All Heavens: Chaos Pearl of the Golden Crow

The worst poisonous points I have seen among Coiling Dragon World fans: 1. In Western fantasy novels, the protagonist uses our Chinese name, which is embarrassing; 2. The protagonist cultivates all eleven departments and mutates his soul, which is impossible to happen in the Coiling Dragon World. The original book said that the endless planes with four god clones are relatively rare; 3. Cultivation of immortals in the Coiling Dragon World , I have seen several books like this. The laws of the world do not allow cultivation of immortals, and there is still time and space to practice. 4. The protagonist cultivates to become the supreme god, which violates the original settings. 5. It also violates the basic settings of the original work. In a Panlong fanfic that is still being updated, three or four holy realm limits can actually surround and kill lower gods, haha. . .

Obviously there can be a higher level, but if you insist on writing a full-level hero who will brush slimes in the novice village, you will be the first god to run into the material plane and work as a nanny.

According to the original work, Hongmeng will never stop the protagonist from killing the four divine beasts. The balance of the universe is a joke. Hongmeng created the universe in the hope that someone would transcend, and now preventing the protagonist from developing is completely putting the cart before the horse. If the protagonist is very likely to transcend, even if the main god of the universe is dead, Hongmeng will not care. Not to mention, the four divine beast families are arrogant and domineering, so the protagonist should just kill them. Not to mention that Lin Lei can't get out, the four divine beast families in the Magnolia plane were originally created by Beirut with blood. Moreover, the author's treatment of the four divine beasts is not very satisfying, and getting the essence and blood in today's chapter is a grind. With the protagonist's current strength, should he be polite to a god who is not his own force and just take ten drops of blood? Let me tell you, even if you don't kill them, it's okay to let them be the pets of the protagonist's force. Wouldn't it be good to use them as guards? If they don't agree, the protagonist will imprison them and draw their blood every day.

Eighty million years to develop power, how big does it take to occupy a plane? I don't know how many rare objects I have collected. The protagonist's pattern is not good. He has been guarding one-third of an acre for tens of millions of years. It was not difficult before Shura to occupy the plane with the power of faith. I don't know how to use it.

The three-legged Golden Crow should have the attribute of light, right?

The author wrote a lot of problems. For example, Hongmeng specially sent a message to the protagonist to prevent him from killing other gods. Isn't this funny? As the protagonist is a person with an uncertain destiny, it is impossible for Hongmeng to transmit messages to the protagonist and restrict the protagonist, because if Hongmeng does this, the protagonist will be useless and become a person with a determined destiny, and Hongmeng will not care at all about the universe he created. You must know that in Star Transformation, after Qin Yu became the controller of Hongmeng, Hongmeng told Qin Yu that he had created and destroyed the universe countless times, just to have a person with an uncertain destiny become Hongmeng. Controller, what is there for you? Hongmeng thinks that the universe has just been opened, and the protagonist is playing too crazy. In Hongmeng's eyes, people with uncertain fates are the most important. It doesn't matter even if the entire universe is destroyed, because he can see the fate of everyone in the entire universe at a glance. The purpose of creating the universe is also to allow people with uncertain fates to finally transcend and become the controller of Hongmeng like himself. He doesn't want to be alone anymore, do you understand?

I was quite looking forward to it at the beginning, until it was about to be released, it became someone else's shape. There was no protagonist and no author. I didn't like the original work?

The attributes involved in the Three-Legged Golden Crow should be fire, light, life, and destruction.

Hongmeng cannot care about the internal affairs of the universe. Even if the people in the main universe die, Hongmeng will not care. Even if the entire universe explodes, Hongmeng will not have any ideas. At most, he will create one!

The four divine beasts are so arrogant and domineering. It will be disgusting if they are not destroyed. Hongmeng still stops them. From now on, if you are detached, don't be brothers and just run away to other worlds.

I feel like there are really many magic weapons like the Chaos Bead to Create the Jade Butterfly and the Ten Thousand Realms Map, and it's also very busy.

There is a problem. Hongmeng can't see the future of a person with an uncertain destiny, but he can still see it. But after reading it, the uncertain destiny is gone. Hongmeng wants someone to be transcendent, so he won't force it to see it. If we don't look at people with uncertain fates, but look at people who have intersections with him, assuming Hongmeng can't see Linley's future, then Hongmeng can't see Aofu's future, because he can't even see the previous clips about Linley. If so, then Hongmeng would not know that the four divine beasts would be related to Lin Lei's future. If you can see it, you can't see it for those who can't see the uncertain fate. You can also deduce the future of the person whose fate is uncertain by looking at other people's futures. I feel like there's a bug here

I've finished reading the Panlong chapter, and I read the Magic Phone with great expectations, but the author added some messy things himself, and I couldn't stand it anymore. During the Panlong chapter, many readers said that the author's writing was not good enough, but I still felt that it was not to that point. I could still read it. However, some of the author's words still caused me some discomfort. I read the Magic Mobile Chapter with great expectations. I didn't know how the original novel was. I watched about half of the first and second seasons of the TV series. The fairy world introduced by the author made me feel particularly inconsistent.

Damn it, garbage, a waste of my starting coins

You didn't even tell me the effect of the Chaos Bead. Also why not let the protagonist know about the Chaos Orb? You can also store things here

Not as good as a eunuch

What is this thing written on Magic Phone? The protagonists in more than ten or twenty pictures are missing.

The best writing about Panlong fanfics I have seen is from the days when I was mixed up with Panlong. Although the daughter's character was a failure, overall it is one of the best among Panlong fanfics. It's a pity that the author later wrote "Eunuch" within a few chapters of the Devouring fanfic. I don't know if he still writes it now.

When will we change the world? It's boring now

When will the author finish the Panlong Universe and then go to the next world to continue changing? This is a straight forward way.

Why doesn't the protagonist stop showing off?

Why do you have to suppress your ability? To be honest, writing fan fiction is just for fun.

I have been voting monthly, come on! Renew!

The Dragon Scroll is finished. I haven't read Magic Phone, so I won't order it.

What is written behind Panlong is wool. If you don't know how to write, just finish it. A waste of labor money.