Tianlong: the Immortal Cultivator in the Martial Arts World

After Wu Xingyun's belly got bigger, he also took down Li Qiushui 😁

I looked at dozens of pictures and didn't know what to write. I wrote a little bit from left to right and didn't know what I wanted to write. Seeing it is the same as not seeing it.

As the prince of the Song Dynasty, he actually became sworn sworn brother with a Jianghu man. It was so funny that he died of laughter.

The martial arts is too deified. The small-scale battles against the martial arts people in the novel will indeed be annihilated by the martial arts masters. However, when a large number of armies fight in groups, no martial arts skills are used. The military formations are spread out, and the archers are stunned after a few rounds of volleys. Qiao Feng is so awesome that he is forced to commit suicide. The protagonist is forced to death even though he has a halo. If they really want to face each other, they are not the kind of unparalleled mowing grass in Fengyun. They will basically die.

I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading a few chapters, I felt that the author's ideas were different from those of normal people. A prince was born in a royal family, his mother and concubines were loved by all, and it was also a world of martial arts. However, the protagonist never thought about being an emperor, but wanted to be a free prince. To be honest, I really didn't understand. According to a normal person's idea, it is definitely to pave the way for becoming an emperor in the future. Now that his mother and concubine are pampered, he has advanced cognition. This is what a normal person thinks. And to put it another way, I really don't understand when the term Xiaoyao Prince came into being. Do you think the leader of a country will always let someone who can replace him at any time stand high above him? It is even said that his reputation among the people and ministers is higher than that of the emperor. Do you think the author is realistic? Also, this was the Song Dynasty, which was followed by the Yuan Dynasty. As a Han man, my Han family's men turned into pigs and dogs. Don't you have any idea at all? So it is difficult for you to become popular. There is something wrong with your original idea and outline. Prince Xiaoyao does not exist in the world, let alone Xiaoyao.

Shouldn't the first thing to do when traveling through Tianlong is to go to the Zhenlong Chess Game and become the protagonist directly?

There are bugs every step of the way, and the plot is handled inexplicably. Tong Guan practices the Sunflower Book and becomes a woman. This setting is uncomfortable. I found Xiake Island and practiced the Taixuan Sutra, and then found a bunch of second-generation officials to join the world. What kind of crazy idea is this? The second-generation powerful official is already more popular than the protagonist, the prince who doesn't even have a fiefdom. As long as you are not a waste, you can study for the imperial examination and become a civil servant and then wander around in the world? And they put them on the island and ignored them! I can bear it by becoming a sworn sworn brother to Qiao Feng. After all, he is a top-notch gold hero. As a result, the court was not approved and he was directly granted the title of marquis? What kind of ghost is Liao Hou? This title is greater than that of a prince! The title of marquis based on the place name can only be granted to the township and pavilion, and those above the county level are kings. Not to mention the entire Liao Kingdom, the 16 states of Yanyun can grant 16 kings. Even symbolic marquises should be called "Marquis of Ping Liao" and "Marquis of Zheng Liao", just like giving Guan Yu the title of Prince Shouting. Guan Yu would kill people after hearing this, okay? Who would be disgusted? Tell Qiao Feng to introduce his wife Wang Yuyan, and then put his hand on his wife's chin in front of others. Is this really introducing your wife? This is to introduce Biaozi. Not to mention ancient times, there are no idiots doing this in modern times. And then you have to accept the beggars into the army? The Song Dynasty's hundreds of thousands of forbidden troops and millions of soldiers were dragging the country to death, and they still accepted beggars into the establishment? There are countless other little bugs like the Zhizhou kneeling down and kowtowing when he sees the prince. Even if he pretends not to understand outside, he goes back to the palace to fight and kill the emperor's female officials. I really vomited. While talking about how awesome there are in the palace, he also let the three melons and two dates of Xixia Yipintang be assassinated, and the emperor was even injured! Unless Empress Li takes action, who in Xixia has the ability to do this? Then Xingzilin actually let it go in an understatement. The author said that as long as he is a philanderer, he will kill his wife (a rage turns into a beauty🤢), but for others, even if he goes to your house and kills people, it won't be a big deal, right? The author not only lacks common sense, but even lacks insight. The way he behaves and treats people is worse than that of a junior high school kid. This is the editorial note of note 1 and note 2. Damn it, let's make the outline smooth first

That's awesome. The Taixuan Sutra can be directly changed into Sanskrit. Isn't the Tadpole script good? Slip away, slip away.

The author feels that he has no common sense at all. Li Er, the founder of Confucianism?

I really can't stand it anymore, the logic is inconsistent, and the names of the martial arts he calls are second-rate. The good-looking Tianlong suddenly feels like a comic, and the dialogue is also like this. Murong Bo's sentence, taste the anger of this king, almost made me vomit blood.

The author's writing was so messy that few people could accept it. The simplest one is "the protagonist has read all the palace books at the age of three". The biggest characteristic of children is that they are "small". Their bodies are small, their development is incomplete, and their energy is far less than that of adults. Maybe you have children who are noisy? That kind of making trouble is different from "reading a book". Reading requires a lot of mental effort. Specially, is it useful for the protagonist to read all the books? Remember? Do you understand? Huang Shang, who wrote the Nine Yin Manual, has not read as many books as the protagonist. Moreover, after reading too many books, I really have a certain temperament. Being able to "quietly" read so many books is already very impressive. If you can read so many books and understand them, you can already be called a great scholar of the world. The author writes the book with exaggeration. This is a pure white text. Don't expect any details at all. Don't think about it at all. Once you think about it, you won't want to read it.

When I saw Li Er, the founder of Confucianism and Taoism, I called him an expert. He is so awesome!

Since I traveled through the Song Dynasty royal family and lived in the world all day long, I didn't want to regain Yanyun. What kind of things are written by dogs?

Can you be smart? I watched the beginning and could barely keep reading. I couldn't stand watching Qiao Feng sworn sworn brother. A Song Dynasty prince swore a sworn sworn relationship with a Liao man. Are you thinking of eating it?

Is this author a tauren fan? First, the protagonist half-heartedly agreed to marry Zhao Linger, which was a bit poisonous to me. But forget it, after getting married, there was a sly description that Li Xiaoyao had a crush on Zhao Ling'er, and then Zhao Ling'er shouted again, "Brother Xiaoyao, what do you want to do, I ask you."

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In the Song Dynasty, I won't elaborate on the concept of Western rituals for outsiders.

Thoughts after reading Chapter 3: The royal family has no education for the prince, and the prince is a child prodigy, knowing everything at the age of three. The conversation between the emperor and the prince is very uncomfortable, and the shouting of dad and dad makes people feel like they are reading a third-rate urban routine.

After reading the beginning, I found that the author didn't even clear up the timeline of Tian Long Ba Bu before writing a book. It was so irresponsible. Murong Bo faked his death probably not long after the Yanmen Pass Incident. How old was Qiao Feng at that time? How could he appear in front of the protagonist who was investigating in his 20s as a 20-year-old image?

When modern people travel to ancient times, they must adapt to the general trend of ancient times. Don't act like modern people, otherwise you won't know how you died. And the protagonist does not have a golden finger to protect him, so he should follow the ancient rules. Look at what Wang Mang has done. God has not let him go. What kind of equality and fairness can there be? Who will believe this? I'm afraid I haven't been beaten up by the society. That's a slogan and propaganda. Just listen to it.

The emperor asked a three-year-old child: "What do you think of the Song Dynasty?" The child replied: "Father, I am only three years old, do you think it is appropriate to ask this?" I don't know how you feel when you see it, I have withdrawn!

It makes you laugh to death. A prince is sworn sworn brother to Qiao Feng. Do you know how many people have been persuaded to quit by writing like this?

Forcibly identifying Ding Chunqiu as Wang Yuyan's grandfather has a god-like brain circuit. So disgusting

Hahaha, in the world of martial arts, I'm here too! You can imagine what's in this mentally retarded introduction.

In Tianlong, directly obtain the Beiming Divine Art from Wuliang Mountain in Dali, and then use your identity to find thousands of people, simplify the Beiming Divine Art and practice it for them for a few years, and then absorb it, so that there will be no mixed internal energy.

The writing is okay. Although the writing style is a little rough, the ideas are still very good. I need to work harder.

The author is probably not familiar with the system of cultivating immortals. What is he writing about?

The writing is vapid and the dialogue awkward. This book was so poisonous that Shennong avoided it. After reading the third chapter, he was poisoned and died. This inscription was erected to warn future generations.

The one who kills the emperor today will kill the prince tomorrow. Why hasn't the Song Dynasty destroyed the country? A grandmaster can control a country by one person. Before the protagonist, there was no grandmaster in the Song Dynasty. Grandmasters are everywhere in the world. There are even more masters in Shaolin. Why do you build a country?

The writing is really poor, the words and sentences feel very stiff.