Shenhao Starts from the Salted Fish System

After reading the book "The Male God", there are many unreasonable things. I hope the boss can avoid the same pitfalls. All the women who appear are above 90, otherwise the rarity of beauties above 90 cannot be highlighted. Don't have too many beauties, and if you include them, it doesn't matter if you don't include them. If you include too many heroines and supporting characters, the emotional drama will not be delicate. If you don't include them, it will feel like giving away girls, which will make many readers disgusted and not watch it. Don't show up with Bai Fumei. Bai Fumei who can make you a scumbag has no idea how much you have, and a clean one will not look down on your money or the character of the protagonist.

After reading only a few chapters, the protagonist and the system have to talk about thousands of words. Compared with the intelligent system, the Shenhao type of non-intelligent system feels better, so as not to look like a murderer.

The young man's mindless narcissism! A high school student has a fart temperament! Have you ever flown airplanes and cannons, are you tired of eating delicacies from all over the world, or is your family a big family? A man's charm and appearance are the least important. No one except the ignorant girl takes appearance seriously!

Shanghai is not that good either, with traffic jams, crowded subways, and Huang Meitian. There is also an environment of constant comparison and high housing prices.

Being the class president in college is not a good look. Many Shenhao novels are about being forced to be the class president.

I have read more than a hundred chapters and tell me how I feel so far 1. There is a problem with the character setting of the protagonist, who is both responsible and independent. You can refer to the second point in this regard 2. The character Su Yaoyao has a lot of space and is written about a deep love. She transferred to another school for the protagonist (not to mention how difficult it is to transfer to another university), but she was rejected many times. In the end, I was even forced to go abroad, and almost pushed into the arms of others. The key protagonist usually touches the head and hugs (the hug may be a hug, but does not refuse), and usually keeps chatting. The reason for not accepting it is just that I don't want to be a coward. In addition, the two heroines Lin and Li are both made with money. They co-wrote this protagonist. Just love the green tea scum girl and the gold digger, then don't write about Su from the beginning 3. The author has too many narrations about the inner drama of the protagonist throughout the book. When reading a book, you should read the plot and the characters. The narration of the inner drama can be appropriate, but not too much. This is not a chicken soup novel, nor is it a one-man show 4. The plot is a bit sloppy, and it is a brilliant novel. It's a common problem. As you write, it becomes more and more like a running account. It's too easy to get money. The plot progresses too fast and is fake. The characters are a bit flat and unattractive. I've said a lot. I may have to withdraw this book, but I still hope the author will work hard. It's not easy to find a good book. It's even harder to write a good book. Come on.

When you see someone running for squad leader, if you don't want to be the protagonist, don't reject it directly. As a powerful person, you may start a business later, and you don't have time to be a squad leader, and you don't need to be. This is a waste of time.

The introduction of the main character persuades him to quit. A man weighs 110 pounds. Are you kidding me?

The beginning is okay, but it would be better if the protagonist doesn't farm money too quickly. It's not easy to ride. Don't have too many women, just three or five are enough, otherwise the heroine's writing won't be delicate. When it comes to bread, I am a male god, but when it comes to coke, I just want to be a quiet and powerful person. The plots and emotional scenes in these two books are well written. Come on, author, keep an eye on you.

The system is just a tool for people, it's just a reason for plug-ins, no one wants to look at the system,

No wonder my grades are so bad. I deliberately wrote an intelligent system to make up the word count. When I went to a hotel, I copied the hotel's Baidu Encyclopedia...

No need to watch it, there is more talk about the system than the plot.

Why write the character Su? If you write it but don't accept it, don't you tell readers to stop reading it?

Li Xinyi

Shenhaowen, are you giving away your daughter? I'm convinced, you're a great writer😫. Fortunately, I read the comments first.

Less verbose nonsense, it will affect your mood too much.

To be honest, the system can talk and your grades won't improve.

If the system talks a lot, no one will read it. It talks a lot in the first few chapters, but then it disappears. When people come in, they see that the system is running away!

After reading a few chapters, this system talks too much. The weirdest thing is that the protagonist actually quarreled with the system! The two people quarreled in the street for a long time. If it is water, the word count is not necessary. It will make people look annoying. I can write two chapters for playing League of Legends. The key descriptions are still very messy. It slipped away.

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Why do so many books of this majestic genre contain eunuchs?

The system is so smart that it makes me feel like it is a robot...

At the beginning, I was envious when I saw the sports car, but it didn't matter when I got the 1 coupon... Doesn't the author feel contradictory? ? ?

Author, believe me, if Yaoyao in your novel really has another boyfriend, the male protagonist will feel uncomfortable! Because the nature of a man is to possess🤫🤫🤫

When I saw the school recruitment, I immediately became furious! Sorry to bother you, but luckily I didn't order it.

Don't look at it, it's poisonous, it's about a childhood sweetheart, and all kinds of abuse

I don't know what is written. Maybe my head is wet and I can't understand it.

There is no emotion at all. It is really written in a way that is too impersonal and the setting is suitable for gods.