Douluo: Random Items Dropped

Generally speaking, the writing is very confusing, and the dialogue and plot are very stiff, so I won't say anything about it. Who is Tang San? A time-travel reborn person who has lived for so long in his previous life, how can he get along like this? He has the same mind as a little kid, and when he went home to see Tang Hao, he showed that he was a twin martial soul in the presence of the protagonist? Tang San and Tang Hao just acquiesced? Also, when Tang San was forging iron, he would let the protagonist just watch, directly demonstrate his martial arts, and then inexplicably reach the maximum level? ...(How could an outsider watch the series of time that the father and son spent getting along so well?) There is also the matter of picking up the Blue Silver Emperor's bloodline. You awaken and become the Blue Silver Emperor as soon as you are full. Why is Tang Hao a Titled Douluo? Won't he notice? As for Tang Hao, the "youngest Titled Douluo", the one with the ninth soul skill of the ninety-second level Titled Douluo, are you kidding me? And knowing that the protagonist is the Blue Silver Grass martial spirit, will there be any suspicion when another Clear Sky Hammer martial spirit appears? Moreover, twin martial souls must be innately full of soul power. Everyone with a higher status knows this, so why do they just accept disciples? Wouldn't you just accept a disciple like this if you wonder where he came from? And what did you teach about being a disciple? You just took up this identity, okay... Leaved Tang San's house later, went out to use the things he picked up, and then went directly to the Star Dou Forest without saying goodbye to anyone? Tang Hao can rest assured that he will go? When I met the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm... I didn't want to say anything, but I really thought I didn't see some of your Electrolux appear and enter the sea of ​​consciousness, right? Just say it in such an understatement? There is also Xiao Wu's worry about picking up something later, and Xiao Wu's greed. Is this just to make up for the word count? What's the use? Then you can pick it up. Why didn't you pick up Tang Hao's joy and other emotions when he was at Tang San's house? And the soul ring she obtained... Is Xiao Wu that easy to deceive? One Hundred Thousand Years of Soul Beast Chemistry, brother, why did you write it as mentally retarded... And that soul beast... The attribute of barbarism, well, there is no one else, and you explained it yourself later... It's really... It's better not to explain... Overall, the writing is incomprehensible, suitable for elementary school students, and not interesting

I tried to use those beautiful sentences to describe you, but it didn't work. I carefully wrote a long paragraph word by word, and the way your eyebrows sparkled made me feel, no, these words cannot describe the stars in your eyes, or the spring breeze at the corner of your lips, and no word can match your amazement.

The author, the place where Tang San obtained the spirit ring was the forest of soul beasts kept captive in the Spirit Hall. In the original book, there was a forest where the master showed the Spirit Hall sign and entered. It was not the Star Dou Forest. The master had to be brave enough to take Tang San to the Star Dou Forest by himself.

What the hell can't you write? Just be honest and don't add random things. I'm too tired to read the messy stuff. The author must be a newbie and doesn't know anything.

What kind of wine makes you think Qian Renxue is shy? Such a scheming woman with full Gongdou attributes. If it weren't for Tang San, she would be the emperor. You actually think she is shy. As long as there are a few peanuts, I won't drink like this.

It's a bit outrageous. Picking up blood and martial souls at the beginning is a bit too strong. Is there anything left to play with Liufu and Five Dragons at the beginning? Moreover, Blue Silver Emperor + Clear Sky Hammer + Chaotic Cloak + Tang Hao, will Yu Xiaogang also be added? Does it look familiar? What's the point of following the original path like this? The idea of ​​​​hanging is quite good, but if it is too strong, it will be difficult to keep it from falling apart later, and it will be difficult to retain readers if it follows the original path. . . Come on, author, slip away.

Has the author ever considered what the first ten thousand year soul ring is in the eyes of others? Qian Renxue didn't even have your dio, but she was exposed openly and openly. Don't you think she died quickly enough?

Enough is enough, don't have too many heroines This pair of heroines is enough.

Do you know why I read this novel? ? ! Because the heroine is Xiao Wu! !

When you pop up like Blue Silver Haotian, it is no longer random 😅😅

I haven't read it yet, but your profile should be pretty good.

A female protagonist feels too... Anyway, I don't know why. She just fights for the original female characters who had tragic fates, and doesn't want to leave any regrets. You can also call me LSP, but I just feel regretful! As many as you can! I read the fanfic just to make up for the regrets of the original work! Otherwise, who will see it! Stallion and harem, the only difference is whether there is emotional foreshadowing!

How can I put it, everyone has watched Douluo fandom too much, and when they see Xiao Wu and Meng Yiran as the heroines, they have no desire to continue watching.

When I clicked on it and saw the bloodline of the Blue Silver Emperor, I was immediately persuaded to leave. I felt disgusted if I had the same bloodline as Tang San.

Why is the heroine a rogue bunny again? 😳

He once called Hometown

Shocking, updated! Come on!

Okay, this picture

Baisi Xiaowuyyds

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It should be ghostwritten. The front is Douluo Continent, and the back is Skeleton? The evil soul master slaughtered the city? And Bibi Dong went to Notting to rob people? I looked confused.

Reading this book is like a eunuch, and you can't continue writing until chapter 69? It was updated three days ago! !

I don't understand what's going on in the current plot. What's going on in the plot after arriving at Wuhun Palace?

How does the plot feel stitched together?