The Road to the Double Pupil That Covers the Sky

So this is the disadvantage of writing about indigenous protagonists. They are shocked at every turn, they have never seen the world, they have to consider rationality, they can't pretend to be cool, they are always in danger of life and death, they are enemies of life and death, they are beaten and killed, they are manipulated and threatened, and they have to look at other people's faces in everything they do. It is estimated that the writing style of Dou Po is not particularly top-notch now, and it is difficult to read through a lot of life and death crises. Therefore, Tudou's Yuan Zun and the Great Master, although there are many trials, are developing more and more in the direction of Xiaobai's cool writing. The plots of being chased and threatened are much less. The protagonist is written to be extremely talented, strong, and invincible, and has transformed to perfection

This book starts from the earth. After the coffin was lifted in Kowloon, he separated from Ye Fan and went to Ziwei. The main plot will be on the Ziwei star. New book and newcomers. If you have any shortcomings, please discuss in the comment area. If you like it, please collect it and vote for recommendation. There will be two updates a day.

I'll go, author, come on, it's very interesting and innovative so far. First of all, the protagonist's cheat seems to be from the Zhetian trilogy, and it's not out of touch with reality, it's not that outrageous. Secondly, it also adopts the indigenous method of double pupil talent. It's good so far, keep going (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

No matter how the author whitewashes the people of Ziwei Ancient Star, it can't change the fact that the monks of Ziwei Ancient Star are rubbish. When the protagonist has the strength later, he still won't know how to clean up. At most, he will kill a few rubbish to establish his authority. In the end, he will be like Ye Fan, giving up for the sake of the so-called strong man, and in the end he will still become the Holy Mother in fan fiction!

There are so many sources of cultivation. . . You thought it was the Holy Eucharist. . . .

Earlier in this book, I was told to quit. An urbanite exploded with potential and killed a monkey. But how did you endure the injury? You are really awesome at using disinfectant alcohol. Why didn't it hurt you to death? Is your 20-centimeter wound still fake after being injured and still walking normally? If you fell from a height and rolled over, are you really not a human being?

You will be useless if you write the book Supreme Bone and Double Eyes! These two are based on the special laws of heaven and earth in the chaotic ancient times! And the nine heavens and ten earths that cover the sky cannot give birth to these two things! Especially the Supreme Bone, which is said to be born supreme!

I laughed when I saw Chapter 55! The protagonist has obtained the inheritance of Taiyin Human Emperor! The result is to repay the kindness of the traitor who destroyed the inheritance of the Human Emperor! 😆😆😆😆😆. It can be said that the entire human race of Ziwei Ancient Star are white-eyed wolves and traitors! Like the Ancient Sun Emperor in the original book, he is simply a holy mother bitch. The monks in the Ziwei Ancient Star cultivation world usually suppress and exterminate the human emperor's bloodline, or watch indifferently, or add fuel to the flames, but in the darkness and turmoil, facing the Forbidden City Supreme, they wag their tails like a dog and beg for mercy, and finally have the nerve to beg the Great Yang Holy Emperor! The funniest thing is that the Sun Holy Emperor only had one human skin left and still agreed.

The Supreme Bone persuades them to retreat. The laws of the world have changed. It can be said that the Supreme Bone will not appear since Emperor Huangtian. Zhetian is more broken than the perfect law, how could it possibly give birth to the Supreme Bone? It can be said that the biggest flaw of this novel is the Supreme Bone. Everything else is fine (only my personal opinion)

This book has a very good start. There are currently no poisonous points, and the character of the protagonist is nothing to criticize. All members have online IQs, and the talent for double pupils is also very good . The current talent for enhanced eyesight is quite reasonable, and the relationship with the original protagonist is handled well. There is no hatred or intention to add to the dog, and the opportunities are arranged properly. Well written

Good guy, those who wrote about Chongtong have not survived yet.

Zhetian Fanwen If you don't go to Beidou, you will feel like you have no soul.

This book is like chicken ribs, tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The protagonist has double pupils, only the Ten Fierce or the Young Heavenly Emperor can compare with me. I suggest that the heroine be Huo Lin'er. After all, she is an ancient emperor and a Qilin. She can return to her ancestors and evolve into the Ten Fierce. Moreover, although the ancient Qilin emperor beheaded himself as the Supreme, he did not launch a dark turmoil. He also cares about his children. He is not as indifferent as other Supremes. He has lost his humanity and just wants to grow up with his children. Therefore, the ending of the fairy is also very tragic, so I suggest that Huo Lin'er is the heroine. She can neither turn into a vase in the later stage. The resources she possesses can not only help the protagonist, but also bring a supreme level of help to the protagonist, which indirectly changes the fate of the ancient emperor Qilin. Moreover, both Beidou and Ziwei's goddesses and saints are not good at it. They are all vases in the later stage.

There are not many fan books that have their own stories, good writing, smooth plots, and online IQs. The best one I have ever read is the one by Wu Shi His Father. Unfortunately, it was updated a year later. Now I have encountered this one again. I hope the author can stick to his original intention and not change the outline due to the will of the readers (this is how some good novels are changed into unreadable ones). Write the story you want to write. Also, please read more and don't use eunuchs. I really can't find any good books to read 😁

Black Emperor. It's a pit. Whoever you follow will die, whoever you follow will destroy your family and your life.

I have read so many Chongtong novels, but I have not finished any of them. They are all eunuchs. I feel like I have been cursed by the red hair 💀

Fans don't read cool articles, but come to read conspiracy theories?

Isn't it good to join a force? It's too difficult to be a lone wolf, hiding in Tibet 😅

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

Many people have written about bells, cauldrons and other utensils. I think pictures are most suitable for the protagonist.

Where is the author? No longer updated?

Please withdraw it, this book is already out of date and the author has already published the next volume.

Those who say there is a system or something when opening the book will get bad grades! It's really cold now

I quite like this character, but the protagonist's brainlessness and forced pretense are quite speechless.

No🥚🥚you🙂

What is the name of the author's new book?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

To finish

The author writes very well, and I hope he will continue to work hard.