Travel Back to the 1950S with a Grain and Oil Store

The pace is too fast, the content is not substantial enough, and many characters and storylines are not explained clearly. For example, there is a soldier named Cheng Ge in the article, and his wife passed away. This should be intended to be a foreshadowing, but the story stops abruptly.

Good idea of ​​the genre, but I don't like your content. You think too badly of people. A regular regiment-level person in charge of more than a thousand people would be a fool. Can you become the leader? If you work normally, a manager-level brain will be stronger than that of an ordinary office worker. The people who came through the war years are much more capable than you think. Think with your current thinking. People in war years. Please think more and don't write casually. A wife who is at the level of a regiment leader is still an active soldier and cannot just go home to raise the baby. Not to mention no reply for eight months. You think they are all fools. I raped a soldier for eight consecutive months. If the incident was revealed, wouldn't I know that I would die? People in the past would value going to jail more than life, and would not even think about going to jail until they die. No matter how much I like my younger son, I will never write like this. In that era, if one person served as a soldier, the whole family would be honored. It's not just talk. Military marriage is written into the constitution. You will be jailed for breaking up a military marriage, let alone using force against an active duty soldier. Even if his parents are idiots, they won't do this. If found, he would be shot. A person who can become a high-ranking military officer cannot have a low-level parent. Those of you who write female videos think too badly of people. This is the only part I don't like. Your book is finished and I don't know if I can make some changes. Please write something positive. Don't pollute my eyes!

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