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Sending girl, tauren, I really don't want to say anything to you. What's the result after staying together for 8 years? ? ?

Nine out of ten books about bad guys in Jiang Hu were given to Lin Xuan. When I first watched the anime, I only saw girls given to girls, which made me sick. Now the novels are still given to girls. I don't know why they are given to girls.

The author's writing technique is too unfamiliar, it's always Lin Chuan, I can't read it, I don't feel immersed in it

I don't understand why Lu Linxuan is so good! Why send it. I really don't understand where the Empress is?

Brother, I'm not saying you're too vicious, you should change it, otherwise you probably won't be able to sign the contract after hundreds of chapters.

I am here for Li Hanyi, Xueyue Sword Immortal yyds, and I hope she can have a perfect ending. .

Something feels wrong from the beginning of the first chapter. There are too many voice-overs. The information disclosed to the outside world is illogical. It feels more like being obscene. Overall, I think this is a novice yy article 😠

Even though he has the body of a god and king, he still can't push the martial arts side by side. He's really low.

Yue Ji is pretty good, it's a bad omen.

A few suggestions from the old bookworm. 1. When writing a world, the author should not open too many plug-ins, just set the ceiling of this world. Secondly, try not to have other fantasy skills and physical fitness, especially those with divine bodies, which look very embarrassing. 2. Don't show up as a gift girl (although I don't really like Lin Xuan, but many people like the harem) 3. When the author writes the article, there should be a framework, big branches, and small branches. The included system text functions should not be too complicated, just be simple, and don't make the voice system too annoying. 4. The paragraphs of the article should be divided into as many paragraphs as possible, otherwise it will be tiring to read. The text needs to be close to the characters. 5. When writing fan fiction, a common mistake many authors make is to act like a nanny. 6. Try not to have Madonna plot.

I feel like there's no point in writing fan fiction without having a harem.

The protagonist is too Wang Sicong

Painting Jianghu is a bit big, the Empress is my favorite, and the girl outside the Great Wall is also good, but she is too scheming and has too much desire for power.

Martial arts, why do you have a god king body?

Let's break it down into sections, it's hard for your eyes to look at 😐

It has been Lin Chuan, Lin Chuan😰 read two chapters and said goodbye.

Thanks for the monthly ticket from Zuizuoda. This is the first one I received. Thank you very much.

Accept the younger junior sister, and then you accept the other one, otherwise it will collapse, because the setting is Tang Lianman, and that person likes it

When can the protagonist regain his memory?

It's so rare to find a young singer who writes well! ! ! ! ! !

I just checked, Tang Lian's junior sister's name is Sikong Qianluo

Is it a sword, or is it a sword that becomes a sword when it reaches the song line in Sword Painting Jianghu? There are also more segments that cause a lot of headaches.

I hope the protagonist can recover his memory within three chapters. I like the way the protagonist pretends to be cool.

The subject matter is good, but the author, a novice, can't help it. Various settings and plot writing are really not that good.

That Sichuan girl Chi Meng is really in love with Ai Luo

You must have a certain potential, at least be like Yun Yun.

Since I went to the Phantom Room, there are a lot more poisonous points, almost every picture has them, the writing is not good, and I can't even use blank paragraphs. There is no sense of involvement at all. It's a forced intelligence reduction.

The King of Gods realizes that bad people have traveled through time. Brother, you are a bit humble 😂