Conan: I'm Really Not an Undercover Agent

Search for Conan fans and click on the latest update to find this book. It looks like a new book written by a newbie, please give me some feedback. I said in the chapter review that the author's choice of words and sentences seems relatively immature, mainly from two points: 1. The author tends to miss some elements when writing sentences. For example, when introducing rakia wine, write "usually 40%". Although it is not difficult to understand that what the author wants to write is the alcohol content, the lack of these words makes it feel awkward. 2. The author uses commas too lazily. In just three chapters, there are several sentences of two or three lines with a comma, and they are not jokes, just ordinary descriptions. Come on, who can bear fifty or sixty words in one breath? Both of these problems can be solved with a very simple method: read it after writing it. If reading silently doesn't work, read it aloud. When you find something is wrong, you'll know you need to make changes.

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Why have you finished this book? This introduction is very attractive.