Dawn of the Red Dead

Well... This book can only be said to be not ugly. The most poisonous point in persuading him to quit was in Chapter 54, where he cut off the protagonist's combat power without any explanation, and made it clear that he would not be promoted back. The general situation is that after a demon pops up and forcibly weakens a wave of protagonists, the author jumps out and says that this book will not involve the mysterious side. It can be seen from here that if the protagonist encounters this kind of thing again, he will probably be helpless. To be honest, when I saw the Indians, I thought I was going to get into something mysterious from here. . . I think the problem of typos is not bad. Some places have obviously been corrected later. This attitude is relatively good. In general, this book lacks a big advantage for online books, that is, there is almost no improvement in the protagonist's strength, and the system's presence is also quite thin. It can even be said that the system just gives a castrated version of Death Eye (you can't shoot a headshot after opening Dead Eye), plus it prevents the protagonist from losing combat effectiveness due to being shot like a real character. Other than that, it is really useless at all, and it doesn't even provide a backpack function! Throughout the book, I saw that the main character's biggest hang-up now is the protagonist himself, and then the author cut off a third of his character with a knife when he couldn't act unparalleled and act recklessly against a group of people even if he had a hang-up. In ancient Greek dramas, deus ex machinas were usually used to save the protagonist. As a result, the author used a deus ex machina to do the protagonist's job. I really can't understand it. To be honest, if the strength is improved and the combat power does not collapse in the later stage, then the potential of this book is definitely very high. Over time, if you accumulate experience, you may be able to write a god-like work. As for this book, I can only say that the author's background is still a bit poor.

Read all the chapters in detail. I am a 10-year-old bookworm. This is the first time I have the urge to spend money (if not for the recent bad market conditions, I have been unemployed for half a year). My favorites are sandbox games like Red Dead Redemption, The Long Night, Horse and Blade, etc. I also like to read similar novels. This novel has the strongest sense of immersion. If you read every chapter patiently, it will not disappoint your expectations. It is very realistic. In novels, as long as the author's description is detailed enough, real and logical, you will feel like you are living in that Western world, imagining how to live better and more meaningfully with the system in place.

It was well written, and it ignited my passion for playing games at that time.

The prices are ruined to me. You can either follow the game exactly or watch it as a fan. Or use your brain a little to balance the unreasonable things. It costs you $30 to take a shower, $70 to kill five people, and $150 to get information. Do you think it is reasonable? Don't you feel uncomfortable yourself?

Why do so many people think that the protagonist sucks and is a good person? This was the case when I played Big Cousin 2. The honor value is always full. In reality, I have no choice. In the game, I want to be a good person.

Let me tell you, this is the most comfortable Red Dead Redemption fanfic I have seen so far.

Originally, there were a lot of typos that were forced to be read, but then there was a wave of forcible weakening in Chapter 54, which was temporary, but it turned out to be permanent, just for an uncertain future. Are you screening readers? I can see that the people who subscribe to your book are really die-hard fans. I guess even the die-hard fans will be force-fed in the future.

I posted about the economic system and saw so many book friends complaining about it. This is indeed a major poisonous point in this book.

After reading Chapter 108, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The previous chapter gave me a bright feeling. I thought I had found a good book. The economic system collapsed, no problem, but forcibly weakening the protagonist and being betrayed and uncomfortable, it passed in two days. I really can't understand it. It's not a big cousin at all. Moreover, the plot is unclear, the system disappears, and the protagonist's abilities are sometimes strong and sometimes weak. It's too lame.

I searched on a whim and found it.

I have been waiting for the author's new book to no avail. I have written a book myself, "Red Dead Redemption: I Have a Release Progress Bar", and I have just signed the contract. I welcome you to give me some advice if you have time. It would be great if the author can give me some suggestions.

After reading some of the previous articles, they are all right, but they don't take money seriously. I give ten dollars to random people I see, and then ask someone to get information and give me 150. I have been shot a few times, and I have worked hard to get a few thousand dollars. I will give half to a person who has done nothing to help you find out information. I will only give you as much as I want to bother you to do a bounty mission. I will give you this much when I see people. Say goodbye.

After reading Chapter 13, I was poisoned and died. Typos and grammatical errors made me question the author's cultural level. The protagonist's schizophrenic behavior and the collapsed economic system made me wonder whether the author had an outline and carefully considered the setting. This is a hands-on training for beginners, please proceed with caution!

(๑•ี_เ•ี๑) Let me give you a suggestion before you go, one code equals one code. The protagonist gradually transitions from a good guy to a virgin. If you don't handle it well, there will be another wave of dissuasion. The difference between a good person and a holy lady is that a good person has a bottom line and does what he can without overly harming himself. emm... You can screen out about one-third of the readers with just one photo.

Dear friends, if you have any suggestions, please write them in the book review. I am following the suggestions from my friends.

I've read dozens of chapters of this stuff. The main character has no main plot and it's all just random things. The character is portrayed in a way that makes people unable to immerse themselves in it.

This is the only Red Dead Redemption novel with the largest number of words that I can read at the beginning. Once you have played the game and truly experienced the plot, you will not say that it is poisonous because of some trivial things. Prices are just minor issues. It would be great if you can read them smoothly. Why don't you say it's unscientific and delete the game when he shoots you in the head when you are playing a game? They are all novels about virtual games, but they are still being compared with reality. This is not a real-life historical article written by him! It's like eating a pear to make it spicy, or eating a pepper to make it sweet. Why do you like to make trouble unreasonably? (The author continues to write, don't be affected by the rhythm of some people who feel like trolls. He often says that he has read dozens of books and asks him to recommend a new novel with tens of thousands of words. Isn't this just bad money? Excuse me? Have you ever played games?)

I don't understand it, and I think it's outrageous to chop the protagonist off because he's too strong. . . In a world with hot weapons and low magic, by lowering the protagonist's physique, is the author screening readers?

It's a pity book. I remember that it was noisy at first because of the unreasonable price setting. Later, it was probably because Goldfinger wasn't strong enough and it was set to make people injured frequently. I guess the author didn't want to be invincible without thinking. I guess it's these two points that make people run away. Later on, the focus is too much on Arthur's gang, and the protagonist is often invisible for several chapters. Putting aside these three points, it is a really good book with many attractive features. If you open a new book, remember to notify me.

It's not without reason that this book is not popular. It was bright at first, but after a hundred chapters it became increasingly difficult to understand. There is no clear main line in the plot, and there are many typos (which I can tolerate). However, a small Vanderlin gang has already written two hundred chapters. Important plots and characters have never been written in this way. Does fan writing have to follow the original work (game)? Has the author ever thought about how long, half a year, has passed since this book has written more than 300 chapters? Or a year? With this kind of writing, you can write a book in a year. There is no plot in the whole book. Forget it, the subscription fee is wasted again.

After playing the game to the end, I really felt like I had lost a very good friend. Rockstar created the character of Arthur so well.

I just like your half-dead look. After a month, I opened it and read six chapters.

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