Koi Boss Makes Money in Survival Game

Damn, it's logical. The female protagonist meets the male protagonist three times in different copies and she thinks he's an NPC? !

If you plagiarize the plot of a foreign movie, I will treat you as a fan. I don't want to say anything! . . . Let's just say that the characters you wrote are really full of holes! The game settings are also illogical! Inexplicable development! The writing is not refreshing, and the writing on love is also very thin. . . Quite disappointed! This is a waste of time!

There is no logic. The heroine just got the mouse-avoiding beads before, but after the mice came, she didn't remember anything at all. She only remembered some snake medicine. They're all in the same chapter, my memory is so short.

I read a little bit, but there are too many unreasonable parts in the plot, the logic of the story is too poor, and the writing style is full of loopholes and childish. The author is suitable for writing love cookies. It is true that not everyone can write an unlimited flow. Infinite flow is a test of the author's knowledge reserve. If you don't have some life experience, you really can't write well.

Did the author publish half of each chapter? Sometimes it feels like it's over before I even finish reading.

Come on, come on, the article is very good