I Loaded up the Life Makeover Game

No, right? If you were stabbed by a thief on the bus, you still need to spend your own money to be hospitalized? Is the country fake?

It's uncomfortable to watch, and it's more like venting one's emotions in a systematic article. Love seems to be all on the surface. However, in my opinion, it is definitely not the case. If you want to get love, you must never give in, even if you are alone. No one in the article is likable. This is very abnormal. It is recommended that young people don't read it.

The protagonist is too cowardly and unlikable. Without the cheats, he is no better than an ordinary person.

In fact, I feel like the first few chapters are a bit discouraging. .

It is simply inexplicable whether there are so many boring branch lines and places in Qi Feng Fu Hui. Qi Feng felt a little sick. Who would care about such a character's father? Moreover, it was against the rules for a person with such a personality to commit suicide. When I went to Fu Hui's place, it was even more dizzying, and it felt like it was completely out of character. I kept reading and saw what happened to Fu Hui's family, and I forgot that there was such a person. How many chapters did the protagonist inexplicably chat with the boss lady whom he had interacted with once? Then a soap opera started there. I really had a question mark all over my head, and instantly turned into a middle-aged Mary Sue in a Korean drama 😅

I hope the author will write about the charm and high-spiritedness of the male protagonist when he is not in debt, otherwise it will feel strange to see Rao Xuehui liking the male protagonist so much.

I just want to be poisoned even if I eat dog food. This is the first time I have seen an author who can play such a bad hand at cards. If you want to eat sweets, run away, this author is poisonous.

In fact, I am a senior student. I usually have a common language and the senior students in the same club are nice. I think it is the kind of normal love. The plot design is that the male protagonist was violently raped by Xuehui's brother in school and got a loan to save his father. I really can't accept it. The sense of involvement is too bad. Maybe people are just greedy. They want to have two female protagonists. The plot is bloody 😥

I think the heroine setting is extremely important in Qidian love stories. If the heroine setting is cute, cute, or tsundere, I really can't stand it. The more popular books are all tsundere, cuteness, and cute self-guides. They have no characteristics at all and are not attractive at all. The characters of Rao Xuehui and Jiang Zhi are quite good. I can only say that the author has limited ability, so support as much as you can.

It's not very comfortable to watch, it's frustrating, and I kind of want to give up.

Are you sure this isn't a dog-licking system? 🙂

It's well written, but I don't know why my grades are so bad. I won't offend people. The reasons for criticizing are all kinds of weird.

It feels like the protagonists in this kind of novel are all burdened with huge debts

Alas, I might be disappointed if I go back for revenge like an ordinary one, but I will only feel that it is not well written here. But if I just put it down like this, I can only regret deleting the book. How can I put it, I feel that if I write it like this, I will completely lose sight of it after reading it, just like there is a thorn in it. Every time I think about it, I feel that this is too far-fetched, even if I am rational. That's good, but as the protagonist, I always feel unworthy. That is, if there is no system, the protagonist will be miserable after being bullied. According to the text, he may die. Now that there is a system, I put it down so plainly. I really feel that it is not worth it before. Come on, maybe I don't like this, but I still wish you a bright future.

After reading the previous chapters, I just wanted to say that the male protagonist is a dog licker. You can come in and take a look Before discussing, let me clarify my definition of the word "dog licker", so as not to talk about it. Dog licking refers to one party's independent contribution (including material and emotional) to the other party in the relationship without asking for anything in return. As a result, there is no feedback and he is kept hanging. This is what I understand as dog licking Then let's look at the male protagonist of this book. Does the male protagonist lick the female protagonist? Just because he helps the heroine run errands and buy things? Help the hostess cook? Just by looking at these words, many readers will be misled into thinking that the male protagonist is a licker. But looking back at the definition I just gave, does the male protagonist do these things spontaneously? Isn't it? It's because of paying back the money. To put it simply, this is a transaction. You give me money and I do the work. I get dozens of yuan to run errands and several hundred yuan to cook a meal. Isn't this something that normal people can do? You can't even get such a high remuneration. Speaking of which, the male protagonist is the one who takes advantage Then, reading the book friends in the back can see that the female protagonist is actually the one who never gets feedback, the "humble" party. Because of the male protagonist's self-esteem and past experience, even though the female protagonist has done so many things despite her awkward personality, the male protagonist has not given her clear feedback (although the latest chapter has been published). Looking at it this way, who is licking whom? The most speechless ones are those who read a chapter or two and said licking when they saw the male protagonist helping the female protagonist to buy things and cook. How sensitive must this be? Don't say this is a plot in a book, even in your real-life interpersonal relationships, these trivial matters are inevitable, right? Do you really pursue male chauvinism and can only accept a woman kneeling down and licking you in a low voice? No novels are written like this!

This system task has no effect.

The author's writing style is good, but the narrative logic is very problematic. Every event feels illogical. If the logic of events is strengthened, it will be a good book. There are logical problems with Xiaoyue's experience and the racing incident. After Xiaoyue's experience and incident were written, the character came to life, but the author did not express the character's personality. The reason is that his behavior and personality were abrupt. The racing incident that follows feels like it will ruin the heroine's character. I only see it here now. I subscribe first and leave a message later.

No, how could he become like this after being raised for so long? The protagonist turned into a scumbag without any warning. The author wouldn't want to create a plot where the relationship between the two parties is in place and then explodes, right? How does this end? Although I don't like urban harems, it's not impossible to deal with it, but I don't see the author's ability to wrap up the story at all. . .

Remember, this is not a cool article. If you want to read a cool article, please go around. Remember, the male protagonist is immature, same as above. Remember, the characters in the book are all different and none of them ends the same. Remember, this book is a daily novel I look forward to the male protagonist moving towards the light, and I also hope that your character portrayal can be more in-depth. Come on, I will be the first to write a daily novel.

It doesn't work anymore. It gets messier and messier as we go to the back. I wrote a lot of messy things. , And why has the protagonist become a scumbag, scumbag, the senior is so good to you. The conscience was eaten by the dog. .

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Already fully ordered Rarely witty Delicate characters Ups and downs of the plot Full world Everyday warmth Fresh writing A rare and good article, I haven't seen such an article in a long time I hope the author can persevere 😚

Beautiful man

I just saw the latest chapter. It's well written. I hope I can keep it up without cutting it.