Dressed as a Delicate and Sickly Beauty from a Boss's Family

Recommended by Douyin. After reading it, I think it is very suitable for primary school students and junior high school students 🙏

The writing style is so childish. It was recommended by Douyin. The content of the novel is so poorly written that it made me really uncomfortable. Besides, looking at the male protagonist's upper body wouldn't cause a nosebleed. Is this a normal person? Did you find it difficult to take the 985 primary school mathematics test in your previous life? I really like it

The heroine is only in the fifth grade. It feels like watching elementary school students falling in love. It's a bit dramatic. Even if it's the first grade, it's not that outrageous.

Before the heroine came here, she must have graduated in 985 after all! Can't even do elementary school math? This is no longer a question of stupidity or not, this is purely a bit mentally retarded!

I feel that the age of the heroine is really ridiculous. After watching a few pictures, I feel that the audience is primary school students, which is really outrageous. The story and character setting are good, but this age is really outrageous and makes people laugh.

I have read a book with a similar setting, including an adopted son, a loft, and a young lady. However, the plot of this book cannot be applied to a ten-year-old girl. It is really embarrassing and outrageous. I thought it was the one I have read before, so please take a step forward.

From TikTok. I didn't want to watch the beginning...

Ahhhhh this setting is really amazing and I can't refuse! ! But why can't the author's writing style be better😭😭

Recommended by Douyin. After reading it, there are many loopholes, which is inexplicable.

There are too many loopholes in this book! ! ! !

I came from Douyin. After reading it, it was okay. The setting is pretty good, but the writing is average. Come on, author. I really like the settings of the male and female protagonists. The writing will be better if the writing is polished!

It's my birthday today, and I don't have to go to bed early tomorrow, so I went to have fun today and asked for a day off. Darlings, don't wait any longer, go to bed early~

This is Lulu's first book. I know there will be many shortcomings, so I re-read my article today and slightly modified the parts that I think are unreasonable and that the little cuties think are unreasonable. It will not affect the main plot. You can also choose not to re-read it. I will also revise while writing in the future. The little cuties can actively point out the shortcomings and give me a five-star review. Please, I love you~٩(๛˘ ³˘)۶❤❤ However, I find that the most common complaint is that the protagonist is too young, and the supporting characters are indeed a bit precocious. However, there is really no way to change this setting, otherwise many subsequent plots will have to be changed accordingly. I would like to apologize to you here. It may look a bit awkward at first, but it will be fine later. Please forgive me. ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ) (Actually, I have always thought that it is quite normal for primary school students in fifth and sixth grade to fall in love, so this is why we have such a setting. I have friends who have been in love since the sixth grade, but it was limited to hugs at most. There was even one who said that he had a crush on the Chinese class representative of his class in the third grade. I was really shocked at the time. Could it be that the people I come into contact with in my world are more precocious) Also, I would like to thank you little cuties for your continued support. It is your companionship and support that allowed this book to pass three rounds of PK smoothly. It has been on the new book list and is now on the bestseller list. I am really touched and thank you very much ❤❤❤ I saw a lot of little cuties asking about the book club group, but I haven't set it up yet. Mainly because I'm afraid that if I do, I'll find that there are very few people joining the group, which will be a bit embarrassing, so I haven't set it up yet 😂

Thank you, it's exactly the same as the copywriting on Douyin😀

Help, it really doesn't feel right, and at this age... It's a bit, how should I put it, the writing feels a bit childish. Is this for children around 10 years old? I hope the author will work hard to improve the writing style, I can't stand it anymore 😭

Are primary school students really so precocious? It wouldn't be so embarrassing if you changed the protagonists to high school or junior high school students.

The author writes like a primary school student, suitable for primary school students to read

The setting is great, but the writing is immature. I hope I can move forward and improve my writing.

I can understand that the female protagonist likes the male protagonist but can't let him go. Even the life in the book is too happy and she doesn't want to go back to the real world. It's all understandable. But she just showed that she doesn't want to go back to her own world. I think it's a bit heartless. Moreover, in the storyline, she didn't show that she misses her parents or is worried about her family and friends, which makes me feel a little emmm. , Because her family is not very bad, it should be considered a happy family. It is not reasonable to think that her family is really reasonable. Except for the fact that she was not familiar with the place at the beginning and missed her relatives for a while, she basically never mentioned them again. It always felt unreasonable. After all, the heroine can dance ballet in her own life, and she did not say that her family was not good to her. It should be a normal family. As long as you Is it really reasonable for a person from a normal family to have something happen to him in this world and not know whether he will live or die? He doesn't worry about his parents' status or his real world situation at all. He just immerses himself in emm love and love. If he mentions this and this, for example, he is worried about his parents and wants to go back and have a look, I will feel a little normal. But he doesn't say anything and just stays in the book happily with peace of mind. Is it really reasonable?

Is this modern times or the Republic of China? ?

The ending is very rushed, and there are not many emotional lines, so I just mentioned it at the end and ended it. Because the author is too busy and there is really nothing he can do 😢. I hope to continue writing the ending 😍 In fact, there should be some foreshadowing that I haven't had time to finish 🤤