Devour the New Universe

Not to mention the Luo Feng universe, it can be the second reincarnation era, or the era after Luo Feng, so that there is a sense of immersion and anticipation.

There are a few unreasonable points 1. The seed of one's own life core is so important. Why not just keep it in the main body but let the weak clone take it out? Is it safe for the main body to be discovered by no one or is the universe dangerous and safe? I was almost killed once and was distracted. What is the meaning of carrying the seed? It also blocks the main body from breaking through. 2. The water demon tribe's innate secret method can help people improve, but only the realm masters in the tribe are immortal. Is it reasonable to help other realm masters to become immortals and seek shelter when their own tribe is being hunted? 3. The clones of the original deity are connected. Regardless of the breakup, they all know what the original deity is doing, and the same is true for understanding the rules. However, the clone has been wandering around with the seeds for ten thousand years before it reaches the same level as the original deity. On the contrary, the main body can suddenly become the world master after a thousand years of separation, but because the seeds are in the clone, it cannot break through, and it has to wait for the clone to bring it back. The world master understands the rules best. But the clone wasted ten thousand years. 4. It is too unreasonable for the main body not to know the situation of the clone. Could it be that the main body does not know when the clone is killed? Other people hide the life core and can be resurrected even if the clone is destroyed. However, the Pig Script master hides the clone and goes out for a walk with the life core and almost dies after the seeds are destroyed. I really can't think of the meaning of the clone carrying seeds. Could it be that the secrecy of the original location is not as safe as the avatar wandering around the universe?

What I wrote before is really not possible First: The destruction of the protagonist's first clone group can be replaced by other reasons. What's more, when others destroy you, will they leave you time to self-explode the treasure? Second: It is better to directly replace the heavy treasures written with treasures. The heavy treasures are used by the Lord of the Universe or the King of Invincible. The author should know the principle of holding a treasure for his crime Third: Apply the devouring system, but you can freely use other things. In the first 50 chapters, you met the Lord of the Universe, which is too easy to encounter.

If possible, change the name. Swallowing Starry Sky's new universe will be much better.

There is a huge problem with the author's setting. The story uses a group of people who have difficulty surviving and then rely on the group's talent and secret method to take refuge. The author is too naive and has no idea of ​​the value in it. The lives of a few domain lords are equivalent to the effect of a law monument that surpasses the peak group. The protagonist created by the author is very unpleasant. Calabash Vine can only passively receive information, and then develops seven clone abilities, which led the author to start breeding clones without any planning. This results in the author's story not having a main outline. In addition, the author often describes and depicts events in detail. This is a very intellectually demanding writing method (authors who can do this are definitely among the top 5% and are not suitable for novices) For example, the author insists on arranging the first avatar into the story of the original ethnic group, and the protagonist thinks he is smart and hides it well. There is a bug in the spaceship record that you cannot control (this reflects the author's ordinary intelligence) There is also a special setting for the so-called seven clones, with a large collection of various poisonous points.

There are no names for top-level treasures, which is pitiful

Invested in refueling

It should be better to change it. They are all innate secrets. Turning 7 gourds into secrets can breed 7 treasures. You can upgrade them as your power increases, or you can use special treasures to devour them to upgrade in advance. It will be better.

Not bad, the angle is novel, the setting is also good, hard work

Author, give up. This really doesn't suit you. You don't have time to write

It's pretty good. Can you keep writing?