Bleach: Leaves of Seireitei

Wow, this book is okay, although the name and introduction are very shoddy!! But the smell of death is quite strong!! The characterization is also pretty good!!

In fact, I still like this book overall. It is said to be a self-motivated article, but I also became excited. But I feel that the plot transition is too stiff, which is a bit of a pity. However, recently, Death fan fiction has been popping up like bamboo after the rain, so I'm quite happy about it.

I feel like there are some contradictions in the character design of the protagonist. The sword he wears and the description of Naruto both indicate that he has traveled through time. However, when it comes to the plot, he doesn't know anything. Whether it's the death of Kariyashiki, Hontama, or Aizen, it feels like he knows nothing. You say he is a person who has traveled through time and doesn't know about Death. Well, he knew the names of Shunsui and Ukitake when he saw them for the first time (Chapter 9), and even though he had never seen Niryuri before, he could easily call out their names when he was in the Maggot Nest, and he could also remind Niryuri of the essence of the spirit child. Do you think this is something that a time traveler who doesn't know the God of Death can say? I really don't know whether he knows about Death or not. And to be honest, I really don't know why he is the deputy captain of the fourth division. You said that if you don't like fighting, then what are you always doing in front of Unohana? You act reluctantly every time Unohana calls you to sparring, and that's n times. You said that you were afraid of trouble, why didn't you just become the captain? The things that can make the captain take action are the least. You said that you like Unohana and want to pursue Unohana, but there has been no movement for hundreds of years. This is really a stretch. People in the same period got married, and even the son of the same period, the protagonist's apprentice Byakuya, got married. There was no movement for you, and you were really speechless.

When will I fall in love with Sister Hua I can't wait 😭

Captain of the First Gotei 13th Division

I'll give you four points out of ten. Whether it's the timeline or the fact that you first know the plot and then gradually don't know the plot after time travel, it's a poisonous point. It's very unfriendly to the original fans. It's okay for those who have only read the fan novel Death. After all, they don't know the plot and some details! Generally speaking, it is not suitable for the original party!

Before entering the anime plot line, this is a masterpiece, very interesting. But from the beginning of the plot line, it feels like it was written by a different person. Both the writing and the story are greatly compromised. More than 50% of the plot is a complete retelling of the anime. Moreover, the plot line has basically not changed, and the protagonist's presence is extremely weak, making it more and more boring the further you read.

After reading Chapter 16, I couldn't help but complain. Before Shutara Senjumaru was selected to Team Zero, he originally worked in the Technology Development Bureau, and now she is the most junior female member of Team Zero. The Technology Development Bureau was established by Urahara Kisuke. Urahara Kisuke's predecessor, Hikifune Kiryu, was selected for the Zero Division 110 years before the plot began. So Senjumaru became the Zero Division 100 years before the plot began. Why didn't you look up the information and write the novel?

Nowadays, the animated Millennium Blood War is a big hit. Nowadays, writing about the God of Death will easily become popular if it follows the flow of traffic. The early bird catches the worm. After all, there are very few people writing about the God of Death at the beginning.

. . . No matter how you look at it, it shouldn't be this result.