Marvel Legion Lords

The various characters here, agents are not like agents, capitalists are not like capitalists, politicians are not like politicians, bodyguards are not like bodyguards, all the characters including the protagonist are just like kindergarten children playing house!

Legions of Astartes and Krieg are also available.

Just too little

A good subject matter was wasted by the author. It seems that the author has little social experience, and the various identities of the characters are too childish.

It's too white, too childish, and the protagonist has a lot of confusing operations. Because the city upgrade requires 1,000 people, I only recruit more than a thousand people and don't want any. Hydra inexplicably wants to destroy the country for an unknown high-energy item, or is it to prevent the news from leaking? ? ? , The country was destroyed and yet the news was not leaked. In this World War II, the information was blocked. Even if the small country of ten people was destroyed in reality, there was overwhelming news, and Coulson was still in it. Is it really not hidden at all? The entire beautiful country is Hydra? Moreover, other people believe whatever the protagonist says without any doubt. He has such a big face and is really thoughtless.

I saw Chapter 34. This is a fake king. He feels like a squad leader. He is probably a character who takes action in everything himself. What's the use of accepting him?

There are 2 options, one of which has no reward. This is a crappy choice. Isn't the protagonist a system tool?

Forcibly advance the plot? Not giving the protagonist time to develop

There are also people writing about Marvel countries. I remember one of them was about a small island in my own country that could be submerged at any time, and the protagonist also summoned technology and military talents just like in this book. Then I saw something. I bought medicine. It should be anti-inflammatory medicine or cold medicine or something. I bought it after driving a mecha to New York and causing a scene. I stopped reading this when I saw it. You can buy medicines from any drug store.

This book is really useless and has too many flaws. Shen Nong tried his luck and entered it by mistake.

The creativity of high school students, the writing style of junior high school students, and the logic of elementary school students!

It would be best to change the Invincible Golden Body. It's not completely "invincible". It's better to just call it a Golden Body or, more bluntly, call it something like advanced defense improvement.

There are too many poisonous points. Wakanda is originally a reclusive person. It doesn't even know what it is, but it keeps asking people to hand it over again and again. I'll hand it over to you! Still saying over and over again, I just won't give it to you. Help Iron Man awaken? He woke up after being imprisoned for a day and two people died around him? I only started thinking about the problem after I was almost killed. 123 Is just a primer. Your change is like a bomb with only a fuse but no explosives. What's the difference?

We just heard someone calling us,

Normally speaking, Thanos will not send his subordinates until the Ancient One is dead. The creation of Avengers One was started by Loki. After all, Loki is from Asgard. The Chitauri are considered cannon fodder, so they did not take action. Black Glory 5 will be killed by the Ancient One if he appears on Earth.

The author should just go to work honestly. His writing skills are not good and his writing is too childish.

I can't stand this chapter when I see Tony's opportunity to mature. It feels like both of them have been forced into a halo of intelligence. Author, which Marvel universe or movie universe are you writing about? It feels like the author only knows a little bit about Marvel. Maybe he can't even scratch the surface, but he only understands a little bit. I'm addicted. This book has good ideas, but the writing style is terrible.

When an African shouts, "Phoebe will have a clear day," are you telling a bad joke?

The writing is too weak, all the characters and plots feel like a joke

Hydra has its headquarters in Sokovia. This is very embarrassing.

The writing style is not very good, the writing style is too simple, blindly YY, and simplifies the world. The characters seem to have low IQs, and the plot is irritable.

Where has our Great China Spear Bureau gone? ?

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The problem with this book is a bit serious. The most serious thing is that every major event is written extremely poorly. I admit that Marvel is in deep water, but that doesn't mean there is a boss for every event. It is true that New York's battle with Thanos is very strong, but it is too much to be beaten back by the protagonist group when all the cadres under Thanos are almost exhausted. The five Obsidian generals are already the strongest combat units under Thanos. The author pulled them to fight against the protagonist group as soon as the author came. Unless the demons change the Thanos army, they will really be eliminated. After Thanos, there will be no one left. I really can't imagine whether the magic power will still be as strong as it should be after the magic reform. If Thanos, the heart of the universe, is created, the protagonist can be killed directly. In the subsequent civil war, a doctor organization and Dr. Zola were suddenly created. Which of these is not a big boss level character? It is too easy to be pulled out by the author just because of a trivial matter to improve the performance of the protagonist. Every one of these big bosses will have to be magically modified by the author in this way. In the end, they will really break away from the Marvel setting and embark on the path of fighting gods. Events happen too frequently, and the explosive troops have to have time to develop, but every time the author explodes the troops at the same time as the event occurs, and it is really tiring to watch a big boss in every incident. I personally feel that this book is very good if it focuses on development and uses events as a auxiliary, and development itself should be the selling point of this book. Now the reason for finding events to trigger development is distorted, and the ones who take action are the big guys. The content is shifted to writing about battles, but the strength of these big guys is ignored. As the enemy's strength becomes too high, there is a possibility that the power system of the whole book will collapse.