Inherit the Immortal Sect at the Beginning, and All the Junior Sisters Are Empresses

I subscribed and read fifty or sixty chapters. To sum up: I personally feel that the author writes in a self-interested way, which is also the reason for the confusion in the comments. A Dragon Quest story has to add a lot of narration, which is very watery. A and B are talking to each other. The author also needs to add some irrelevant narrations, or character self-style narrations, and a lot of character psychological description narrations, and then connect the plot. Can it not be confusing? To be honest, my head hurts after reading this. There is too much useless information. One chapter is about 30-50 pages. Sometimes the description of self-pleasure takes up two-thirds, and sometimes it takes up one-third. There are also redundant descriptions of the supporting characters' activities. This kind of self-pleasure writing really looks messy, a waste of money, and a bit embarrassing, and some of the jokes are not funny at all. To be honest, Wei Yuan's is just okay with the emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists. Song's is so clichéd that it doesn't matter what era it is, and it still plays a three-year agreement, and forcibly gives wisdom to the father-in-law. Finally, I suggest the author go to the supermarket door and shake it to understand before writing the seniority title.

This is a business novel written in the name of cultivating immortals, falling in love, and spreading dog food. I'll run away first

Shouldn't the author, Xiao Ximo and the protagonist be uncles and nieces? Shouldn't he be called uncle? How could you call him uncle?

I can't stand it anymore, the main character is so disgusting, sb

The setting is good, but the writing sucks. . .

The settings are OK, but the writing is a bit messy. And the writing is not very good. (This is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.) Maybe it's because I've read too many books by great masters recently. But I still want to thank every author who dares to write a book. After all, writing skills will always improve.

Let me help you construct an outline: the novel is called "My Wifes Are Empresses" The male protagonist's current wife is an empress, and his wife's master is the male protagonist's previous wife, who was also an empress. Then the male protagonist went through vicissitudes of life and met his wife in the next life. His wife in the next life came from across the sky and was also an empress. As luck would have it, his wife in his previous life had a daughter with him, and he was accepted as his apprentice by his wife in his previous life. What's more, the hero's wife in the next life traveled through time to save her mother, the hero's current wife. 🙂🙂

Fortunately, I read the comments and almost got poisoned. Shang Zhanwen crawled

A hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. . . There are many, many, many, many places that require a lot of brainstorming. It feels tiring and inexplicable.

To be honest, you talk too much to make money, right? More than a hundred chapters are all about how to make money. The name should be changed, don't use this name, use this name in the next book 😅😅😅

It's actually pretty good if you don't pay attention to some poisonous points (but if I hadn't read the comments, I wouldn't have noticed that calling uncle is wrong...)

Cultivation of immortality or not, the whole process is secular. Don't you know how to write about the sect? Is it better to be relaxed and warm, or to be more enlightened in times of crisis? The Immortal Harem only writes about the affairs of the sect. It's really a mess.

At present, I always feel that the focus is on business wars and has little to do with cultivating immortals.

Can you please stop calling me uncle? I'm really speechless.

I'm convinced. I'm a 17-year-old bookworm. I actually didn't understand the first chapter. 1: Where did you get the secret book? 2: What's the magical effect of the fairy stone? 3. How do you get the moral points? Could it be that they are all redeemed in that fairy stone?

Is the studio occupied🕖? How come the poison is always at this level 1?

This book, to be honest, if you really want to see the male protagonist practicing with various women every day, you won't come to Qidian to read the book, and you will go directly to see Little Emperor Uncle.

I have recommended this book many times on the daily guide. Come here and see how everyone criticizes this book. Is the empress of all members the one who occupied the village and proclaimed herself the emperor? The title of the book alone makes me lose the desire to read this book.

Does this book have anything to do with cultivating immortals? Bad ending. I'm sick of watching it. The plot progress is too slow. Too wordy

The donkey's head is not in line with the horse's mouth, and the writing is messy and watery. The first 50 chapters were pretty good but then became more and more difficult, especially the part in the city where it was really difficult. The junior sister in the book plays the emperor? The content of Pig's Knuckle is that it's embarrassing to pretend to be B. Attached is another male pig's foot

When will tens of millions of years pass? I just read the introduction. The introduction is not the same as the book.

Soon, Brother Leader! Be a teacher for a while! Master! Senior brother! I still don't know whether he is a disciple or a junior sister who took him under his guidance.

Usually those who can't write emotional dramas well can't write novels well.

To be honest, I can't understand it at all

I have only read the beginning of this book. The most unreasonable arrangement is that the protagonist has not cultivated in a world where cultivating immortals is the main part. You can make money by letting apprentices practice. You can even create a system and accept a disciple to increase your cultivation.

Then one junior sister killed all the other senior sisters (refer to Hua Wuque) and occupied the senior brother 😍😍😍

It's pretty, why isn't it popular?