With Space in Another World

The heroine acts like an idiot and is distracted all day long, which doesn't look like the end of the world at all. If you don't know how to write about the end of the world, don't say it's the end of the world. Just write about parallel time travel.

Space telling his younger brother is just the beginning, and he has to tell the male protagonist in the end. After all, he is giving a gift to the male protagonist. How can a dowry without some awesomeness attract the male protagonist's attention?

When I saw in the middle that it was said that the space should be reduced to 100 square meters, but there was nothing left, I really didn't want to read it. Besides, how could there be such severe disasters? Droughts, floods, droughts, and droughts come in turns. Then I finally found a space and saved so many things, but I took them back for no reason. You must be sick. I read novels just to be happy and refreshed. After reading this, I was so narrow-minded that I decided to abandon the article.

Children, children must say buns, goodbye👋

After reading the third chapter, my current feeling is that the heroine is my favorite! An eight-year-old girl has traveled through time in the apocalypse and is possessed by an eight-year-old girl. She has brains and action, and can do things neatly and neatly! There is space, but it is really impossible to escape without space, but I can tell my five-year-old brother! After all, children are really easy to fool, and if a secret is told to the second person, it is no longer a secret ~ Keep up the good work! Already recommended!

It was too embarrassing. Space told his brother. It was understandable that it was convenient to escape. Later, I told the male protagonist that it should be the male protagonist. Anyway, calling the female protagonist a girl or something in one day felt like it was a bit much. The two of them had not known each other for a long time, and they didn't even know each other's details. What is even more exaggerated is that the male protagonist, his friends, and bodyguards are all brought into the space, and they are called their future partners. In the future, there will be people in the court who can do things easily. Don't be too obsessed. When I saw chapters 40 and 50, it was all about raising men in various spaces. I was so drunk. However, I can praise it a little. The author's writing style is not bad, and it is not as sloppy or uncomfortable as some elementary school students.

Sigh! I can't stand it anymore! Women already have such a good space, He is also a male protagonist of a royal family, Is it so difficult to watch a female protagonist who works hard on her own! There is already room for greatness! What does the male protagonist do? It's really hard to find books like this, there's a shortage of books! If absolutely not tell anyone.

The setup at the beginning is pretty good. There aren't that many great relatives. It's good to have a younger brother. . It would be nice to have space and be able to farm. But seeing as your space is not confidential, what do you mean? Ever since I met the male protagonist, my writing has gotten worse and worse!

Is the heroine really transported from the apocalypse?

No wonder no one saw it later. I wasn't the only one who couldn't stand it.

The space has become smaller again, and what I did before is useless, so why write it? Wouldn't it be in vain if I went to the South? What's the logic? I really can't stand it anymore

Is it faster to change the title or to change the behavior of the heroine faster? ? It can be judged that the author is under 25 years old, not married, has been out for a long time, etc...

You can see that you put your heart into writing, so keep up the good work! 🌹

The writing is getting better and better, the plot has ups and downs, it's very good! 👍

Big cheers for the author! It looks pretty good so far.

I have written more than 20 chapters now, and I don't feel as good as I did at the beginning.

If you want to continue reading, please come on, author!

The first part is pretty good, except for the occasional disconnection. Until the male protagonist appears, I really don't know if the female protagonist is in love.

He grew up in an orphanage, graduated from college, and worked part-time, five years after the end of the world. Life experience in your thirties. In the author's writing, he became an idiot and had an ambiguous relationship with a fifteen-year-old man. I don't know if the author really thinks that this character is for whom he is writing. I would be disgusted if there really was such a person.