Ancestor Is a Little Panicked

Name: Ancestor Is a Little Panicked
Author: Freshwater Captain

老祖有点慌

by Freshwater Captain (淡水船长)

Status: Completed
Length: 176k Words
Genre: Cultivation
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Cultivation Civilization
Updated: 4y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

When I woke up, my grandson was already over 100 years old. Cui Zhouping: "Don't call me grandpa, I don't have a grandson like you." ……… Descendants of the Cui family: "Grandpa, the He family broke their grandson's legs!" Cui Zhouping: "Yeah!" Descendants of the Cui family: "Grandpa. The He family also took away the mine you left behind..." Cui Zhouping: "What? It's unreasonable. My grandson is being bullied. Don't worry, grandson, let me help you find your place!" ……… After the battle, Cui Zhouping looked at the corpses on the ground thoughtfully, and heard a familiar voice in his ears. "You have three options." "First, use your masterful hand to detect the opponent's Huangpin Kung Fu from the air. If you fail, you will be attacked by the Kung Fu technique." "Second, use your masterful hand to detect the opponent's high-grade weapon from the air. If you fail, you will suffer a blow from the opponent's weapon." "Third, use your magic hand to detect any item on the opponent's side." Huangpin Kung Fu! Yellow grade weapons! But they are all the best things in the world that can be encountered but cannot be sought! So, I choose three.

Reader comments

A time-traveler suddenly has a bunch of filial sons and grandsons. They are not biological, but they are successors. How can they have feelings?
5 likes5y ago
It took me a day to read it. The subject matter is quite suitable to my taste, so I will have some good feelings about it. However, one thing is that the author's writing style is still a bit immature. Although it is still readable, I still hope that the author can improve it a bit. Secondly, some of the plots are a bit cliché. I can roughly deduce the subsequent developments from the beginning. I hope that a little twist can be added later. But one thing that is good is that the author will leave a little suspense, such as the whereabouts of the "son". This is very important. Whether it can attract people to continue reading depends on whether the suspense is attractive enough. In addition, the main line of your story is still not very clear. Is it to develop the family or find a son, or to upgrade the protagonist. I feel that you are a bit lazy. You just talk about whatever you encounter. It is best for the protagonist to have a definite goal. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I will continue to read it.
1 like4y ago
Another point is whether the author can update more. I looked at the previous updates. Good guy, one chapter a day will take me as long as the year of the monkey.
4y ago