Was Eliminated from the Opening Draft

After reading more than 60 chapters, the protagonist acted like a licking dog and gave away more than a dozen songs. I couldn't bear it. Assigning a beautiful and well-connected female dog-licking protagonist to the protagonist was all kinds of pretentiousness, but I couldn't bear it. In Chapter 63, when the protagonist was a turtle, I couldn't help but die of poison. You are a bunch of ordinary people eating in a restaurant. When you meet a popular celebrity, you get drunk and go crazy. You stop the protagonist and his group from leaving, tease the female companion next to the protagonist, push the protagonist, and ask the protagonist to sing. The protagonist does not call the police or resist, but he still does it. Good guy, instead of requiring the protagonist to have an amazing burst of force, it wouldn't be difficult for the protagonist to know a little bit about the law and call the police, right? If we record a video of this incident and hand it over to the police as evidence, will it be a few students or celebrities who will suffer? The protagonist is afraid of this and that, just like a bastard.

After reading it, I only have one sentence: I can only say that the author does not know the value of Jay Chou.

"There is nothing to regret." Lin Ning no longer had a reserved expression at this moment. Facing Yun Qing's inquiry, he shook his head carelessly and said: "After all, it is external. As long as my strength really reaches that level, I believe I can do it without relying on external forces. It just takes a little longer!" Lin Ning really has no regrets, and even because of today's encounter, she is even more determined that her decision is correct. You know, even the chairman of Parkway regards Tian Tian as his niece. This shows that Tian Tian's family is really not comparable to him, so it is better not to delay others. The above is an excerpt from the original article, which is obviously inconsistent. Since I think I can do it, why do I feel inferior and not worthy of others? Not to mention that your tiger body makes others voluntarily become dogs, but you have also shown the confidence that a world's resources deserve, right? This kind of thing relies on actions, not on your own inspiration and brainstorming. Since you think you can succeed, why can't your brainstorming be as good as others? Besides, Tian Tian is willing to wait for you, so why are you being pretentious here? Do you understand something like a man's commitment? As I write this, I suddenly have an idea, which may not be correct. Either the author is suffering from literary youth syndrome, or he wants to imitate the regretful feeling of traveling at 5 centimeters per second? So if I guess right, I can only say that the author really deserves to be half-dead after writing the book for so long. That being said, it's better to take a closer look at what the market is like now and what else can make readers spend money.

The writing is very retarded! I can't stand it!

The naive pursuit of dreams gives way. That scene was shady. An elephant that relieves sorrow or is tamed does not have to be ugly. Is it true that I can't chase my dream, but I can still play guitar and sing. It's so outrageous that I'm going to open the door to the outrageous thing.

The plot is average. I only have one thing to say. The current author writes female protagonists and female supporting characters. 9.9999 Out of 10 of them will make you sick and make you vomit! It's a thief to destroy books! It's really all about committing suicide!

How many of the staff behind the show started gathering to say bad things about the former as soon as the former left? How many people would say bad things about another person in public with a bunch of colleagues? What a downer!

Is it necessary to be so deliberate in order to create a conflict? After drinking, he had a conflict with a top-notch person. The top-notch solution was to call the police and go to the police station, and the manager even agreed. This is really a paparazzi for nothing! !

I read the first few chapters and then skipped to chapter 90. I laughed when I saw the company and the protagonist after the protagonist's beating incident. Company: Respond silently and wait for the heat to dissipate. The company's statement was adamant: If you fight, you will fight. Why are there so many? ? ? Protagonist: The company did the right thing. There is no evidence, so we can only respond this way. This kind of countermeasures would definitely not be possible without cerebral thrombosis for more than ten years. Summary: You are so poisonous! ! ! Death from poison.

If you don't rush to the street, who will rush to the street? Everyone who writes about chasing dreams and innocent hearts has basically jumped to the street. How can this song be worth your praise?

Abandoned the book, the main character is a reborn song copycat with no talent of his own, Zhao Zhicheng didn't report the matter to the police on the spot and was incompetent, I really don't understand the bullshit reason to give up on Tian Tian

Can you please stop writing girls as idiots, and don't write boys as IQ losers? What I hate most is that girls turn into idiots when they see them.

The author is not short of money and doesn't care if anyone reads this novel, but we readers have no time to waste on this novel, because it is really too poisonous. In reality, we mortals have been beaten enough by this society, so we want to find some solace in novels, but your novel is more social than society, and I strongly do not recommend falling into it! Not only poisonous but also irritating

I have read that it is definitely a poisonous weed.

The protagonist's name is: Lin Ning The protagonist's sister's name is: Lin Ling Do you think they have the same pronunciation? Ling is the same as ning?

If there is no such thing as "a son wants to be raised but his relatives don't wait for him", then the Chinese language may be different. . . Every time I see modern people using ancient proverbs and poems to show off, I can't accept it at all. . . The foundations are all different. . .

If you are already paralyzed by the poison, you won't try the poison because it will cause the disease!

After reading Chapter 41, the protagonist turned into that Tiantian and kept writing about her. After writing more than 40 chapters, does the author not know what to write? I can't stand it anymore!

It's too fake, a time traveler, even if you know the memory of your predecessor, what's the use? Have you merged with her soul? Do you understand his skills? No matter how you identify your parents, where are your previous parents? It is said that time-travelers are lonely. If you write casually and carelessly like you, even if you are asked to copy the lyrics, will you sing it? Really want to laugh

There are too many poisonous points. What the hell is Tian Tian? You can't lick the senior sister like this, right? You really treat the works on earth as cabbage! ! !

You are too young and can't write emotional dramas, so don't write dawdling ones. The protagonist's talent and character have always been profiled from a supporting role, but what this character does is also decisive. A self-disciplined person's character should be masculine, self-confident and independent, and have a persistent belief, rather than being timid in doing things. The character should always be inconsistent in his portrayal.

There is no system for books written by system... Then the copyright issue of the song has not been written out, so I keep saying it is original, and then I start singing and uploading it to the Internet. If others register it first, I can also sue the protagonist.

If you can read my book review, if you are a person who wants to make money while standing still, don't read this book, otherwise you will be angry to death.

After reading more than 150 pictures, I really couldn't bear it anymore. The characters in this book are basically brainless and ruthless. Did the author write the book to irritate people?

After being poisoned, the heroine actually let someone else convince her

Try releasing ten songs at once? 😅The most obscene author. Gone!

After reading a few chapters, the feelings and writing style of a third-year junior high school student are disgusting to death. This man has no self-respect in his words and deeds, he is just a clown, sensationalist, and a loser in his existence.

I feel comfortable when I see everyone is uncomfortable

I have to say that you, the author, are the first person to make me abandon a book halfway through. You are so awesome.

I don't want to say anything more. People who read it will criticize the author.