Show Your Prestige from the Dragon Clan

After reading Chapter 45, I realized that the heroine was supposed to be a senior. I immediately burst into tears. I thought it was a sweet book about Little Monsters. I'd better watch Godzilla and Little Monsters.

The dragon clan I love to watch and the Ma Chao I love to play are combined, 666

If nothing else, nothing should happen to Eri Yi, otherwise she should be prepared to take the knife 🙂

There are too many fanfics about Eli Yi. You don't need to write Eli Yi to death, just let Eli Yi and Lu Mingfei be together.

Xiliang Jinma Chao!

Lu Mingfei, what the hell is that? Mother-in-law and mother-in-law are grinding and moaning. Does the protagonist still want to lick her hard if she is so strong?

There are too many articles about the Dragon Clan in Qidian. Are they all by appointment? Is anyone really watching? What Douluo Continent, what courtyard. Now add a dragon clan. The starting point was ruined by this group of people. The novel of must eunuch

JOJO smells too strong... That's not how you bring in private goods...

No, Dragon Clan plus King of Glory, does anyone really care about that ghostly King's background story?

The heroine is so incomprehensible. The more I watch it, the more I feel that I can't use my brain to read it. The author takes a closer look. Firstly, this heroine has no sense of substitution. Secondly, there is no process. Thirdly, she is very familiar. I really can't stand it anymore.

I think both comments are bad. When the author writes about the fate of those dirty things in the Gattuso family, he tries to make them as miserable as possible. This will make it enjoyable to watch. I saw them studying the protagonist and taking his blood before, and it really made me feel angry and angry.

1: No knife, don't worry 2: I hope everyone will comment more 3: Regarding emotional scenes, I hope you can give me some pointers to see if I should give up some of them and focus on slaying dragons and monsters.

Dear brothers, I think that senior sister is a bit annoying. Dear brothers, this is just my personal feeling. Also, isn't that senior sister just a light bulb when she goes to Japan? Then why do the protagonist and Eri get together?

Let's change the name Qiao Qianlan. It looks funny. It doesn't feel like a normal person's name, and it is incompatible with the dragon painting style.

I have a question, why did the protagonist go when the senior Qiao was confessed to? I didn't have a close relationship with the senior I just met when I entered school, right? Because someone at the door said a few words that the Japanese are invincible?

I have read dozens of chapters of this book so far, and the writing and fighting are relatively fluent, but I have a question: Why do I read so many Dragon Clan fanfics that a senior sister said a few words to the protagonist in the early stage, and then developed a strong bond with the protagonist? Can we still take advantage of the protagonist's strength? It feels a bit homogeneous to me. . . There is a feeling that these senior sisters are shameless green tea bitches. Hey, what can I say? Keep up the good work, author...

It doesn't matter what happens to the Japanese branch, but don't use Angers as a knife. Is it okay for the secret party to use it as a dog? The Japanese are not good, and the European ghosts are even less good.

It's impossible to read what's written later. It's a bad work.

There is no eunuch, the author is reviewing for the exam

Eri Yi can just give her a good ending, and just treat Herzog as a moon-shaped old bug and complete the mission. Forget her as the heroine I'm so tired of watching it I feel bored because there are so many stories about her as the heroine. It's just like writing a Magic Forbidden fanfic, the heroine Misaka Mikoto has a headache.

By the way, the author is good at writing about Ma Chao, but why not write about Sikong Zhen, who shatters the darkness with thunder!

First of all, I would like to thank book friend 20170611184244116 for his long review and analysis. Only by facing shortcomings and loopholes can people grow. I hope everyone will pay attention to it. I can be considered a newcomer. To be honest, writing about dragons is quite stressful and challenging, especially after reading Brother Shui's book... So I want to write more relaxedly, but I can't be reckless. If you can't beat it, you can't beat it. Everything has to go through a process. I planned to write about the heavens from the beginning. I hope everyone understands.

The author always makes jokes at inappropriate times. It's very exciting, otherwise the results should be better.

There is no trace of Senior Sister Qiao who often appears in the previous article. The plot after Xingyue returns... Is a bit difficult to describe, but it seems to be okay. The supporting cast can't keep up and needs to be strengthened.

Give the boss the divine bow

At present, it seems that if it is cut, it will not grow back.

Is there any Dragon Clan fanfic? The protagonist has nothing to do with Kassel Academy. He is a mixed race cultivated by the state.

Eunuch U ´꓃ ` U?

Can the author write novels? The five books are either bad or eunuchs

I hope the author can see it To be honest, I have written a lot of books, but not many in Honor of Kings, let alone good at homework. Most of them are urban game articles, and there is no article about using the characters from Honor of Kings as golden fingers that I like. I think the equipment inscriptions, hero's skills, and hero's lines in Honor of Kings are all good as cheat codes. I have only read one book in this category, and only a small section in the middle. It tells the story of Ming Shiyin in the world of Douluo. This short paragraph is pretty good, but the rest is not so good. I hope the author can write better, please come on! I also hope that more books of this type will appear.