Dragon Clan of Super Seminary

Hello author, I'm almost finished reading this novel, but now I don't have any feeling of being a dragon at all. I only see that the protagonist has a lonely Bloodmourne, and has no talent. In "Dragon", even ordinary hybrids are all outstanding. How come you only have alchemy? Aren't those skills on the attribute panel at the beginning known by the protagonist? Fighting, cooking, nothing. Did the system take these skills with it when it left? If you don't know how to fight, you don't have talent. What kind of alien dragon is this? Could it be that the protagonist is fake and Bai Ling is the real dragon? Is Bai Ling the real protagonist?

New world reconstruction? Disgusting people. .

A group of dragons with weak combat power have become super gods and become lizards.

I originally thought you could make progress, but I have endured so many things in front of you. Then when you arrived at the Dragon Clan, you told me that you were practicing the trumpet again. What the hell is the difference between this and starting a new book? There were so many pictures in the front, and then all of them were gone. And it's still worse than the original start. Maybe my expectations for you are too high, and I have been cut from the original ceiling to the bottom. Goodbye, goodbye.

It's so funny, the Dragon King in the Dragon Clan can't even defeat the first-generation beast body, is that all? After reaching the highest level, wouldn't he be just as good as the Sword Demon?

The heroine is not an angel. I read several books in a row and the protagonist licks the angel every day. I hope the author will create a protagonist with upright views. But in the first few pictures, it's possible that the author didn't express the character and blood sorrow of the person with dragon blood at all.

Is the dragon clan's combat power a bit low? That's not true. The so-called most powerful destruction is to clear the surface of the earth. The earth is still intact.

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. You can integrate the Dragon Clan into the Super Seminary. This subject matter is very good, but it is easy to fail. You have to grasp the character of the protagonist. The author has obviously read Dragon Clan, and he should know that the personality characteristics of each character in Dragon Clan are not the characteristics of the male protagonist in ordinary online novels. The characters in the Dragon Clan are very special. In fact, to be honest, the literary value of Super Seminary is not high. If you write the protagonist's character to be very similar to the Dragon Clan, then this book can almost become a god in terms of character creation. On the other hand, if you fail to write it and write the protagonist as a popular protagonist on the Internet, it will probably persuade many people to quit, especially Dragon Clan fans, because I only came in to read it when I saw the name Dragon Clan. So far, what you have written is quite satisfactory, but it depends on how ambitious you are and what kind of book you want to write. Is it a popular Internet article, or is it a fan novel about a supernatural seminary? Let's talk about the second question, the world view. There is no clear representation of the power system in the original book of Dragon Clan. Who is the Black King? It's still a mystery to this day, let alone estimating the Black King's strength? So this requires the author to grasp the perfect integration of the dragon clan's power system and the super-god universe. But looking at it now, you can easily make dragon fans angry. After all, a first-generation species can't beat the evil god Thorton. To be honest, this is a bit of a problem. You may want to argue with me. The strength of the first-generation dragon species is about the same as that of Thorton. Then I have nothing to say, but you will probably write it off. In short, there are two problems. It can be clearly seen that the protagonist's personality is still biased towards the male protagonist in popular novels, or although the protagonist was described at the beginning and said that the protagonist is taciturn, the author's subsequent verbal description of the protagonist did not reflect this. It is difficult for people to feel that the protagonist has dragon blood and the kind of blood sorrow. There is also a grasp of the power system. A little humble opinion, if there is anything wrong with the opinions I put forward, the author does not have to accept them. I just raised some questions in good faith. I hope the author writes better.

The first-generation species should have the strength of third-generation divine bodies, especially those at the level of the Black King, who have at least the peak strength of the third-generation divine bodies. Even the junior ones of the fourth-generation divine bodies cannot compare with Kesha's fourth-generation sacred body, but there is no need to be so cautious. Except for the three angel kings and the fart god Karl, they are almost as strong as other gods. As long as the third generation of the dragon family has a dragon body, it can use torpedoes to perform torpedo explosions in the stomach (the dragon in the blazing dawn is not Samson, the one that was cut in half), and the dragon king actually has a certain degree of immortality. As long as the eggs are left in advance, it will not die. Of course it is incomparable with the sacred atom, but it is much stronger than the other three generations of divine bodies. And there should be no problem with the third-generation divine body receiving a nuclear explosion. After all, the Dragon King has several Word Spirits that are almost the same as nuclear explosions. It cannot be said that the Dragon King will die after releasing the Word Spirit. Therefore, it is speculated that the Dragon King can receive a nuclear explosion, so my level classification is roughly as follows

I feel like I'm at a loss. Now I can't think of anything that can save this book other than turning it into an unlimited stream.

I thought it was an Eastern dragon, but who knew it was a Western lizard?

I find that those who write about super gods always like genes, which carry some myths. It seems like forces that don't use fantasy writing can't survive in this world. Can't you just write about genes?

What kind of crap did you do, I thought that sister was just a tool when she came out,... Bye bye

She thought that the protagonist would accept Yan, but who knew that Ge Xiaolun could not fly when she opened her wings, and the protagonist actually asked Yan to kiss her. To be honest, Ge Xiaolun and Zhao Xin are completely unworthy of Yan and Zhi Xin. It would be better for Yan to be single than to send Ge Xiaolun away.

Looking at the front, I thought you could become a god... Looking at the back, thank you, let alone the way to god, you have directly poisoned the god.

When I saw that the author created King Bai, I suddenly had an idea, wouldn't it be enough to just make King Bai the heroine? 😏😏

Come on, come on, at this pace, the writing is very good, but it's too little, not enough to read.

I can see how tangled your writing is. It's normal to not write well about emotional dramas. There are not many online writers who can write well, and they are not flattering if they do. They just believe some crazy things and open up several emotional lines, and then they can't control it.

The trailer for Xiong 3 has been released. I'm very disappointed after watching the trailer. The new director is really rubbish. Everything from dubbing to modeling has basically been changed. The original sci-fi genre has become a commercial money-making genre. Apart from the same name, the plot and characters are all different.

Is the dragon a Western lizard, or a flower grower's dragon? ?

The protagonist is trash. He is obviously a dragon but he says he is a human. He is still thinking like a child. He is not worthy of the dragon bloodline.

It's too poisonous. What are you writing? There is a high demon and a low demon. What is the highlight of this book? The book also explains how powerful the protagonist will be, and also forcibly changes the setting of Takahara Tsumugi. Although it is written by a fan, it does not respect the setting of Hara Tsumugi at all. This is disgusting

I saw someone trying poison, saying they were giving away their daughter? ? Who are you sending it to, guys?

Is the heroine Bai Ling? How did the author think that the original heroine Angel Three Kings is not delicious?

I am sending you a novel about nvliu, so those who come after you should be careful!

The protagonist should not be called Yingchen, but Yingdang (lewd)

The combat power of dragons is just that, don't you think? Caesar can't beat the polar bear 🤭🤭

A good novel setting has been badly written by you. This is no longer a problem of writing style. I suggest you not write such fan novels in the future. It is a waste of setting.

In the early stage, I occasionally got poisoned and didn't care about it. I didn't expect that when the chronic poison accumulated to a peak, there would be another violent one.

The Dragon Clan is in the Super Seminary. The author's layout is too small. He should write about the Three Thousand Demon Gods of Chaos Avenue in the Super Seminary.