I, Yang Guo, Vow Not to Break My Arms

After reading about a hundred chapters, write a book review. I don't know if the author is a novice, but the writing style is quite good for Xiaobing Legend, but compared to Zhu Xian of the same period, the difference is a bit big, but don't forget that this is a time-traveling novel, and you can only benchmark for refreshing writing, so it is acceptable if the writing style is a little childish. The idea is quite good. It can be seen that the author wanted to mix some black humor into the article in the early stage, such as the sentence at the end of the first chapter about the battery leakage of the mobile phone. Maybe it's because I'm a newbie, but the previous and later articles don't match up a bit, and there are a lot of signs of forcefulness. For example, everyone has watched "The Condor", and the protagonist doesn't know whether it is the second episode or the first episode. If it is the second episode, then the plot must be clear, but many of the stories in the article are a little bit nonsense if you force yourself not to know the plot; if it is the first episode, and you have never seen it before and only listened to other people's dramas... Then this protagonist is really amazing. You haven't seen it yet, how do you know that you know the plot in detail? This is because the logic does not correspond well. There is also a confusing connection between the two chapters. It seems that it was written in two days. An example is that just a second after time travel, he said I want to go back, I want to go back to my time! Then the chapter broke, and the connection to the next chapter is, I should have been electrocuted to death and I can't go back... This 180-degree turning point is very abrupt and 100% dramatic. If you are a new author, then I would say that your writing is very good. The articles you write are better than 99% of people in China, but you still need to work harder. If you are not a newbie, then I will add this: 1% of China's 1.4 Billion population is 14 million people. Do we have 14 million online writers? This is your job. You have to support your family. You have to take it seriously. Otherwise, find another job. The reader will be difficult to maintain.

I have read Chapter 17 and am waiting for the update. The writing is very smooth and in line with Yang Guo's character. Although he is a time traveler, he is very similar. The book is very comfortable to read. For now, the biggest problem is that the layout is small. There are no external enemies, no pressure to upgrade, and no various goals. It is best to sublimate this small world to Gaowu or Xianwu to have a writing title.

First, the author has not read the original work and is just messing around. The names are confusing, the relationships between the characters are inaccurate, and the inheritance of martial arts is incorrect. Second, the protagonist is a selfish villain who has achieved his ambition to the extreme. As a disciple of the Quanzhen Sect, he wore a Taoist robe and visited a brothel in broad daylight, and even got into an argument with a singer who played the piano and beat her up. It was really awesome. . . It turns out that the protagonist practices martial arts to bully other women? What if the protagonist visits a brothel without taking off his Taoist robe? Do things without considering the consequences? If I could give points, I would give at most one star out of five. I would not give zero stars because there is no option for zero stars.

The protagonist is a 27-year-old doctor of traditional Chinese medicine. Not to mention that he is not bad at both business and commerce. He didn't know his identity at the beginning, so he first revealed the truth about Ren Quanzhen. Ordinary disciples may not know about Xiantian Kung. It's like going to someone else's house and sneaking around to expose their family income. If he doesn't beat you, who will beat you? After going up the mountain for a few days, he won't find his own master to learn the sect's precepts. He also secretly learned swordsmanship, not to mention that you can master it with just a second glance. A doctor of traditional Chinese medicine at least has an understanding of the traditional master-apprentice culture. He also preconceivedly looks down on Yin Zhiping. He thinks that his martial arts is poor, but at least he is better than you who don't know anything. The original problem is that he looks down on Yin Zhiping because Xiao Longnu is beautiful and who is not herself. Would you still do this if you were ugly? I have always been entangled with Zhao Zhijing. Zhao Zhijing has a small belly and chicken intestines, and you are not bad at all. He feels that he was brought by Guo Jing and everyone looks down on him. In the original work, Yang Guo was a child, but now you are an adult and you are still like this. Quanzhen Religion is a combination of Confucianism, Taoism and Buddhism. I don't go to my own master to learn the terminology of Taoist classics. I just pick up the Toad Kung Fu and practice it blindly. I feel like I have a doctorate in traditional Chinese medicine. I should not understand it or not. Moreover, Yang Guo memorized the Quanzhen Dao Song in the original work. He didn't practice Toad Kung Fu all the time after entering the ancient tomb. I just read a few chapters and saw that your behavior is really incomprehensible. It is completely inconsistent with the level of a doctor of traditional Chinese medicine. A high school student is better than this "doctor" here.

Author, Dragon Knight, please change his name, Yin Zhiping is a hero against gold!

Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu don't separate their families, no matter how they work together, you will definitely not be popular if you change this setting

The plot has no foreshadowing, the protagonist's setting is a bit contradictory, and there is a big gap between the character at the beginning and the current character. And it's an unfounded personality difference. At least people have to know why he did that. The same thing is done, write well, don't need to pay for it, and I haven't started charging yet.

Li Mochou simply said that Louis Koo's version of the Condor Heroine is the most beautiful character without any controversy! In fact, Guo Fu is not bad. Young people will inevitably have periods when they are naive. Putting aside their naivety, she later matures and is very suitable for being a wife! After collecting all the bad women in it, this book will be huge🔥! Think about Li Mochou 3: Master and Disciple Serving One Husband, how can readers of the novel not love 😏 Women are not bad, but men don't love them 😃

It actually made Li Mochou's belly big, oh, oh, oh

Dugu Nine Swords is such an awesome game, why shouldn't I learn it? Or do you think it is practiced by disabled people? So how to use Dugu Qiufei?

Okay, this is not about the divine eagle, but about a hodgepodge. Isn't Yi Yun and Yi Tianxing a character from the young Zhang Sanfeng? This is already written in less than 100 chapters?

The Condor Heroes! The Condor Heroes! I feel like I just used a name and wrote the rest, I really don't understand it🌚

I'm sorry, I'm sorry! 🙏🙏

It's pretty good for newbies, but there's something wrong with the last two chapters. It's because the busker offended you. You just wanted to have fun watching the busker, and you blackmailed the busker. .

The contract has been sent out, hurry up to invest, collect and vote!

Adding your own original plot is worthy of praise, but it must also be logical. Go to the Western Regions to become a young master. . . Is there something wrong? Bai Tuoshan has learned everything there is to learn. Why are you running away?

When I saw Chapter 5, just like the chapter name, I was addicted. I can't bear it anymore, goodbye

There are too many original plots, and they have little to do with the main plot. It's purely for plot purposes.

I think the most important thing is to change the fate of Xiao Longnu

There won't be a mutant horse opening a harem in the future, right?

Author, you can take a look at The Master of Stealing Beauty, but don't be as stupid as him.

Although this book is terrible and has many other problems, I still want to talk about whether there are other Jin Yong martial arts fans. Don't be too brainless and don't have too many female protagonists. Really don't be too brainless.

It still feels okay🤓🤓

It feels like the author sells books as soon as he puts them on the shelves. It looks weird, not like it was written by a person.