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It's really annoying to suppress the protagonist's realm. With so many magical skills, he still can't close the gap with other people.

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I would like to suggest to the author that the protagonist has too many opportunities and it is already very complicated. Instead of piling up opportunities like this, you might as well mention the realm. I don't understand why you insist on following the rhythm of the original work.

It feels like the protagonist has so many good things, but his cultivation level is only a little higher than Lin Dong. Does the author have to let the protagonist pretend to be super powerful and defeat monsters?

I just came back and discovered the finale. Let me share my thoughts on this book. I completely don't understand why the protagonist still wants to befriend Lin Dong when he already has a system? And give him Xuantian Baolu? He even didn't hesitate to sworn sworn sworn friends with Lin Dong? Throughout the whole book, I haven't seen Lin Dong being of any help to the protagonist. If that's the case, why do you still want to become sworn friends with Lin Dong? Isn't it wrong for you and Lin Dong to go your own way?

It's okay to have more female protagonists, it feels good.

There's been a lot of nonsense lately, and it's getting boring. Could there be less talk about self-introduction? I'm not interested in seeing these silly dialogues. Also, can the battle scenes not always have big hands with spiritual seals? This is martial arts training or physical exercise. The real thing is to punch to the flesh. You can see how Tudou writes it. If it doesn't work, I can just skip the battle and defeat him with just one punch. Write about your daily life, and think about your daily events carefully. It's easy to send out sweets if you have nothing to do. You really can't stand the big scene battle. Extremely stiff

Is it a little too complicated? Dragon Elephant, Ti Shu, Cang Tian Ba ​​Ti, just learning one of them well is enough, wouldn't learning all of them hold each other back? Where do you get so many resources for you to practice? A primitive true solution can make you invincible, but you don't practice well and just go here and there.

To be honest, don't write about the Divine Elephant's prison-suppressing power and the Overlord Body at the beginning. Super-class things like the Chaos Spells are better, and the Great Desolate Prisoner's Heaven Finger is worse than a slap from the Overlord Body.

Pig's feet are quite disgusting in the Gufu chapter