Screenwriter Student Breaks into Acting Department

So far, I don't know what the functions of the cars given to the protagonist by the system are. If they are just used to show off, with the protagonist's own talent, those cars can be earned at any time. If it takes more than ten years, then what is the purpose of risking your life? The reward you get is something you can easily get. If you think about it this way, it will be difficult to have a sense of involvement. You don't know what kind of reward the author will give the protagonist in the end.

It's quite difficult to substitute. The function of the system should be the least popular among the starting points, right? (Maybe it's because of insufficient research and development funds. I spent my life in exchange for a motorcycle, a sports car, a bicycle, and 30% of the shares of an entertainment company.) At first, I was looking forward to winning some music, film and television gift packages from the earth, but unexpectedly, there was nothing! As for his talent, he is quite pale. Let's not talk about the plot. Of the three songs, only the third one has lyrics, but the lyrics really don't feel good. Keep up the good work, author!

In this paragraph, "Guanze degree" should be glossiness, right? There are other similar places, such as "carry out" and the like.

Can the male protagonist be made taller? Just don't exceed 180cm.

A 5.5 Million euro motorcycle? Not a limited edition Pagani or Lamborghini Poison?

It is a relatively light-hearted novel. I quite like novels in this style, but this kind of novel is difficult to write. It is easy to be homogenized and collapse later. Also, there are so many typos. Why don't you, the author, check them after you finish writing? Finally, come on!

Guan Yeming's appearance really made me a little embarrassed. And some of the plots are not perfect, a bit anticlimactic. Let the author have some snacks.

Can it be put on the shelves next month?

Come on, author, I feel heartbroken when I see the author's achievements. The book is good, come on.

It's good to be able to persist, but it's a bit like a running account, not very daily, and there is no main line.