Traveling Through Douluo for One Minute, Yu Xiaogang Is Gone

The writing is good, but some details should be paid attention to. If you get the favorability of the Golden Iron Triangle, then the protagonist must have appeared in their memories before and fought with them, so the protagonist's age should not be 17 years old. Bibi Dong's Hao Shilu is definitely not at the full level. After all, he was injured once by Yu Xiaogang, and Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang are almost the same age, so there is a discrepancy in age, which makes it a little uncomfortable to watch.

I'm just a shitty person, so I wanted to read the introduction, but I just clicked on the comment section. Now it makes me so panicked. I want to watch but I am afraid of being poisoned to death! ! !

I have read more than 100 chapters, but I don't think it can be considered fan fiction. There are too many poisonous points in pure YY novels, but I guess most people will become addicted after reading more than ten chapters. The aloof characters of Bibi Dong and Zhu Zhuqing are not written at all. From the beginning to the end, the female protagonist falls in love with the male protagonist after seeing it. I am addicted.

It's really poisonous. It's better to dig up mines and then plant them yourself. It's better to stick to the original setting. By seizing it, do you want to prove how deeply Bibi Dong and Liu Erlong feel about Dashu? What does the protagonist have? Everything is stolen through the system. Should the heroine marry someone else and have a baby, then steal an identity and become the father?

It's so damn poisonous, so I'll deal with it forcefully.

A novel that is motivated by lust and deeply prejudiced. It has too many poisonous points and transcends the protagonist's invincible self-confidence. Bad reviews.

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? ? ? Author, you don't write anymore

I got into the trap from Dou Po. I have read all the books written by Long Yue. Maybe because I am the same age and have written books, I can understand better. It is really difficult to keep writing a book and keep it interesting. Some people say that there are too many emotional scenes. I think in fact, I just come to read cool articles. I want to read more abused ones. One dies in one chapter. It is not easy for this book to be updated. I have joined the group and come on (ง •̀_•́)ง🙂

It's a little bit toxic. How can you tell others about your level when you come up?

Let me ask first, is Bibi Dong here cleaner?

To be honest, it looks so embarrassing. The first picture I saw was very embarrassing. It was even more embarrassing when I saw it later.

I couldn't bear it anymore. After reading three chapters, I got poisonous. I lay in bed for a long time and couldn't come back to my senses. How could there be such a poisonous book? I thought I was immune to all poisons, but I still got poisonous. So I ran away first.

The lady is so beautiful 🤭🤭😍😍😍😍😆😆😆😆 Please update! ! ! !

Can the emotional scenes be shortened? Is it too long? Are there a few people left reading your book who don't have a clue? Even if the drugs are gone, you still make a shitty amount of money? Gone

The protagonist transforms into a humanoid dog Teddy, and the protagonist looks like a stallion. TMB and paratroopers recommended this book and I was convinced.

It's pretty cool, brother, come on💪💪💪

Those who knew it thought you were writing Douluo, and those who didn't know thought you were writing a love story! In the third chapter, you wrote about meeting Flanders. Don't you think it's too long before you meet Ma Hongjun in more than fifty chapters? Will it take more than 2,000 chapters to finish your book?