Honghuang: I Am an Iron-Eating Beast, but Houtu Eavesdropped on My Heart

Xiancao The author writes so slowly that I read it three times. Come on and update. Personally, I think it would be better if the author started writing from the time when Gungun traveled through the past. There are two reasons. Modern people travel to the past because they traveled back in time. There was nothing for entertainment and leisure at that time. Whether Gungun traveled through time to the iron-eating beast or for systemic reasons, he was affected by eating and laziness. It's not as abrupt and inexplicable as it is now. It feels like the author has forced the impression of modern pandas. After all, people have traveled through time. Even Gungun, a salted fish, has to turn around and find an image with a rich plot for him The bond with Hou Tu feels like it is just passed by. It is too simple. It should enrich the reader's image of the character. It would be better if I wrote more earlier. I can get some foreshadowing to expand the plot, Gungun's early life until Houtu meets Gungun, and how the Wu clan treats him. At least it can lead to relationships with various clans, personal relationships, thoughts of various clans, and powerful powers... At least it takes 500,000 words to write these feelings. Finally, as a reader's reflection, can you write more? It's too short and weak. The request is to add more updates! ! ! The above is just my personal opinion, feel free to criticize. Anyway, I rarely read the replies to me😜😜😜

I'm convinced. The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors haven't finished, and the Shang Dynasty hasn't appeared yet. Why did it come out of Guanjiangkou? You must know that Yang Jian traveled to the West a few hundred years after he was born. After the Shang Dynasty, it was 800 years after the Zhou Dynasty and the 7 Kingdoms. You are outrageous. The Westward Journey is from the Tang Dynasty. You are confused at this time. According to what you wrote, the Journey to the West must have been countless years earlier. Now the third Human Emperor has not appeared, let alone the Five Emperors. You have done this to Yang Jian.

Gungun Buddha

Door God

Little Cutie and Huahua

They are all targeting the book Nuwa. Also, Nuwa's strength is really a bit low. Nuwa was the second person after Hongjun to achieve enlightenment and become a saint. If you say that her strength is low, I won't believe it. There is also Hou Tu, the Lord of Reincarnation, Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian. They may be stronger than saints in the Nine Netherworld, but beyond this realm, saints are the strongest in the world. The saint's soul rests on the way of heaven. Although it is controlled by heaven, it may borrow the power of heaven. The saint is Hunyuan, and Hunyuan is not a saint after all.

Readers must remember: Nuwa is the Demon God of Chaos, and the human race is not born to be the protagonist of prehistoric times. The price for the human race to become the protagonist of the world is very high, it is ridiculously high!

Not bad. There are no flaws, Lao Meng's writing is still good.

Panda Gungun

I think I'm starting to dislike Houtu a little bit

I go to bed every day, and the gods live broadcast it! ! !

Have you noticed a problem? Logically speaking, Gungun, as the ancestral bear, should be of the same generation as the ancestral dragon, ancestral phoenix, and Tang Shen, right? In other words, he and Zixiao Sanqianke are the same generation, just like Ran Deng Ru Chan is the junior and deputy leader of the sect. Then why is Gungun becoming brothers with Ao Yao instead? There is also Kunpeng. There is also the issue of strength. Zulong, Zufeng, Dijun and Donghuang of the same generation are dead, not to mention the Six Saints and Styx. Forgetting our innate strength, our panda Buddha Lord Gungan Tiandi, why can't he get up to the level now? When will this become a saint?

Panda Buddha

I feel that the Great Desolate Current is a bit weak. It has not declined since the beginning of the world. Before the founding of the world, there were three thousand chaos demon gods, and all the saints of the prehistoric era started. After the founding of the world, there were less than ten saints. Hongjun said that there are only nine saints under the way of heaven, but the prehistoric era was developed on the corpses of three thousand saint-level chaos demon gods. Is it reasonable that there are only nine saints? There is also the prehistoric environment, from innate spiritual energy to acquired spiritual energy to no spiritual energy. What is the problem?

Daoshengyi

The author's book is obviously delayed by its title. I can't even push it out.

Can this disgusting plot end quickly?

The author asked Gungun to marry Houtu. Certify a holy marriage or something. Hey, I think this is interesting 😃

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Gungun, you still dare to think about a woman, I will beat you crookedly

Let this bear be sanctified. Gungun, who lives next door, has long since become a saint and has become a spokesman for heaven. It's not like our family's Gungun is always being bullied.

I hope the author doesn't make the bear a saint until the end of the book. And now it can be said that the story of Honghuang is almost finished. Either change the map or finish the book directly. After watching it for so long, I was waiting to see this bear become a saint and run around misbehaving. To be honest, this bear should have been a saint a long time ago. Otherwise, there would be nothing to write later. It's easy to change maps. If I don't change it, just finishing the book "The Bear Becomes a Saint" will be a waste. I hope the author can feed the mouse with juice.

Finished spreading flowers! What to say! If I say it's not good, the plot is still a bit interesting and funny. If I'm good, I feel that the plot has not changed much from the original mythology, and the changes to the prehistoric world are barely made. I just feel that the plot is not passionate or grand enough. However, the supporting characters in the novel are interesting and flesh-and-blood, but their IQs may be worrying. I feel that the protagonist Gungun's strategy is not very good, and the supporting characters may fall for it... But for a book with the national treasure panda 🐼🐼🐼🐼 as the protagonist, it is still okay. The protagonist Gungun is so naive that he is a qualified war pet! It would be even better if the war pet Panda Gungun rides on his master Houtu at the end. I hope the author's next novel will be more interesting and exciting.

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Despite some hiccups, I still enjoyed this novel. However, I was unhappy with the ending of the story. Is it possible to write a few more chapters about how Hou Tu survived and more interactions between her and Gun Gun? Or talk more about his past, or what happened after the last battle (maybe there will be more chapters about Gungun's daily life in the modern world). Nonetheless, I really enjoyed the story and towards the end I wished there were more chapters to read. Unfortunately, like all stories, this one has an ending.

Leave without making up for updates 😤

Houtu gives birth to a bear cub for Gungun, and there is this animation on Douyin

I don't know why it feels weird to see Chang'e together with Hou Yi. Recently, I seem to be in a book-weary phase and can't stand it anymore.

Doesn't this book have a fan title?

Apart from anything else, I already have some feelings for the Emperor. Why don't you advise him to go into seclusion?