Mrs. God Is a Crazy Beauty

I happened to see a book review event After thinking about it🤔I feel good about writing down my reading experience~ I have only caught up to the early 20th chapter. At the beginning, I would like to call this book "The Beating of the Five Princes of Lu Yin Kingdom at the Beginning"🤣 1. The main species I have seen in the book so far The clan forces are humans - the Seven Kingdoms and the Five Spirits (living in the snowfields of the North) - demons The current main plot is taking place in Luyin Country~ 2. Main characters: Female protagonist: Ye Qingyu (Incubus - The future is the Dream God) The beginning of the chapter mentions the origin of the identity of the heroine. The ultimate state is to cultivate to the Dream God! But to become a dream god, you need to fulfill the ten wishes of the living beings in the world~ This reminds me of the TV series I watched before (the name is forgotten, it is to wait for others to complete their wishes before they can return to heaven and become gods🤔) But in the article, it feels that the nightmare spirits are just ordinary, just let them go Unlike in fantasy, they are so powerful and infinitely powerful gods... They actually have to rely on themselves step by step to realize other people's wishes🤔 Good food~ But everyone wants the Nightmare... Is it possible that there is a heavenly buff to make wishes come true😅 I can only say that this is a very simple and unpretentious race~ Start with a milk baby~riding into Luyin alone It feels like there are quite a lot of ups and downs The Milkman undoubtedly puts restrictions on the heroine, but it also reflects the truthfulness, kindness and beauty of the heroine~ (I can't see the role of the Milkman at the moment) The male protagonist: Meng Xizhi, nicknamed Meng Lang (according to rumors, he is a god) Maybe it is a female channel. The first point of view is on a girl~I feel emmm An old disciple appears👊 Characteristics: A handsome person with a thick face and a sinister heart Hobby: Playing with jade beads (commonly known as mice🐭💩)🤣 Twilight Shadow: One of the top ten fates of the heroine, she likes to be invisible at night (peeping in the dark) The characteristic is that blood is very easy to use🤔 Milkboy Xiaoxue:Currently it is mainly pendants and decorations for the heroine Rescued from wolves~The identity is slightly mysterious 3. Experience in the text 1. How to put it, I don't know whether the plot is progressing quickly or slowly~The plot is also slightly reversed At first I thought it was an ordinary story about making a wish and becoming a god When I entered the Luyin Kingdom later, I thought it was a story about Gong Dou Good guy, it turns out that the prince is gg after a few chapters, and the fifth prince is probably numb~ This wave of chaos in Luyin Kingdom is a bit unexpected 2. Not to mention the three golden chapters~ There are actually many selling points in the article Racial differentiation, the ten wishes of the nightmare spirit and the life master Starting with a pack of wolves and milk babies Struggles brought about by various attitudes towards the incubus The weird Muzi River Corpse Flower🌼 (I found that the author is quite good at describing the supernatural) Looked at the catalog~Heart Eater, Charm, Beauty Bone Chess, Fairy in the Painting Good Guys, another wave of reversals, it looks like a supernatural novel🤣 Liaozhai Déjà vu 3. But the plot description Slightly bland~ It looks a bit healthy To put it bluntly, there is no climax that brings strong feedback (maybe I have only read more than 20 chapters, the climax is still to come) The text is not very attractive~ It didn't hit my xp, I can better read it and appreciate the world in this book I hope to create some plot climaxes, which can make it more engaging~ or it can be daily high-sugar interactions (after all, it brings cool articles) Hot-blooded tags) 4. Maybe I read a little too fast and didn't have a good taste of the reading~ (whispered, this is also the pain of me reading female videos. I don't have any clues to complain about. Some of the writing is too exquisite... I have nothing to say🤣) The plot is a bit unlike a short story. Even if I skip reading, I can guess the cause and effect. What is the plot roughly described in the article~ Here... Okay From the ten wishes in the world of Incubus, it looks a bit like a welfare race 🤔 Looking for the life master and being promoted to the divine position, during which time fighting against various forces that covet the Incubus. The process is interspersed with daily sweet life I feel that the author can intersperse the current memes, popularity and slots into it (Although there are some who go on to make jokes and break them, but some Always make me smile) Or it is not just a joke, the world of gods and gods makes us yearn for, urban life makes us feel reality, science fiction makes us yearn for the future, and the supernatural satisfies our various curiosity~~ Even simple daily plots, adding a little heat of life, can make us more connected to the book~bring a little reality, and the picture will be stronger~~ 5. How to write the strong men and women? Although I have seen similar ones , I feel that both parties do not have to be prominent in the article. Wouldn't that steal the show? The female protagonist is the priority and the male protagonist is secondary. You can rely on small stories and details to increase the impression and sense of the male protagonist~ (At least the label of thick-faced and deceitful disciple has been deeply imprinted in my heart) The female protagonist becomes stronger outside and performs various operations. The male protagonist who is a god can also intimidate others by sweeping away the identity of the boss~ (Even without the female protagonist knowing, the female protagonist also expresses how powerful she is. Others tremble when he appears (actually because he is afraid of the male protagonist) and it will bring contrast when he finds out later) Ahaha, I am just bragging here. I have seen a lot of this kind of plot Well, secondly, you can really create some climax plots Otherwise, it feels like eating noodles in clear soup~ You can also add some meat~ Yes, the author is very broad in writing about supernatural phenomena. It's quite interesting Kuai Kua💕 I really like reading this aspect hai The main thing is that I hope the author will write better and better! 😘 (A book review from Mengxin. The writing is wrong. Don't hit me)

The author's other book "A Branch of Acacia Stewed Red Beans" is also at the starting point. The pen name is: Late Autumn Wangxue. Friends who are interested can click on this avatar to read the book 🌹~ There is also a book in Hongxiu. You can't see it at the starting point, so I won't mention it 🌹~ Thank you everyone for supporting Little Potato 🌹🌹🌹~

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​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the thought it should be a light and funny type, then clicked in and read the introduction, which strengthened my idea. Unexpectedly, after reading the first few chapters, I was completely subverted. Not only is it not funny , on the contrary, it has the flavor of a sadistic novel: the heroine Ye Qingyu brings a dying baby, she is lonely and deserted, and the surrounding environment is also very unfriendly, full of conspiracy, calculation and exploitation. Although the heroine is smart and calm, and has high martial arts skills, she is still full of dangers. I continued to read with a little doubt and curiosity. At this time, the male protagonist Meng Xizhi came floating in, ding ding ding, the funny person in this book is here! The male protagonist was originally a beautiful white butterfly, unparalleledly handsome, spotless, and otherworldly. However, such a handsome young man turned out to be a talkative😁😁. As soon as he appeared on the scene, he clung to the female protagonist like brown sugar and promised her her body. Although the female protagonist did not like to talk to him, he was not discouraged and did not take himself at all. To outsiders, Ayu Ayu screams non-stop, makes all kinds of little moves like holding hands, touching hair, and hugging waists. He can also take his children to sew clothes. He is really a warm-hearted man at home. And the amazing thing is that during this process, Meng Xizhi can always maintain the appearance of a handsome young man in white. He is funny and a little cute, making people think that although he is a licking dog, he is still worthy of the heroine. The author's writing is very good and the narrative is smooth. Both the male and female protagonists have online IQs. The story revolves around the evolution of the female protagonist from the Nightmare to the Dream God. It is interlocking and progressive. At the same time, the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are unfolded. In the process of realizing the Nightmare's ten wishes, the relationship between the two parties is also gradually growing, and finally achieves positive results. I would like to make a small suggestion. If possible, please ask the author to write a preface, briefly introduce the Seven Kingdoms and the Eldar, and at least write down the names of the countries and major cities. Otherwise, you will not be able to remember it at the beginning and it will be confusing, which will affect the reading experience. If the reader can open the preface and quickly look up the relevant information when he is confused, it will be much easier to read.                                                                                                                                                                                        We wish the author great success in writing, and the more he writes, the better!

I finally finished reading it one after another. Based on this short and weak introduction, I will briefly review it while I am cooking. The Nightmare Spirit enters the world and fulfills ten wishes for the world. No matter how big or small the wish is, as long as the souls are compatible, they can become the life master. The protagonist comes into the world to experience the world by chance (visually he is carrying a sinkhole), and wants to practice his dream and become a god. The life master and the nightmare spirit basically have a mutually reinforcing relationship. The protagonist currently has two life lords. Life 1 is offline... (Pit 1). Life 2 has been attached to him as a tool to take care of the baby. Note that the origin of this baby is also a big pit (pit 2). The story is based on the fate of life 3 (pit). At the beginning... There are still many pitfalls, such as the struggle for imperial power, the characteristics and contradictions of the various systems of the Spirit Clan, the disputes among the Seven Kingdoms, Xiaoxue's life experience, the protagonist's life experience, who is the male protagonist... emmm... What the hell is the male protagonist?

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