The Northern Azure Immortal Path

At the beginning, the protagonist is given a real immortal enemy, and some of them are beaten. This is not a good writing. It's better to do like a mortal, first come down and fight Ma Liang, then lead out Dao Ancestor, and then talk about it after ascending.

I've been reading too many articles like this lately, and I'm tired of them. Staying slowly practicing Qi, hundreds of cards have not been upgraded yet. I have always felt that the biggest golden finger of a time traveler is the knowledge and code of conduct brought from another world. But the family novel was never written. As if being assimilated into this slow world. Others have been practicing Qi for a hundred years, so can you. Others use Foundation Establishment Pill to build foundation, you should also use Foundation Establishment Pill. You must have the heart of a scientist when traveling through time. After all, elixirs synthesized from various separated elements are also elixirs

Author, I am a fan of novels about immortal families. Although I haven't read your novel yet, when I saw the name of the novel, I decided to add it to my bookshelf. I hope it won't be interrupted like the previous novels about immortal cultivators. Please! 🙏🙏

I found a little bird in the book shortage, collected it, and read it in one sitting. I hope the author will write better and better, keep updating, and come on! Be careful and encourage!

Another bad book that deleted comments~

Two bottles of elixir for raising monsters during the qi training period cost nearly 300 spirit stones. However, the annual salary of a monk in the later stage of qi training is only 56 spirit stones. Did you use your brain to write this?

Start a post about the heroine's name.

Family cultivation novels have a fatal flaw: someone in your family who is close to you is committing atrocious acts of inhumanity outside, and is a heinous person. As a family cultivator, how should you deal with this family member? The sect can still be killed as an abandoned son. Nine times out of ten, the family will make a big deal into a trivial matter, or hide it. No matter what the choice is, many people will give up this novel.

The price system is chaotic and abandoned

I hope the author will make more arrangements for the heroine