Yu-Gi-Oh! Everyone's Duel Era

If you are new to reading this novel, you should be mentally prepared. This book contains the following elements Multiple times of identical and directly copied descriptions The protagonist's card deck is exactly the same several times (it was used once in another set of more than 100 chapters) There was no duel in more than thirty consecutive chapters (not even the protagonist participated), and there were many duels with long intervals The last thing is the most disgusting point for me: the protagonist has completely never seen a woman's character I ran away first

Main questions: First, there is no soul at all. You can't gain momentum when playing Blue Eyes. Why don't you play Red Eyes? You must show your so-called understanding of "Blue Eyes" when choosing Blue Eyes Awakening. Second, the protagonist is just a tool, not even a person, just responsible for delivering cards, aimlessly. The most important point is that this is the most uncomfortable thing to watch. While talking about Long Huiqiao crushing the environment, he is also afraid that the information will be exposed and targeted and he does not want to use it. Are you playing cards or cultivating immortality? Cultivation is a competition for resources. It depends on qualifications and opportunities. There will be no fundamental changes for a long time. You need trump cards. Are you afraid of being targeted when you hit Long Huiqiao? You can also play counterattacks. Changing the configuration is another kind of deck. I don't see how difficult it is to obtain cards anyway. There are all kinds of outrageous cards everywhere. Other questions: Why doesn't the protagonist have any bonds? Can he get one just by complaining all the time? The classmates all explained that things are very simple in this world, and the protagonist always talks about not having any bonds and does not see any initiative to improve it. Why watch Yu-Gi-Oh novels and anime? Because exciting games can be carefully designed, and this is the soul. Rather than playing cards for the sake of playing cards, making playing cards a world where playing cards is dispensable, you can just change it to something else.

Activate ~Rampage Magic Array, normally summon Aleister, effect search summon magic, link summon the Holy Demon Girl, Mei~arkaba! Shaddoll ~ Fusion with Nephilim, becoming a gravity controller, recycling Shadowdoll's Apocrypha, Midra ~ What! Link ~ Arrow confirmation, Green Locked Dragon ~ Forest Anaconda, Fusion Destiny, Divine Rush Man ~ Fusion Summoning, Destruction ~ Phoenix Man ~ Arrival, Hiding ~ In the toilet, immortal body!

Here I would like to talk about the areas where I personally feel uncomfortable, as some suggestions for the author. There are too many typos, and sometimes I can't even understand the meaning of the sentence. The most obvious typos are that a lot of "that" is written as "which" Description problem, I have read exactly the same description in many places, which even made me think it was a chapter error. The problem of the protagonist's presence is a matter of priority. In the plot of a cult versus a believer in more than thirty chapters, the protagonist can be said to have basically zero role, and it is also a battle between elves. This is a Yu-Gi-Oh novel, and what we are watching is a duel. There is no problem with elves fighting, but at least from my point of view, there are too many elves fighting against each other and the useless duel affects my perception Then there is the issue of the description of girls. I feel that the male protagonist is the same as if he has never seen a woman. (From my perspective) This description is very uncomfortable (see the picture below) Then my personal request? That's right, you can add some descriptions of secondary lines during the battle, just like the heroine's "unintentional words" when summoning the Rose Dragon. When the male protagonist uses the Longhui Qiao deck, successfully summoning and saying such words can completely increase the sense of satisfaction, otherwise it will be as boring as the battle record

A little suggestion, if it is not pertinent, the author can delete it. The author can consider the issue of level, that is to say, no matter how good you are in the future, you can never be considered a strong person now. I think it's a bit outrageous to go from level 1 to level 7, and you said he's close to level 8, so if the awakened elf is at the lowest level 4, Long Huiqiao can be considered level 5, but you can't go higher than that... And I'm not saying that the author is bad at emotional scenes, but It's not very touching. The author's foreshadowing all mentions his future achievements, so I hope the author can strengthen the description of the emotional drama. Besides, sometimes the author shouldn't be too absolute when writing. Just like only the silver dragon can match the elf dragon, my stardust sparkling form will also work. Such small mistakes make people feel a little uncomfortable. Of course, this may also be the author's writing habit. I hope the author can read this review, and I also hope that the author's books will become more and more popular

I don't know why, I don't feel anything when I watch it. I don't know who the protagonist is or what he's going to do. Anyway, I'm very confused.

The author's writing style makes people uncomfortable to read.

I can't stand it after reading five chapters. The author's writing style is so poor that I don't have any sense of empathy.

Who is the protagonist? I feel that what the author introduces is to give opportunities and promote the plot. The woman has the protagonist's attitude, because she is a dog licker. Some people protect her for free, and some people give her cards. Wow, so disappointing😔. The author is so happy with what she writes.

I feel that the protagonist's presence is not high

I feel like the protagonist has no real character at all, and the White Dragon deck didn't win the second episode, which is a bit strange.

To be honest, this book is a bit boring to read. Can you add some trash talk? Otherwise, it will be like reading a record of a duel and I will make you sleepy. You can use all the famous memes from Yu-Gi-Oh!

Later on, the protagonist's roles became less and less, so few that I wanted to watch the beginning to see who the protagonist was and what his name was...

I mainly read the beginning of this book. First of all, the name of the protagonist is not interesting, and it is hard to read without a sense of involvement. Then it becomes popular on TV that you shoot one by one and I shoot one by one, claiming that the mecha fortress is strong, just like the duel link. Then the protagonist takes out Long Hui Qiao with his backhand. You might as well just take out the twelve beasts. Passers-by say that the Five Emperor Dragons are awesome. It feels like a cross-era thing is suddenly given to the protagonist. It is quite boring and I have no idea of ​​reading further.

I have some small suggestions for the author. If I hadn't seen a friend say that the later writing was better, I wouldn't have read it again. Why? Because the previous writing is a bit wordy, you will also explain the monster effects that are not used in this duel, but this way it will feel very wordy. Why not change it to this effect and explain it when it is used, just like in the anime, I think Wei Hao should write less about emotional scenes, because those who like Yu-Gi-Oh basically know a saying: There is no woman in the heart, and the natural god of drawing cards is like the most popular I play cards in Duel City. Although there is a female protagonist, there are very few emotional scenes, and it is mainly about playing cards.

Well, although I know that the author wants to introduce the setting of the master and the contractor, the process, the process is confusing. I find it difficult to accept that Li Lu directly becomes a contractor. Is it because the protagonist's deck is very NPC? The author didn't bother to write out some of the reasons why Li Lu wanted to be the protagonist's contractor, which gave people an extremely licking feeling.

What I have read in the dozen or so chapters now is: there are a lot of typos and incorrect sentences. The author's worldview is almost inconsistent with logic. Synchronicity is still under development in round D but it has appeared a long time ago. In the previous chapter, it was said that everyone is a mortal bone deck. Moreover, the first duel with Pig's Feet was not as well written as the later supporting characters. The most important thing is that the (✪meaning✪unclear✪) female character that pops up at the beginning is really too abrupt, and the setting of the Master is also introduced. It's not in place, and your protagonist doesn't regard the servants as human beings at all. From the description in his mind, it can only be seen that he is thinking about turning the servants into double-playing tools to assist him. One more thing, the author should have a good understanding of the environment of Yu-Gi-Oh! I thought your mecha white dragon in the background was a DL, but the backhand stab turned into a pseudo-MD, but the operation of this pig's foot is not even as good as the animation GX. It also makes people attractive and emphasizes the killing of chickens and dragons. These words are speechless and have no effect on the development of the plot. It is hard to imagine that this is a book that has been signed and put on the shelves. Although I don't know how the backhand is written, but the author, can you please change the front part? It is really too dissatisfying.

Come on, there are still people writing about Yu-Gi-Oh these days?

Ah this. There is no electronic angel and Sogo's Long Huiqiao. Did you get a black eye😥

It is recommended to put them all into pieces😃

Can the author make the plot more coherent? It seems like a long time has passed between the last chapter and the next. Sometimes he uses several chapters to describe an unimportant scene. Playing cards is all about storytelling. There is no inner description or trash talk. Playing cards is written with reference to the Yu-Gi-Oh! Animation. Even if there is a setting that does not explain the card effect, the effect after the card is activated should be stated. For example, if your XXX is ineffective against my Chaos Ultra Dragon, I will activate Disruption to reduce the attack power of your monster. This kind of explanation only tells half and leaves half without mentioning the activation conditions, nor how much it is reduced, nor other conditions to let the opponent guess.

Self-recommended books are welcome to invest in and collect. Book title: Yu-Gi-Oh! Link Evolution. It tells the story of a newbie who doesn't know anything at the beginning, who finds out the truth about his father's disappearance through a duel, and builds bonds and gains friendship along the way.

After reading the first few chapters, I can't stand it at all. What the hell is written here?

Oh yeah, your investment is over 100, congratulations, I'll give you 14 recommendation votes

Come and pay a visit 2024-2-8 02:43 There are still two days until the Chinese New Year

Is this considered using a card from the international server to play the national server?

? ? ? In the first game, the Sphinx takes effect inexplicably. It's so outrageous. Why don't we change this? This is the first game. And even stepping on the two basic rules pitfalls of "Reverse Summoning is not reversed" and "Effect Destruction will not be reversed". It's understandable that the effect is misremembered. The basic rules are not clear, which will make everyone lose confidence in the author.

I read the first chapter and felt very good. Why did the comment section say that the author's writing style is not good and his taste is different?

Put the deck you want to see in the comment area