The Arrogant Sun of Spell

It is recommended that the author not write China's combat power too high, otherwise the combat power system will easily collapse in the later stage. You can leave them with one or two weaknesses, such as not having the ability to use spells and so on. Don't write too many special-level numbers. In the original work, there were only a few special-level cursed spirits in the Shibuya Incident. It is a bit unreasonable for the protagonist to kill several special-level cursed spirits in Japan in a month. The appearance of the gods is the beginning of the collapse of the novel's combat power, so don't write the gods' strength too high. Write it as requiring multiple superpowers to join forces to defeat the best. It is impossible to think of gods as super powerful magic tools created by ancient magicians by reversing the principles of magic.

Don't just start copying the main plot as soon as you hit it. They're all here to see you write a book. To put it mildly, it's authentic, but if it's not nice, it's just a copy of the plot 🥵

Fool, if you follow the sun, you won't have any weaknesses.

After reading it, the setting is quite interesting and I have a taste for it, but the emotional scene between the heroine and the protagonist is too rushed. I have already written it before and there is nothing I can do about it. I suggest that the development be slow in the future. I have only watched the anime, but I have not read the manga. As far as anime is concerned, such a strong female character has very strong self-control and willpower. The two of them should not feel in love with each other as soon as they open their hearts. It can only be said that they have a good impression. I think we should start with friends first, and then describe some daily life and go out to do tasks and fights. The two of them are slowly getting closer. Maybe just let the heroine appear later. Now you can also decide on the heroine first, and then slowly add the two of them to the plot later. But it is really too hasty at the beginning. Too many books are ruined by emotional dramas, and either there is no one, or they are pushed aside. It is really difficult to write a single heroine. First of all, she can't Boring readers, you have to have your own personality, not a vase, even a vase can't hold back the protagonist, and the heroine with a bloody plot. Anyway, I think this book is well written so far, and the setting of the protagonist is also quite interesting. Come on, update soon.

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Although this setting is secondary, it is quite touching. However, I feel that the death of a family member would be better as an interlude. Putting it at the beginning may dissuade some people.

I don't understand why it conflicts with the setting of the original work. In the original work, Japan's curse masters and curse spirits are the strongest in the world, but they are not always strong. Only after the appearance of Roku-eyes do old enemies such as the leaky pots appear, including the curse masters. After the birth of the six eyes, the strength of the curse masters also increased. Once this setting is not limited to Japan, and there are 7 billion people in the world, how many ghosts and monsters will there be? Can the world view be maintained?

Protagonist (self-thought)

The raised gesture is proof of victory, and its back expresses the word "strongest"

Protagonist

There is nothing wrong with the sky and curse you set up to be arrogant during the day, but what the hell are you doing at night? Transform into a weak and shy boy? Adult time traveler! Also, the previous interactions with my family and sister were not like this, right? If you want to write like this, you might as well not add a time-travel setting. Would someone who can get along with his family like this have such a personality? ? ?

How should I put it? There is no need to specifically mention fantasy. Since it is a spell, at least there should be no major changes before keeping up with the original plot. This time, our country's fantasy gods are involved again. How should I put it, suddenly it feels a bit nondescript. . . At least it feels weird to me personally.

. . Updated a year ago Damn it, it's so hard to find someone with the power of Sin of Pride

The sun explodes because it won't go out. 😒 Why does it have a dark night mode?

Author: Did you know that the light of the moon is the light of the sun? The moon won't shine

Although the residual fire sword itself is very domineering, sin of pride should use a more domineering weapon instead of the sword, and the divine ax Rhitta is perfect. You can also refer to the Fire Flame moves of the Underworld Warrior.

I feel that the character design has collapsed, the emotional scenes were written too hastily and awkwardly, and the original part about the flower grower and the origin of the protagonist are somewhat taken for granted. There is no need to rush to write your original work before the main plot of the curse has been developed. Judging from the way you write it, it seems that you don't want to write a short story, it can be more detailed. Come on, after all, I am a bad reader, and I still hope that the author can bring me more happiness. Some parts really made me happy after all.

Escanor's arrogance is natural, and the protagonist's arrogance seems to be deliberately faked, which is disgusting.

When I first read this book, I seemed to have updated dozens of chapters and forgot why I had abandoned it for some reason. Recently, the sequel to the curse has become very popular. I also suddenly thought about looking for some fans of the curse to read. I found this book based on my vague memory. After a closer look, it was already broken and smelly.

Afterwards, I felt something was wrong when I played god games until my sister claimed to be Amaterasu. She didn't even see it and just collapsed The author failed to control the difference between his own obscenity and writing. After letting himself go, the world view of the work itself could not bear the overexpansion of power. In fact, the world of full-form magic with a sword like fire cannot bear it. I set restrictions in the early stage and thought that the author had a number. It turned out that there was no B number at all.