Lord of the Underworld

I think books without heroines are good books. Don't write ambiguous things. If the author persists, you will become a clean stream, and we will always support you, and you will not create karma yourself.

The author updates, I watch the video to support you

Most of the people reading this book now must be old bookworms. After all, it is not a very trendy genre. So I would like to remind the author that most old bookworms know how many words you have included in a chapter. Taking a step back, it is impossible to say that online writing is not good, but it should also have a standard. Only by occasionally updating it with a few chapters full of useful information can it retain its popularity.

Some plots are too fragmented and the transitions are abrupt. Especially paragraphing. Author, you are simply a genius at paragraphing. It's so outrageous But in general, you can read it when you are short of books.

Author, change your habits, otherwise you, "but", will send many people away.

The author has opened a new book? Everything he writes is fine, but you old eunuch, I'm a little panicked 😰

I've read about ten chapters and the plot is pretty good. I'm lucky not to be too pretentious. The main problem is that there are a lot of typos and sentence fragmentation problems. I was talking about one thing at the beginning, but it immediately changed to another thing, which makes people think that they have missed reading a page.

This paragraphing and phrasing is really giving me a headache, and when I look at it, there is a sudden interruption. Just Never Again Why is this divided into one section? It doesn't make much sense. Why divide it? It's just more suitable for and but the third-order talisman seal script can barely be separated

Immortality is still from me, Gu Yue Fang Yuan... A model worker who does whatever it takes to achieve his goals is also...

Too much cheating, I know how to add points, but don't let people collect them, and release tasks

Update it quickly, this book can still become a small hit

I always feel that the Tianluo Dao written by the author is like a small and unpopular sect! Nothing fancy

Come on, this book is so well written. What you need to cultivate to become an immortal is to cultivate immortality. Ninety-nine point nine percent of novels have forgotten their original intention. If cultivating immortality is not for immortality, then how about cultivating hair?

I feel that there are no obvious features in the book about sword cultivation, talisman cultivation, and other cultivation. Making talismans is just a craft, and using a sword is like sword cultivation. Maybe it hasn't been written yet? Or didn't see it?

I've been raising it for two days, but there's not even a chapter updated. What's going on?

The author updates too little. One chapter a day is really not enough. Also, have you not proofread it recently? There are several mistakes in one chapter. Please read it and check it yourself before posting, otherwise it will really affect the reading experience. Finally, I would like to ask when the protagonist's talisman will become the main method. Why is he always practicing swordsmanship? How strong is the kendo? When will the talisman of the title of the book be more effective? To be honest, sword training in novels is quite boring now, and I would like to see other systems like Fu Dao.

Aoyama-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

Isn't this going to be updated?😅

Eunuch, please tell me so I can delete it.

Still good to watch. I just feel like there are a lot of typos. Some sentences are not smooth enough and you have to rely on your own imagination.

Can you send a leaflet before disappearing 🔨🔨

The book is okay, and I can still read it so far. Although I think the structure of the book is a bit loose, this is a common problem in online novels, otherwise why would there be millions of words at every turn.

This chapter is so well written, I understand everything.

Is this a eunuch? Why not update it 😰

I feel like the author is making fun of himself in this section of the Zuo Family, so stop studying it.