My Roommate Is a Novelist

I read the beginning and was amazed. The writing is very good and I thought it was a good book. However, the author's plot driving force is really touching. The author very carefully wanted to describe the story of two people with certain mental illnesses in an old house, but the story process is not perfect, and there are some deficiencies in logic. Maybe the author has seen the same type of plot in other novels and wants to recreate it with his own wonderful words. However, online articles also need to have a certain degree of coherence and reflect life situations. In real life, a stranger, holding the key to his home, broke into a familiar place where he had lived since he was a child. When it is, one should express anger and caution, especially a literary worker, who should think more in his mind. You should have a certain degree of confidence when proving the real estate certificate and other information; you should be vigilant when a girl enters the home; you should know how to refuse when a girl makes a request. Even if you are short-tongued, when the girl has no way to prove that the house is her home, it is a favor for you to allow her to enter (I don't know how to put it). [Besides, the police determined that a document was indeed needed, but the girl didn't have it, which already explains something. Her call to the police was not valid, it was just nonsense] Anyway, as a reader, I think you overused some of your descriptions and ignored a lot of common sense. If you really want to push the plot like a Japanese light novel, give your daughter away, and cause trouble, then just pretend that I didn't say anything. To be honest, after reading Chapter 10, I was ready to give up because the story went against the common sense I knew. Maybe I read your writing style and judge your work with very high requirements. After reading a few more chapters, I have lost interest in continuing to read word for word. If what I said hurt you, please don't go into details. I don't mean too much criticism. It's just that it didn't suit my taste. There will still be some readers who will like your work.

I want to read this book. I don't know how to express my opinion, but I think I am interested in reading it Another: I think this book is destined not to be appreciated by too many people, and I don't know what I want to seek here. But I can indeed read this book while reading it. At that time, I experienced something bit by bit, a different feeling, not like the feeling of reading "other people's stories" in many online articles I felt the feeling of "Lin Ran" in the work, and savored between the lines the unique feeling brought by another perspective of life presented in the work. I still can't explain what I am pursuing, but I do feel that it is a different experience. It is not like the other novels I read but did not leave many memories and feelings. What it left me is a unique feeling and feeling. I believe that not everyone has time to experience words like "In the afternoon, the sun shines through the window, mixed with the cool temperature, bringing calm and gentle warmth and beauty." I really can't explain these (feelings), but there are some things that words can indeed describe. Thank you for reading this far. The book review is not very professional and contains many personal opinions. It is for reference only.

How to say it? Regarding the characters between the male and female protagonists, there are certain deficiencies. As for the male protagonist's reaction to the female protagonist's behavior of breaking into his house and turning against the guests, from the incident to the subsequent ending, the overall feeling is that it is particularly hasty. Continuing with some random actions on the first floor, but the male protagonist did not respond, it felt very unreasonable. This may also be because the personality of the male protagonist and I are quite different, so I cannot take on the role of the protagonist and understand some of the protagonist's actions. However, the author is very good at describing the environment, giving people a sense of immersion.

I like Yu Xia and hope she will become happier and happier.

Yu Xia

I still remember this day. Last year, in my junior year, everyone in the dormitory planned to get together again. We all went out to have fun, have a meal, and take a group photo on Saturday, because after senior year, everyone will be busy with graduation matters, and they will soon go their separate ways, to take the postgraduate entrance examination, and to find a job. (Hey, five minutes of sadness) At 7 o'clock, I just woke up and I couldn't wait. I went down to urge them and told my sons to get up, haha At 8 o'clock, we were all on the road. The weather was beautiful today, the weather was clear and the sun was shining At 9 o'clock, the trees on both sides of the road were still quite energetic, and the scenery was still good At 10 o'clock, the journey was a bit tortuous, and it took a long time to go back and forth, but in the end it was We have arrived at our destination, hehe The first stop is the park, there are not many people today, just right This park is a bit like an island with a lake, so we have to cross the bridge first, but because the weather is so good, everyone has the courage to It felt like summer, I took off my coat We paid and took the boat, it was a bit expensive, but the water was still very clear, thumbs up There were other people taking boats on the water, the spring breeze blew slightly, it was very comfortable It was noon, and everyone was hungry, so we went to a restaurant. The rice was very good, and everyone liked it. I gave the boss a thumbs up After dinner, we were on a forest trail, and the hygiene was good, but there was a power station parked on the roadside. There are a lot of cars, small negative review, this still needs to be improved, haha In the afternoon we went to the museum, which was very big The large wooden sculpture at the front entrance of the museum is three meters high. It is really good, with all kinds of things inside The antiquities are also great, with a sense of history After leaving the museum, everyone didn't want to leave, so we found a teahouse and brewed a pot of good tea, haha, it felt like we were retiring for the elderly, obviously we are all young people The waves have been enough, it's time to roll back (reluctant to leave) On the way back, the sun sets slowly down and the moon rises. At this moment, I think I will remember it for many years

I don't know how to describe it, but it feels like magical realism. The protagonist has a kind of pure trust. This kind of quality is rare, especially for modern people, but this is a novel, and I also like magical realism. Come on, rewards have been given, don't let us down.

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The description of the environment is good, but the confusing beginning can be said to be the selling point. However, this kind of anti-customer attitude and lack of explanation, as well as the procrastinating character of the male protagonist, made me feel uncomfortable. This may also be the reason why I am inconsistent with the character of the male protagonist in the article. But it just feels nonsensical. I can just ask my mother about the ownership of the house. I don't like it even though it's a selling point. The writing is good and the character makes me feel uncomfortable.

I am used to reading online articles on Qidian, but when I read this novel, I feel a bit unfamiliar. . . Meeting means being destined, investment and tickets are all worth it😁

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