Huayuzhi Was Born in 1984

Not bad, not bad. When I read the author's novel, I could read it to the end in one breath without any pause, which shows the smoothness of the writing. Although I have traveled to Sijiucheng once, I can still read the charm of the author's era. For the time being, the whole article seems to be eloquent and has no poisonous points. I just need to continue writing in this style and the results will definitely be good. I hope the author can persevere.

I made up for the full order, but the main plot is really messy

I have been looking for an entertainment novel for a long time, and this one is the best one in recent times. The characters are very vivid and it is worth recommending. The shortcoming is that the number of words is too small, and it's gone right when you're getting into a good mood!

Stop at chapter 79. Don't take it for what you think. Some heroines in entertainment stories are badly written. Why are there still people writing about familiar people? I don't know where the sense of immersion comes from. I almost don't read entertainment stories about parallel time and space. Except for a few well-written articles, they are basically scum. There is a new book issue and only a few words are released in a batch. , You are a new account, what you want is exposure, and I will lock you directly after you put it on the shelf. Those who read the book indirectly will think that you are ugly and your writing is pretentious. After adding the first book, it basically declares that your grades are worrying. You have said too much, but your writing is still good, but you are too pretentious and have a high self-esteem. See you again 👏👏👏

Literary youth is a disease that needs to be cured. I have never seen any literary youth who can write good books. By the end of the writing, the readers will run out and they will just amuse themselves.

I have read more than 100 chapters, and I want to share some thoughts with the author. The writing is very good, and the characterization is delicate and vivid. This is the advantage of this book, and it is also the reason why I read it now. I have read it since the 2001 Fantasy Sword Book League. This book still needs careful planning in this regard. Types of entertainment articles: Chinese entertainment, Hong Kong entertainment, and American entertainment are read more, Korean entertainment, and Japanese entertainment are less read. The routines are indeed relatively simple, copying books, operas, and dramas, picking up female stars, and laughing and scolding and intrigues with the big guys. There are only a few of them, and it does feel a bit homogeneous and boring after reading too much, so I understand that the author wants to write some different pursuits. But there are still some red lines that are best not to touch. Reading novels is to find a sense of substitution, YY, and fantasize about your own life. Relationships between men and women can be either emotional or emotional. I like to watch both harem stories and single female protagonists. Either the scumbag is clear like Wei Xiaobao, or the infatuated one is like Yang Guo, but you can't be attracted by sex and still be passionate about it. The scumbag will be unhappy, and the infatuated one won't be happy either. It's stuck. In the middle, the experience is uncomfortable. In this aspect, the young woman Bai has a good sense of proportion. The single heroine is from one to the end and has an ambiguous beauty. Xu Zhafei's left and right hairpin calms the depression in the hearts of readers of Red Mansion and satisfies their teenage fantasies. Or a brainless stallion like a big golden retriever, just watch it as an abridged version of Liu Bei. Uncle Abin Qin is not unfamiliar to us. But don't create a character of He Shuhuan, brother, what the hell is it to be both fake and established? This is a minefield for online writing. If neither end of it occupies the target audience of your book, who is it? This is my opinion. Whether it is reasonable or not is up to the author to judge. I hope this book will get better as it gets written.

The writing was so good at the beginning, but it got worse and worse as it went on. It was a mess of a good hand. I wanted to bring it back as soon as possible. What kind of sad drama is it? A good entertainment article has been turned into a bitter romance drama. If I don't bring it back, all my book friends will disappear.

The heroine Yu Feihong is better than Che Xiao, I withdrew and announced that the 1000 investment failed

It's better to talk about the issue of the heroine. This book has many female protagonists, but the characters that have not been written yet have not been added. I said this at the end of the chapter. If you have read the book, you will definitely know it. If you just say poison in the comment area without reading the book, I don't know what your mentality is. Newbie, new book, I still hope everyone will be more tolerant, thank you for your support.

Saigao

I found that many writers who think they are literary and youth writers will forcefully raise the box office of some literary movies or chicken movies that are destined to have no chance of high box office, and even break records. They really have lost their common sense just to attract the literary youth. I am convinced that the next Tsing Yi will also have a box office of 30 million or 40 million.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an amazing Huayu novel. Yes, it's amazing! When it comes to entertainment, I only read Reality Huayu, and I can't stand anything else. I clicked on the word "Huayu 2" in this book, and I was really surprised. The writing is smooth and very comfortable to read. The protagonist is very young according to his age, but the author is able to write an image of him who can communicate with adults on an equal footing without being obtrusive. Now the protagonist stands up, and the protagonist is not that rigid young and mature impression! It's just that I'm miserable. This book is the seedling. It will definitely make me pursue the book hard~~~

The eunuch also informed me, it's really...

The more I write, the more rubbish I write. It was so good at the beginning, but now when I see a woman, I talk nonsense, touch women, and then my mind is full of thoughts about going to bed. Sure enough, when I write an entertainment novel, I start out serious and then reveal my true colors. I can't help but write all my dirty thoughts into the novel.

... Write that after Brother Fei got pregnant, he probably couldn't figure out how to deal with it, so he entered the womb decisively 😆😆😆

There are too many heroines and it would be like losing one of them to death. . . . This is too contradictory. I thought the author would handle it well. Unexpectedly, the author was too literary. It made me a little embarrassed. See you in the next book

.... I thought I would open a harem and hang myself on one person. The key is Che Xiao😤😤

Is Yu Feihong the heroine? It's really hard to bear. Does the author like Nian Shang, or is he and her the same age, so he substituted himself? Who else travels back to their teens and doesn't like those energetic young girls, but pursues a young woman in her thirties? What's going on?

What is this latest chapter about? It's so pretentious, it's all a cliché of a sad drama.

After reading more than 20 chapters, does the author want to start high and go low? The first dozen or so chapters are amazing, but in the later chapters, don't try to be an actor. You really learn quantum mechanics to teach you how to build an atomic bomb, and then you go to work as a contractor.

I thought it was okay before. Later we saw that the protagonist started to meet his parents as a freshman and tied himself up. Then the author wanted to write a harem with multiple female protagonists. This is so disgusting. She is not human inside and out. Especially more than 80 chapters! Hu Jing scolding the protagonist really made me sick. Give it up, bye!

Why haven't I seen anyone recommending female protagonists? Then I recommend one - Venus. Who is in favor? Who is against?

The author is not a eunuch. It is rare to have such writing style. Keep it up.

Sister Feihong

The author asked for leave to write a 10,000-word chapter today, but it was only 8 o'clock. I looked at the leave request again and deleted it. Increased probability of eunuchs

Want a eunuch? Why are all the people I rewarded eunuchs...

... The author's writing style is very good. Really, if this novel is a little more uncomfortable, I'll just read it and finish it. Just those plots that are not poisonous but can make you feel depressed. It's really uncomfortable for readers who are used to being substituted. One day at work. I understand the feeling of being mentally numb and not feeling comfortable after reading a novel. This is not the first time I prayed. It's really a pity. The protagonist is actually quite realistic as portrayed by the author. It was so real that I suddenly felt that even though the protagonists were a bit dreamy, they were actually quite good. It doesn't matter if the heroine's self-awareness is low…at most it's just a cool story about the male protagonist. It's better than being entangled in a very real and plump Che Xiao described by the author.

Really good pen, worth ordering.

The story of this book has a tight rhythm, and the characters are full of personality and demeanor without being stereotyped. The protagonist is portrayed in a subtle and subtle way. The description of the scene is not embarrassing, and the pretense is not cliche. The author's jokes are also adapted to the situation. In short, it is good in one word. It is a fairy tale. It is recommended for those who like Huayu.

I saw Sister Yu and Dalizi coming in and keeping them, but the author doesn't seem to be fattening them, so take your time.