Rewriting the Myriad Worlds, Starting with the White Snake

The harem novel takes people through time travel. This is the biggest failure of all new books. It cannot be popular.

The white snake described by the original author is a real monster, and Fahai is a good person. It was changed into a TV series, so I added love and then made Fa Hai a villain.

Has the author understood the origin of "White Snake"? How could Bai Suzhen, a snake demon who was about to become an immortal, not be able to tell at a glance that Xu Xian was the reincarnation of her savior? How can the protagonist win Bai Suzhen's favor before Xu Xian? If Xu Xian had not saved Bai Suzhen, she would not have been able to survive the disaster, and there would be no story of "White Snake". The cause is unclear, and she has no interest in the following content. I spent this dime to buy points just to ask the author what he thought.

The concept of the book is okay, but when I saw this maid, I didn't want to read it. Although it is a modern way of thinking, you travel to a world similar to ancient times and do as the Romans do. This maid was made to have no rules at all and almost did something bad. Why should I write it? Isn't it bad to be alone at the beginning? Really, give up.

Deadly rushing into the street, bronze is still bronze even if it turns over, the poison is so poisonous that it reduces intelligence and brainlessness.

This is trying to be a reckless hero.

There are too many common sense mistakes made by the authors of the Three Kingdoms World. If you are not good at it, don't write it. Wouldn't it be nice to change to a world that you are good at? Even if you want to write, you need to do more homework and check the information. Although you can buy an official in the late Han Dynasty, there is a threshold. People without status and background cannot buy an official even if they have money. Even if they can buy it, it is impossible to buy a state shepherd in one step. If you can buy a county magistrate, you have great skills. Also, when will the former general, a second-grade general, be able to become your turn as a state pastor? Do you want to rebel in advance? And now Zhuge Liang is only eleven or twelve years old, a little brat. You are here too early!

It feels like the author simply wrote in a perfunctory manner. One is the holy body, and the other is the fairy body. One moment, 37, one moment, 27, one moment, the golden elixir realm, the other, the elixir formation... I am simply speechless. I don't understand why I need to write a novel at all! Writing like this won't achieve much at all.

To be honest, if you don't want to accept women, don't write that kind of story. After a long time, those women like the male protagonist but don't want to accept it. It's better not to have any intersection in the first place. It was so painful to watch.

I gave up and got stuck when I got to Taoist Master Four Eyes. I don't know what the author thought. The protagonist in the alchemy stage actually worshiped Taoist Four Eyes who was in the Qi training stage as his teacher. It's too poisonous. The protagonist has a complete collection of dragon and tiger talismans. There is no need to study like Four Eyes. The master is not as powerful as his apprentice. There is no need to become a disciple in order to complete the task. There are other ways. It's poisonous. I won't read it anymore.