Douluo's Contract Talisman

This book is a tribute to the master and Tang San. If you don't want to read it, please leave. I will discard it first out of respect 🙂

I can understand Master Bai, but if you take Xiao Wu with you, are you betting that Tang Hao won't be killed? In the original work, because of the relationship between Xiao Wu and Tang San, Tang Hao might want to keep it for his son. If you do this, you will bet that Tang Hao is merciful and soft-hearted.

So you take Xiao Wu to Notting City to deliver soul bones to Tang Hao? You are already gifted with so much soul power, why don't you find a school where you can show off your talents? Besides, in the mid-term, you can't go to Soto City Shrek to get jelly grass? Do you have to follow others in the early stage? What do you not know about Tang San? Still licking the master? Perhaps the only useful thing about the master is not the ability to identify soul beasts? After setting up this point, wouldn't it be enough for Xiao Wu to find any force?

First of all, there are no eunuchs! No eunuch! No eunuch! There have been no extra updates in the past two days because the company is working overtime. Tomorrow the company will catch some fish and make up for the fourth update! ! ! Then I read the comment area and wanted to explain some things in the book. The first one is the question of worshiping a master. I originally considered that worshiping a master is due to two factors. One is that a newbie is starting to write. It will not be too unfamiliar to write like this, and it is easier to practice writing in the early stage. The second is to reflect traveling into a real world. In the early stage, the protagonist will not consider contacting Wuhun Temple or Poseidon Island because of Wuhun issues. So for the protagonist, who is an ordinary civilian but has some ambition to become a god, Master and Shrek are the best choices. One is his own personal connections, and the other is the personal connections among the Shrek Seven Monsters. As for the master's knowledge or character, [you can refer to my pinned post about explaining how to become a master]. In terms of knowledge, if you are really in such a world of Douluo, then I think novels alone cannot fully reflect it. You can't feel it just by relying on the knowledge of Tang San's soul beasts. It might be some training details, it might be some knowledge and insights on the mainland, or it might even be a meditation practice. But because Tang San already had the technique but didn't use it, there are various possibilities that the original work didn't mention it. My opinion is that since so many senior soul masters recognize the master, then he has more or less accumulated knowledge of his own, which gives him more advantages than ordinary teachers in other soul master academies. There is no question of heinous character. I think the biggest black spot is probably his unfaithful relationship with Liu Erlong. This book assumes that they are platonic. If you really can't accept it, I can only apologize! ! ! I've written it all down to this point, and when I go back and change it, I feel like it's too troublesome to reset the protagonist's growth path! ! There was too much opposition, so I could only try to reduce the presence of the master in the subsequent descriptions] The second is the issue of plot. I considered this at first because I considered myself a novice, and I was worried that I would not be able to control the original plot when I first started. I followed the plot in the early stage to familiarize myself with the writing method. Later, after the Soul Master Competition, I started to follow the original plot after we separated. Of course, I will also write some different plots in the early stage. The third problem is Tang San. It is not worth making friends with Tang San, for example, the master was left behind. To be honest, through the description of the Shrek Seven Devils in the original work, San Shao obviously wanted to portray a serious and rigorous protagonist who values ​​love and justice. However, his own settings were not rigorous and he was serious about cheating. Later, he became an evil soul master and left the master behind. Anyway, when I followed the first part, I didn't see that Tang San had the character of a villain. Some book friends may have read the later ones, but I have never watched them, including the anime and TV. As a person who has only watched the first part, I created the character of Tang San. You don't need to connect it with the subsequent original works. You see, even Xiao Wu's character I described is a bit different from the original work. [If that doesn't work, just treat it as a parallel world different from the one you imagined] The fourth issue is the female protagonist. When I first drafted the outline, I had three female protagonists, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong and Qian Renxue. Some people say that I was influenced by TV series and anime, but that's not true! As mentioned above, I have really only read the first novel, and some of the things in the subsequent novels were learned from reading other fans and checking information. Speaking of which, when I read the novel, my favorite was Ning Rongrong. Hahaha, I forgot why. Anyway, I was most impressed by Ning Rongrong, but the one who was least impressed was Zhu Zhuqing🤤. This is probably different from many people! ! ! I thought about it and decided to choose these three for the heroine. I don't want to change for the time being 🤐 The fifth problem is Tang Hao, which is written in the original work. When he rescued Xiao Wu and Tang San from Wuhun Palace, he had a conversation with Xiao Wu: Xiao Wu asked if the reason for rescuing her was because of his relationship with Xiao San. Tang Hao replied that from a husband's perspective, he would save his kind-hearted wife as well. Of course, there must be a relationship between Tang San and Xiao Wu in the original work, otherwise he would not have forced himself into the Spirit Hall for Xiao Wu, and even if it wasn't for the relationship between Tang San and Xiao Wu, he would not have saved Xiao Wu. But with his deep love for his wife, he can't say that he will fight for Xiao Wu, but he can still ignore it to a certain extent. Not to mention that he could dig up soul bones for Tang San. You have to know that in his eyes, Tang San's child is definitely not as important as his wife, otherwise he wouldn't have left him alone when Tang San was three years old and could move around a little. He even suspected that when he was a child, he might have had the idea that Tang San was one of the reasons that killed his wife. In short, after looking at the book review section, I feel like that's all I have to say. In fact, when I wrote the previous plot, I guessed that some people would object, but I didn't expect that there would be so many people! ! But no matter what I write, I have thought carefully about it. If it really doesn't suit your taste, there's really nothing you can do about it! Sorry! ! ! There are still a lot of Qidian Douluo fans, and there are also many good ones, so you might as well go there and have a look. Reading is a process of matching the author's ideas with the readers. If you are not satisfied with this one, find another one. The next one is better! The next one is better behaved, the next one is more obedient! Hahaha*▽* Please be merciful when reading the book and stop scolding if you are troublesome😅. If you think something about the plot is wrong, please feel free to discuss it in the comment area! Well, good night! ! !

Take Xiao Wu to Notting City and give him soul bones? ?

I don't know what I'm thinking. Let's get to know it carefully. Except for elementary school students and children, 80% of them will not like Tang San, Grandmaster, and Shrek, those scumbags, willful and unruly women! In addition to sausages, there are also kittens! All of them stink!

I'm really convinced. Isn't it good to join the Wuhun Palace? The treatment in Wuhun Palace seems to be better than that of Yu Xiaogang, right? Their background alone is one of the best in the continent. You can definitely go there and educate yourself. There is no need to worship Yu Xiaogang. Yu Xiaogang only knows that there are many soul beasts. I really don't believe that Wuhundian can't compare to Yu Xiaogang. In the face of power, everyone else is just an ant. I'm really convinced.

This book licks Tang San and pays homage to the master. Everyone can leave now.

Taking Xiao Wu to school was asking for death, right? Tang Hao didn't kill Xiao Wu because of Tang San. It doesn't matter now and he wouldn't feel bad if he killed her

Po, actually went to worship the master as his teacher. The master can't bring any other help to the protagonist except a bunch of theoretical knowledge. As a beast control soul master, he doesn't need to kill soul beasts. Shouldn't he find a school near the Star Dou Forest? He also took Xiao Wu with him. Is this sending soul bones to Tang Hao thousands of miles away? And you go to the master, how do you grow your beast control? I am not a rich or powerful person, so where do I get the resources? In the Star Dou Forest, you can also go to the forest to fight on your own, or go to the mainland to make a yarn, and you are not afraid that others will kill your soul beast.

Chapter 1 poisons people to death, and that Huan Yue Fox obviously wants to kill your grandfather. You see it as pitiful and you adopt it. It seems like it's more important than your father's life.

Why doesn't Qidian have a blacklist function to blacklist some books so that they don't always search for them?

Yu Xiaogang's own income is really not high. He has no role other than knowledge of soul beasts. The protagonist of Shrek can go there if he has talent. The protagonists of Wuhun Palace and Qian Renxue can also go there if they have talent. They obviously find a place to live and then choose a path. The author insists that the protagonist recognize his father, so what is the use of Yu Xiaogang? Help the protagonist analyze? ? ? He has never put his own knowledge into practice, and he forced himself to recognize his father as someone else's guinea pig. The nbnb author can post here the benefits of recognizing Yu Xiaogang as his father (but which benefits can't be obtained only by being a genius? No force will reject a genius, even Yu Xiaogang accepts The disciple's standard is also a genius: Tang San. So the author recognizes his father 666) (Tang San's character: once a teacher, a lifelong father. In the end, he gave a fruit to let people break through, and then his own father became the master of the plane. I laughed. He picked Dugu Bo's fairy grass and asked people to work for him. It seemed like this. He gave up the character of 666 to help Dugu Bo and the two of them detoxify. When they met for the first time, Dai Mubai thought about how to die with him. 666'S character was so good. Then it was obviously to prevent others from letting the killing field learn to destroy the killing city. It was too evil to say that it was the killing city. The evil spirit must be destroyed, resulting in a bunch of evil soul masters in Douluo Continent in the future. It is obvious that the killing city is to trap those evil soul masters, and then after becoming a god, it is clear that the time is to rectify the evil soul masters in Douluo Continent, but the result is still like this, where are they going? ) This is the gentleman Tang San the author thinks?

The most poisonous point of this book is to worship Yu Xiaogang as a disciple. After awakening a super martial spirit, you can directly contract with the spirit beast without killing the spirit beast to obtain the spirit ring! The first great soul master I met wanted to kill the protagonist's beast to obtain the soul ring. At this time, he should find someone who has the ability to protect himself! He actually took refuge in the master. Who protected whom? Besides, I took Xiao Wu with me, and now Xiao Wu has nothing to do with Tang San! Tang Hao might just kill Xiao Wu to obtain the 100,000-year-old soul bone for Tang San! ! It would be best to join the Wuhun Palace to learn from Bibi Dong or take refuge with Qian Renxue! The protagonist's talent can definitely be valued and protected, instead of taking advantage of Master Licking and Tang San! The protagonist's talent far exceeds that of Tang San, he can obtain fairy grass in advance, and he is familiar with the plot. How can Tang San defeat the protagonist?

It's very good. As long as you don't lick anyone, it's not considered poisonous.       ，？ When your family is looking for a teacher, do you still pay attention to the teacher's moral character? Isn't the role of a teacher just to impart knowledge? Not to mention the three views, the parents are responsible for the three views, and the protagonist's three views have already grown up. Besides, the master's knowledge reserve is placed at the T0 level in elementary school (note that it is an elementary school). The most important thing is that teachers at this T0 level can prostitute for free. You don't need to give gifts or rely on relationships. As long as you have talent, he will accept it. What makes everyone feel uncomfortable is nothing more than the sentence Tang San said in the original work: "One day is a teacher, and a life is a father." This sentence is completely Tang San's initiative to recognize his father. In fact, the mainstream view of teachers and students in Douluo Continent is not much different from modern times. For example, the relationship between masters Tang San, Fred Ma Hongjun, and Bibi Donghu Liena is not called teacher and student, but master and apprentice. The relationship between the protagonist and the master in this book is a teacher-student relationship rather than a master-student relationship. As of the current update to Chapter 88, the protagonist does not have any dog-licking behavior.                                                              A lot of Douluo fan books are all for the sake of black masters and Tang San. If there are no black spots, we will create black spots, and in turn, they will lick Bibi Dong crazily and have the same virtue as the rice circle 😅

Once a teacher, always a father So accept a scumbag as a teacher. This wave of operation 666 will follow your main plot. Tang San will be the protagonist and learn what he learns. What he learns in the end is probably the same as Tang San, so I don't see the need. After all, the endings are similar.

I am Shennong, and I will evaluate this book objectively. First of all, the author has good skills and can make people read smoothly. This aspect has already surpassed most of the fans. As for the setting, there are some small flaws, but it is not a big problem. Maybe for most people, the poisonous point is to worship the master. To be honest, I don't like the master either, but this is the author's point of view. He believes that you can learn a lot of basic things. Although not all are correct, it can also lay the foundation. In my opinion, when one is weak, the role of a protector is greater than that of a theoretical mentor. Even Tang San would have been in trouble long ago if it weren't for the luck brought by the protagonist's halo. If it is acceptable, you can read it, if not, you can withdraw it.

There are really many problems with the master. Even the teachers in the junior college where Tang San went could complain about the master. It can be seen that the master is very big. If he is capable, others will not complain about him easily. As for which big figures in the plot later praise him, that is just looking at the talents of the seven monsters.

Many people struggle with the issue of becoming a teacher or joining a group, but I think the writing is quite good. For me, what matters when reading a book is whether the plot is good or not, and whether the writing is good or not. This is much better than many fans trying to make the novel black and white, making the novel full of logical errors and confusing the original characters. On the contrary, now I can no longer stand the fans who use the Wuhundian or the original characters of the original novel and let the protagonists act pretentious. (Do you have pictures of those soul beasts? It's hard to imagine the specific images. A sketch will do.)

It's okay to worship the master. After all, the author's strength does not allow it and he can only follow the original work. But there is a problem if you take Xiao Wu with you. You are going to be killed thousands of miles away. Can't you put a patch on it to hide Xiao Wu's aura? You can't think of problems that can be solved just by looking for any excuse.

To be honest, I don't dislike it. If the fan novel doesn't have the original scenes, I personally don't like it. The writing of this book is very good. The only thing is that there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read. Big boost to the author! ! ! !

No matter how you explain it, if you become a disciple of a master and become a brother with Tang San, your book will plummet by 90%. No matter how you explain it, it will be useless. Readers will not pay for it. We will only read what suits us and what we feel comfortable with. If we don't like it, we won't read it if it makes us feel uncomfortable. After all, you are not the only one who writes novels at Qidian. We can definitely find a book we like. There is no need to read it. Well, I'm looking forward to your next book. I hope that before you write the next novel about Douluo, you can carefully read the later parts of Douluo's original novel, or look at how excellent novels written by others are written. You can borrow some plots. In that case, I can't guarantee whether your next novel will be a hit, but it will definitely not plummet. Finally, I look forward to your next novel. I will abandon this novel.

The pirated copy is converted into a regular version and fully subscribed. It doesn't matter if the writing is good or not, it doesn't matter if the master writes it reasonably. I especially like how you wrote the emotional scene with Xiao Wu Rongrong! It's considered a pretty good one among fics, but fics have to write emotional scenes with the heroine, so come on!

After reading the post pinned by the author, I feel that the author is very careful. I don't think it's necessary. In your title, write "Master Worship, Group with the Protagonist". If they don't like this type, they can leave. If they like it, they can stay. Douluo has readers who like Tang San in Douluo 1, and there are also readers who like Bibi Dong Wuhundian. So, author, even if you write a story about the protagonist group fighting against the Soul Palace, there will still be people who like Douluo (if you want to write well, this will test not only your writing skills, but also your creativity. Many Douluo and group novels have the same plot, and the writing is not good, so they are criticized by the original novels) There is no need to satisfy everyone just because you don't like this type of story, because you are not a god, you have to remember that you are just a small author, and you are writing for people who like this type of plot. If you, the author, want to make money as soon as you get started, just follow the trend and write whatever those Douluo fans say. Just lick it in the comment area, criticize Tang San and step on Yu Xiaogang in the book. If you add a colorful plot (h) to the novel, there will be no brainless fans to pay for you. If you want to write a good novel, you need to have some logic and plot foreshadowing. Whether your protagonist follows the protagonist group all the way to the dark side or later joins the Wuhun Temple, there must be some logic in the plot (Why did you turn against the protagonist group because of a woman? Or is there any love and hatred?) Otherwise, it will be a brainless novel The mindless story about following the protagonist group and the Wuhun Palace in the front is like a novel I read. The protagonist group is loving and brotherly in the beginning, but then they suddenly become antagonistic, which is very senseless. You offend the fans in the front, and offend the fans of the original novel who like your previous plot in the back. It's hard to please both sides, so either you try your best to follow the group, or you try your best to discredit Tang San. After all, your novel is a fan novel. You have to create new and different stories based on the original work so that people will not get tired of it. I hope you can write a different Douluo.

It's hard not to get away from those "really licking" authors who make bad money. Come on, author, I'll order as much as you write.

This book is really good, the plot is solid, and the character martial arts settings are good. There have been similar martial arts in other Douluo fandoms before, but they are not as well written as the current one. The emotional portrayal is already considered good in most Douluo fandoms nowadays that have no brains to collect harems. Even if you modify part of the plot and continue writing, it is not unacceptable.

I think it's very well written. Not to mention how famous the contracted soul beasts are, like the Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear, but the growth is exciting. Come on, author, it's really very good. As long as you read it carefully, you will have a sense of expectation, looking forward to growing to a hundred thousand years or more.

The plot and logic are good. People who leave after seeing the master have missed a good book. It is a pity that the author's slogan of completing the million-word book is cut off.

Dear viewers who are passing by, please leave some footprints 😓😓, otherwise it will always feel like you are playing on a single player

Huan Yuehu, who has a six-hundred-year-old spirit, cannot defeat a level-20 soul master with only an eighty-year-old soul skill. What are you thinking? What is the purpose of such a useless soul beast contract?