Entering the Entertainment Industry from Taohuawu

I read the latest chapter in one go and had mixed emotions. On the one hand, the author is simply a breath of fresh air in entertainment novels. There is no pretentiousness and no malice toward celebrity artists. There is no plot to deliberately portray him as a buffoon and then let the protagonist pretend to be a slap in the face. Just simply shoot a variety show together, make some insults to each other, help smooth things over, and act as a porter when it's time to perform talent shows. Frankly speaking, this is what attracts me. I'd love to see this develop. But this is also the problem. The latest chapter of the story seems peaceful. It's all about dialogue between characters, and it's tiring to watch. Do you say there is a conflict? There are also cases, such as Meng Ziyi's low emotional intelligence, which caused the protagonist to choke on her a few words, but it did not constitute a "conflict" in the online article at all, and it failed to guide the readers' emotions. The author tried to make the character of the protagonist orphan a conflict-creating point, but changed it back in the next chapter. In fact, there is no need to change it at all. Celebrities like the celebrities in this book may say the wrong things, do the wrong things, or have character flaws, but they are completely understandable and even appear real and lovely. Then creating a protagonist with some character flaws is an excellent setting that can cause dramatic conflicts and trigger the direction of the story. The current protagonist has a high emotional intelligence, can joke, can read people's eyes, can smooth things over for others, can take the initiative to apologize... It's so perfect, and it makes the plot peaceful. It would be better if the protagonist had the setting of the male star in the bakery. Because he was an orphan in both lives, he is introverted and reserved, but very sensitive. Because of the family situation of my adoptive parents, I have a somewhat please-pleaser personality. I don't know how to reject others, and I am also afraid of making others dislike me. Because of his sensitive personality, when others step on the thunder, he will explode. When faced with unspoken rules and the dark side, he becomes brave. (This kind of personality can cause conflicts and create excitement) He also knows that he has these problems, so he immerses himself in music and literary works and relies on art to heal himself. When he picked up the instrument and strummed the strings, his rich inner emotions surged out like a flood, and the songs sung along with the classics from his previous life touched everyone's heart. Moreover, after participating in variety shows, I made different friends and had different stories. He also gradually becomes mature and natural. (The character's growth arc is also there) In addition to the characters, the author also needs to strengthen the basic points of the text. The protagonist has copied five or six songs, but the appearance of these songs did not change the reader's emotions, nor did it affect the plot. The current model is: The guest said, we are going to perform a show. The guests asked the protagonist to sing. The protagonist sings, and the author simply copies a few lyrics. After singing, the guests praised: "Wow, it sounds so good." "Wow, it's so sweet." "This song sounds so lonely, I really feel sorry for you." Then it was gone. The responses from the guests were meager and meager, which made people feel uninterested. I really recommend the author to read some good books on copywriting to see how they designed similar passages. For example, the copied song just fits the scene at that time, such as why the protagonist chose this song, and what kind of story he had when he first listened to this song. How did the audience's mentality change before and after hearing this song, what moved them, etc. Finally, let's talk about the fatigue that the author brings to people when writing variety shows. In addition to the smooth writing of the story, a very important point is that from participating in the variety show to the latest chapter, it has always been narrated from one perspective. Other works of the same type know how to switch perspectives to give the audience a sense of freshness and pave the way for exciting moments. For example, the first five chapters are the story of the protagonist participating in a variety show and interacting with other people. Then switch to other guests' opinions on the protagonist and the show. Then the story continues, such as the conflict between the protagonist and Meng Ziyi. At this time, the perspectives and opinions of the program team such as the director and others (Director: Wow, this point can be revealed, I want to cut it into the feature film). After that, the time jumps to where the show has been broadcast, and the audience is watching this story, their reactions and comments. Then let's talk about the protagonist's new performance in the show and other people's new changes in it. Such a narrative can prevent readers from feeling tired, and can better play the role of each exciting point, making people look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. To sum up, on the one hand, I am attracted by the author's clear flow, and I want to see the author continue to write, so that the protagonist and my favorite stars can interact in the variety show I follow, without having to worry about my favorite stars becoming clowns who are pretended to be slapped in the face by the protagonist. On the one hand, I was a little tired because of the author's immature writing style. I hope that the author can be mature and sophisticated, but I am also afraid that the author will become an urban novice, which will make me lose my interest. With such complicated feelings, I wrote this lengthy article.

The first person to eat crabs, don't give up

As the title says. 1/Single heroine or multiple heroines? 2/Housewife choice? Characters that have already appeared: "Zhou" Many readers mentioned: "Zhang Zifeng" Or if you have other candidates, you can also comment!

Author, tell me, which variety show even has a camera in the bathroom?

After reading Chapter 63, a family ethics drama about graduating from the Qidian Orphanage and the return of an adopted son, a Mary Sue idol drama about a male Mary Sue who has beauties vying to fall in love with you while you are playing games and chatting. Brother, your target reader group is older sisters over 40 years old, or underage girls under 16 years old...

Although I feel very unhappy, the author should not be affected and do not change the heroine.

Let me talk briefly about some of my own opinions. I hope the author has time to read it. As for the heroine: I recommend Yamaya CP as the single heroine. First of all, this is a realistic Chinese entertainment novel. It is impossible to start a harem or something, and it will disappear easily. Moreover, it is difficult to write if there are too many heroines, and the emotional lines are too messy. The CP of Yamaya written in the current chapter is really good. The girl is quite pretty, and she seems to be very popular among the public. I haven't heard any shady information. Before reading this book, I didn't know this person and I didn't watch this variety show. After reading the novel, I searched it out and found it to be okay. I think most people have their first love, Bai Yueguang, in their hearts. Isn't the description in the book the pure love we yearn for? As for the male protagonist: I have seen that many book friends have complained about the bad writing about the family. The male protagonist's character has changed too much. What about the family? I feel that it is normal to write like this. After all, it is a different soul. One was an orphan at the beginning and then gradually became the soul of Neptune. The personality is definitely different, but the change is too sudden. At first, when I read the previous description, I thought that the soul of the original owner and the soul that traveled through time merged to form a new character. However, it suddenly changed later and I felt very uncomfortable. It felt like it was written by two people. In terms of songs: It is recommended not to choose songs that are too niche. Most people have never heard of them, or they think they don't sound good and may cause disagreements. Niche means that these songs are not popular, few people listen to them, and they are liked by young people. It doesn't necessarily mean it's not good to listen to. If there are some good songs, you can recommend them. I personally like music very much 🙂 I have thought of some suitable songs now. After I determine the heroine, they are suitable, such as "Unparalleled Beauty", "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze", "If There is an Afterlife", "Sweet", "Garden Party", "Simple Love", "Qili Xiang", "Maltose", "Daoxiang", "Confession Balloon" and "Her Eyelashes", "Tornado", "Lovely Woman", Shan Ye CP Yan Tian Other songs "Anheqiao", later you can include "Ms. Dong", then "Hello Tomorrow", "Those Flowers", later Pu Shu's Xu Wei's songs can be included, in the early stage I recommend some songs by Jay Chou, few young people can stand it, JJ Lin and Leehom Wang are also very good, three great talents yyds. Just a few sad and desperate songs in the early stage are enough, but they are always easy to disgust people. After all, not everyone (in the book or outside the book) likes it, and there are no real top singers or songwriters in this type of songs, so the single style is unacceptable. In terms of variety shows: I don't have any suggestions. I will stop watching TV series and variety shows after 13 years. In the past two years, I have watched several episodes of "Tucao Conference" and "Talk Show Conference", and I have watched some clips from some popular variety shows, such as Running Man, Extreme Challenge, Ace and so on. In terms of film and television: After the songs and people become popular, you can first act in some TV series, and then make some movies. Step by step, film, television, song and variety shows will develop in an all-round way, harvesting popularity and establishing a position. Finally, I would like to make some immature suggestions. The current timeline is 21 years! If you write like this, the time will be synchronized quickly. What should you write next? Create some original variety shows, movies and TV shows? It's good to write it well, but if it's not written well, it's easy to lose readers. In fact, you can set that some film and television variety shows will not appear. For example, it is written in 2021, but in fact it can be written from 2016 or 2017.

In the end, he died 😒

So little. It's a bit unsightly. Come on, author, please add more chapters and your seed will explode!

Isn't Shanye CP good? Isn't it good to be a single-minded person? There are too many cheating on Neptune in reality. If there are more female protagonists, I won't watch it.

After reading three chapters, "Food and grass are not counted", three chapters were written about loneliness, "Mysterious Writing", and three chapters were completed when writing a 15-minute plot for a variety show?

If you don't know how to write about family drama, just brush it off. It looks very awkward and even many people can't stand it.

The author had too many ideas and divided the character of the protagonist into ✍🏻. At first he wanted to adopt a Buddhist character design, but then he became a little bit blind. The adoptive parents had their own children and felt that it was a bit difficult for a not-rich family to raise two children. Then he felt that the adoptive parents were not good to him. This! ! ! !

The pace is too fast, there is no sense of immersion, and it feels like it will collapse in the later stage. It is a first-rate account.

The protagonist's family background is really a bit poisonous. Even if he is an orphan, he still has such a poisonous adoptive father and relatives. If the author does not control it well, the readers will run away 😅😅

After reading Chapter 55, I personally feel that the protagonists in the two plots of Taohuawu and Tianlaizhiyin are not the same person. They are too different before and after, and it looks awkward. Moreover, the plot twist is also very blunt, and it feels like conflicts are created for the sake of deliberately creating conflicts.

Is this protagonist a love brain? ? ? Why is it written as a young boy 😂 Can't you be more mature? If you fall in love, you won't care about anything.

The subject matter is quite good. I just had some problems with writing the variety show part, but I can still watch it. I went home and started the plot. The characters are disgusting, including the main character. I want to persevere because of the subject matter, but it's so fucking disgusting that I can't.

He should have entered the palace 😰

Damn it. . . What is this? What is this?

In fact, the author's writing is quite good, the writing is relatively fluent, and there are no obvious poisonous points. It is higher than most of the current writers in China Entertainment. It's a pity that I didn't stick to it. I can continue to write the next one, and there should be more readers to support it.

As long as you continue to write at your level, you'll be fine with a monthly ticket of one or two thousand. The most important thing is persistence and accumulation.

I just want to know how many updates a day? Also, will it enter the palace? How to set this update speed?

Even the names of the people in the novel are homophones of real people's names, which shows how much the author is writing. Farewell

How come you become a eunuch when you insist on writing even though your author is not as good as you?

I haven't watched this show, so I can't understand it.

Is anti-theft enabled in every chapter? …..

How is the book? Can I give you a fair review?

The first three chapters made me dizzy.

The writing in this book is really terrible. Everything is copied according to the program, and there are many typos. You are just playing the variety show Speech Recognition!