begins!

I drew a simple promotional picture😁

I dubbed three voices. The first two paragraphs are the first and second paragraphs of Chapter One. The third paragraph is the last paragraph of Chapter 8. Everyone is welcome to listen!

I drew a poster to wish everyone a Happy New Year!

Well written, keep up the good work, I hope you will become a god in one battle

Sorry everyone! Because a lot of opinions were collected. Therefore, when modifying the previous chapters, the update may be slower. Hope everyone can forgive me!

Sorry everyone! Because I collected some opinions. So I am revising the previous chapters these days. Updates may be a little slower. But it won't go without updates for more than a week! Please forgive me!

Author, is your chapter too short? I've survived to see how long it's been

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I'm sorry to see your message after so long. The following is my humble opinion. If it offends me, you can ask me to delete it. First of all, the setting of "Shop Without Time" is very interesting. I chose to read this article first because of your title and introduction. (The conclusion is actually not important. Some stories are 10,000 words long enough. There is no need to stretch it to 100,000 words.) It is just about the "no time" aspect. Apart from the beginning, the rest is more about transactions, that is, the "store" part. Of course, trading itself is not an ordinary transaction, it is related to lifespan, memory, emotions, and appearance, but if we talk about time... Then it is really only a little related to lifespan. If you are saying that the store itself has no time, it actually only means that this store is magical, but it has no promotion effect on the plot (it is completely OK as the icing on the cake). To stay relevant, you could also make what they trade more concrete, which is time. This timeless store can give customers extra time to complete what they want to do. Students who can't finish their homework can use their precious things to exchange for time to do homework. The resentful ghosts who died unexpectedly can exchange for time to say goodbye to their families. Lovers who passed by can exchange for time to say sorry to each other... (It's just my own imagination, I don't have to adopt it. Etc.) As a digression, when I first started watching it, I really thought it was very similar to "The Worry-Free Grocery Store"... Your writing style is very artistic and elegant. I think other people have praised this, so I won't go into details. I will mainly talk about your problem. As I said before, I personally think that the number of words is not a problem at all, but the premise is that the story can be told. It's a pity that I can't finish your story in 34,000 words. The field you want to touch is very broad, and various issues are covered, but each one is just a light touch, which is not deep enough. There are so many such stories that the whole novel is like a quick tour, like a running account. Especially in the first few chapters, many settings are not explained clearly. In terms of character design, how should I put it, it can be seen that the author has thought about the story of each character, and if you tell it in detail, they are all good stories, but I was not moved by these stories from beginning to end. Just like the girl who was tragically involved in a car accident, what a touching love story she and her boyfriend had, but because things progressed so fast, before I could react, her boyfriend had already sacrificed his feelings there, and then she started trading again. To be honest, mind reading is quite convenient to use here, but because it is too straightforward, it lacks some desire to explore. Language is also a means of reflecting a character's personality. Whether he hesitates or talks endlessly, there will always be a reason behind it. The narrator should be the one who takes the initiative and tell their stories to A Hong, Xiao Ke and the readers, instead of A Hong asking for their memories. Pictures are okay, but they should be described by the narrator. Other characters have similar problems, and the connections between characters are minimal. Basically all the characters have no follow-up. What happens after the transaction is completed? Are they living the life they want? Are they satisfied with the deal? As for Xiaoke and Ahong, as the two protagonists of this book, all they do in the first half of the article is welcome guests, read minds, enlighten, and trade. In the second half, they had a little more scenes, but they still did the same things, and one more of them was caught by Dijun for testing. The plot of this episode is actually quite good, but the description is a little lacking. It was only at the end that I discovered that they both had such a setting, and they were still facing the miserable couple, but there were basically no details pointing to this result, just... Overall, I still like the rhythm and ideas of the whole book. The description part can be strengthened a little bit, come on! Looking forward to your new work!