When the Moon Whispers

Happy New Year to everyone! Good luck in the Year of the Rabbit! The money rabbit is unlimited! All the best!

A million words have not been signed yet, and the perseverance is amazing, come on.

Awesome, your spirit is commendable, and your perseverance is so touching!

Author, I found a bug in grabbing red envelopes. I grabbed the red envelope, but I still have the recommendation ticket. What's going on? 🐶🐶

20230904 Due to work reasons, the postponement will be postponed for one day. Sorry, sorry😔

20230718Sorry for being delayed by one day while working out🥺

Beauty is picturesque

Let's accept each other, let's cheer each other on in the future! (After Black Moonlight took her by force)

20231124 Is hand-in-hand with the flu🤒... One-stop inspection, delayed by one day🙏🏻

Writing a book is not easy, so stay with me!

Has it been updated? It's a pity that I didn't grab the bag

Come on, let's work together!

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

It's a rare good book, keep reading!

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It's all about persistence. The author can write thousands of words in two days, rain or shine. I often forget to even come here to vote every day. This shows how difficult it is.

The writing style is very good, and it is also very perseverant. It is completely driven by love, and I admire it very much. But the description of the environment is too cumbersome, making it impossible to bring it into the beginning. Secondly, the conflict is too slow and slow, without a strong sense of pull and plot hook, making it unattractive to follow. The above is also a problem for many authors. Of course including myself. Hey. The first suggestion is to force yourself to get rid of the habit of describing the environment in detail. Strictly control the number of words in the description of the environment, with only one or two lines appearing. Second, the characters must appear in time to release the suspense in advance, and do not enter the plot slowly. After all, physical novels and online novels are two different concepts. Moreover, people nowadays are very impatient. No matter how well you write, if you have too much foreshadowing in the beginning, you will lose readers. Third, next time you publish an article, remember to submit it to the editor first to avoid the situation where there are so many words but no sign. Fourth, it is recommended that this article be cut. Don't be reluctant, I have also done hundreds of thousands of words 😢😢😢 Improving the plot and writing style is more important than your hard work every day coding to generate electricity for love. Look more at other people's work, use your own notebook to dismantle the first 10,000 words of others, and learn from other people's architectural patterns and slowly explore them. It was indeed a pity to see the girl working so hard and not applying for the lottery, so I said a few more words. You can delete the comment if you don't like it. I also apologize for being too talkative. I am also the author of Little Transparent, and I hope to work together.

November 19, Tuesday, seven recommended votes November 26, Tuesday, seven recommended votes