Douluo's Martial Spirit Is Green Light

What can I say, it was fun to watch the early part, but the later part was so disappointing that I turned the page after just one glance, because it was basically summarized in a few sentences. There are also Bai Chenxiang, Meng Yiran, Bo Saixi, Ah Yin, Brigitte, Gu Yuena; Bai Chenxiang is green and green, a profit tool, but she mentioned it in the later stage and disappeared, and the finale has no name; Meng Yiran is even worse. After joining Wuhun Temple, he mentioned her a few words from time to time, thinking that he would accept it, but in the end he did not accept it at all, just pure water digital tools People, I won't even mention her in the later stage; then there is Bo Saixi, there is nothing to say about this, I just mentioned that the final ending has no name; and there is Gu Yuena, there are very few emotional scenes, she feels like a fighting tool, (I personally like Gu Yuena) She is similar to Bo Saixi, so she has a name at the end; the last mention, Ayin Biji also has no name. In terms of combat, I am invincible, there is nothing to say; but in terms of relationships, most of the time I use in-depth communication and official plug-ins to retreat. There are few people who rely on their own charm to conquer step by step. Most of them are half-assed, and I still hope to be more delicate. Finally, although it is a stallion story, I still want to have some sweets to eat, rather than watching the whole movie and rushing through it. The above are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them.

How come Master has offended you authors! ! !

Speed ​​360 yards

Zhu Zhuqing can't stand Dai Mubai's scum, but can he just look at you Wang Feng's scum?

The word "father" is very important, so don't write it casually. After you and Liu Erlong had a child, you became an itinerant father. The child never peed on you, you never peed on the child, and you didn't even dare to recognize your daughter in public. You can open a harem as you like, but when it comes to children, you must be cautious... Father is not something that can be described in just two words.

I rushed to the protagonist to give Master Ninth Grade Purple Branch to break through level 30. It almost made me angry to death. If you don't eat the fairy grass, you will go crazy to level up. The fairy grass is all for others. In the original work, Tang San ate at least 3 or more plants. The protagonist did not eat anything except the ice and fire grass.

How about Ju Douluo taking Acacia Broken Heart Red to fight against Tang Hao? How about Bibi Dong reversely pushing the protagonist? How about Yu Xiaogang becoming a father with tears in his eyes? How about Dai Mubai being crippled until death. How about Wang Feng holding Lou A Yin, kicking Tang San, and punching Tang Hao. One more, Tang San takes action to destroy Yu Xiaogang

To be honest, shouldn't the Green Light Martial Spirit be a Green Man, like Tang San, Tang Hao or something like that?

In the first thirty chapters, I can't believe that Zhu Zhuqing is still like this and still doesn't leave Shrek. The heroine always licks the supporting role and only considers the protagonist if she is completely disappointed. Isn't this protagonist just a spare tire?

The protagonist has resources and he doesn't have to give them away. The more he looks at them, the angrier he becomes. The licking is really a bit exaggerated. He gives resources randomly in the early stage so that he can get it later. Giving resources randomly without asking for anything in return seems unreasonable. It is difficult for the protagonist to break through level 1 by cheating. It is easy for the protagonist group to break through with the protagonist's resources.

The pressure is too severe! Absorbing 3000 soul rings and breaking through to level 31 actually broke through to level 31? It's like whoever has absorbed has not broken through level 31. If you absorb 3000 years, you must be at least level 32 or above. To be honest, it's really a bit cruel to suppress levels.

It feels like you are capitalizing on the enemy, crazily leveling up, using no resources, and don't suck soul bones if you have them.

Kitten

To be honest, it doesn't look good. Whether it's the plot, the characters, or the portrayal, it's all bad! There are too many flaws in it, and there is a constant stream of big and small poisons. If I say it is good-looking, it is probably for junior high school students, because there are many ambiguous descriptions in it, which is attractive to these young people.

It's poisonous enough. It's almost okay to force the protagonist's level to Tang San. The first grass is really poisonous. The article also mentions a beating. If you don't see the beating, you just apply some poison and throw it. Then Tang Hao comes out and doesn't get the elixir back. Can I write nmd? I have no idea.

Is this forced demotion, a primary school student's composition?

Liu Erlong's part is really vicious, and Bibi Dong's story is probably the same. He lets the female lick the male partner, and the male protagonist licks the female partner. Then when the female partner is disappointed with the male partner, she realizes how good the male protagonist is, and sincerely approves of the male protagonist. Don't you think the male protagonist is like a spare tire? The male protagonist writes so diligently. When reading Douluo fanfiction, to put it bluntly, it's just for reading Shuangwen. This positioning is not clear. What is it here for? How does the male protagonist stand out from the backup? Say goodbye, I can't stand it anymore.

To be honest, the author of this book would make a lot of money

The writing is good but a bit bad. Not bad, not bad. Don't write it next time.

Give the chrysanthemum a lovesickness and heartbreaking red color, and give the jade anus nine grades of purple zhizhi. Lonely Yan is the protagonist's first woman, and she gives Lonely Bo an unnamed medicinal herb, and then gets beaten up by Juhuaguan.

The content is okay, but the name of the work is too ordinary. If the name was good, the current results would definitely be much better.

The whole book is full of traffic and I can't stop at all. I saw that Wang Feng has reached level 79 😏😏😏

The protagonist of Shark Arm is a true machine, right? Beat me up again, I am the sword

A pure erotic novel with infinite matryoshka dolls

With this kind of description, it's okay to write about modern girls, but the work is so disgusting Zhu Zhuqing here is just like coaxing Xiaowu Soul Ring, she is very disgusting For this reason, I came to check in to record it.

I don't understand at all why the protagonist wants to save Ning Rongrong. The master asked Ning Rongrong to absorb the soul ring beyond the limit. At this time, the protagonist and Ning Rongrong were neither relatives nor friends. Just sit and watch Ning Rongrong become a useless person. It can not only completely break up the Qibao Glazed Sect and Tang San's group, but also ruin Yu Xiaogang's reputation. The protagonist approaches Ning Rongrong at this time and takes out the fairy grass to help Ning Rongrong recover. To be honest, it is easy to gain favor.

Not happy at all, really disgusting, and given Wang Xiaogang fairy grass again, Tang San still entered the ice fire spring

So awesome. The more I look at my body, the worse it gets. Bad review.

If you don't have a brain, you can barely watch it if your poison resistance is high enough. If you have a brain, don't watch it.

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