My Youthful Love Story Is Always a Mess

I feel pretty good, come on, author😃

ε=(´ο`*)))Oh, won't it be updated?

Well written, good luck to the author!

Yukinoshita Harano

It's really hard to have no one to talk to 😭

The plot of the first volume is extremely boring (the Sobu Gao part at the end is slightly better), but fortunately the "time travel" setting is quite interesting,,, In the second volume, once the main character's memory disappears and he returns to before liberation, the setting remains unchanged from the original work. Well, there is just a new sister in the character who doesn't have many roles and is not likeable,,, so the plot is not as good as Du Hang's writing and has no exciting points, and the setting is also nothing new. This is not just a piece of cake And what is the connection between the first and second volumes of yours? The plots of the two volumes cannot be connected at all. Isn't it completely disconnected? This is not a separate volume. It is completely divided into two unrelated books Since you added the setting of "time travel" in the first volume, won't the second volume be connected after that? I don't want it to be If the protagonist retains his memory, then you can do reverse time travel, multiple time travels, or memory flashbacks. You can have the protagonist travel back in time ten years later, you can have other female characters who have lost ten years time travel back in time, or you can use some tricks from the guardian of the island of God in the first volume. Can't you come up with something new in the setting?

The writing is too bland, and there is not a single explosive point. Every time I thought something would happen, it ended up being superficial. Even the original work, which is more about daily life, has several explosive plot points.

Boss, do you still remember this article?😭

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