I Have a Sky Tower in Zhetian

There are a lot of bugs. The protagonist has no clear personality. Sometimes he pretends to be an outsider, and sometimes he acts like a licking loser. He even pretends not to understand, and the plot is inconsistent. Be careful.

Just finish writing after watching Zhe Tian! The Red Dust Immortal can already live forever, and his strength exceeds that of a true immortal, reaching the level of a quasi-immortal king. Not an Immortal King, there is a qualitative difference between a Quasi-Immortal King and an Immortal King. Weapons will not be changed, you will be given as much as you want as a holy weapon. Those sent by the Holy Land are all great holy soldiers, and there are a few who have imperial soldiers. The three powerful men can guess that they are quasi-emperors. What do you think of quasi-emperors? The quasi-emperor is too worthless. At this time, the Qing Emperor's suppression is still there, and those who can become saints are unborn talents. Almost all of them can be quasi-emperors in the future. The saint can take action across space, brother.

It's not an ordinary poison. I seriously suspect that the author hasn't finished reading "Zhe Tian" or read it randomly.

Oh my god, my dear earth, why can't there be more fans who can watch it?

In the age of the end of the Dharma, when there are no saints, how can a great sage not catch people from a distance even if he opens his mouth? The author has never seen Zhetianba, it disgusts me 💀💀💀💀

Come on, you didn't know this was Zhetian, but you called me Princess Yan Ruyu when you met, 666, slap yourself in the face?

What the hell is this? It's a bit embarrassing, and you dare to write a fanfic without even reading the original work. You are a talent.

After reading the first chapter, Yan Ruyu must be sick. Didn't you go in by yourself? You also asked the protagonist what he wanted to do. Is he suffering from persecution delusion? Or is it purely because of the author's poor writing style, poor thinking, and poor language description? This Tianji Tower is like setting up a fortune-telling stall. Passers-by do the calculations themselves. This article is just a person who came in and said that he looked at the plaque and said, "I can tell fortunes. Come and do the math. It's like a sales promotion. Isn't the author a salesperson?"

Does the emperor in front dare to dismount and fight me? That's how I feel about the emperor in this book. What about you? ? ? Also, the author has never seen anything related to Zhetian.

Has the author ever seen Zhetian...

The author just wants to catch the overwhelming heat, right? Maybe I didn't even read it

Be careful. Although this book is not poisonous, it is uncomfortable to read.

I don't know how to complain, the plug-in is so high-level that the protagonist has lowered his character. The time traveler doesn't know the details, but he doesn't know the basic information. The character of the protagonist in the text description is pretty good, but when it comes to women, he has an inexplicable aura of being a loser. , , It feels a little bit like a dog licking, and some places are contradictory. The Tianji Tower does not interfere in the affairs of the world, but you just take action just for the sake of a supporting role.? It gives people a feeling that there are no principles at all. It is better to show that I don't need to explain to others what I want to do. It does not reflect the unfathomable feeling of Tianji Tower at all. It gives people the feeling that this force is very powerful and knows a lot. The protagonist is probably a young man with a relatively high status in the force. How can it give people the feeling of a senior? Maybe the author's writing power is not enough to express what he wants to express, but it's okay.

Also, the author, you wrote that the system can only block the Great Emperor. What about the existence above the Great Emperor? This is illogical. Zhetian is the sequel to the Perfect World and the prequel to the Holy Ruins, but there are many powerful people who surpass the Great Emperor. For example, the ten ancestors on the Weird Plateau are all super The Yue Immortal Emperor exists in the Sacrifice Realm, as well as the Huangtian Emperor, Emperor Gu Brother, don't forget the Ruthless Emperor, the Wushi Emperor, the Immortal Emperor, and the Emperor Zun are all strong men who are about to become the Red Dust Immortal. Can you modify it so that all the strong men in this world cannot observe the protagonist.

The biggest failure in taking on a disciple. It suddenly became a drama

The author can actually hang this poem in his shop. The way of heaven has no beginning and no end. The peak of all laws can be seen in the void. A green lotus is shocking for eternity, and the nine saints soar into the sky and break the sky. Whichever of the Taiyin and the Sun is weak and strong, the hybrid Tai Chi will be king; The nine heavens will be crushed by the battle, and the immortal emperor will be undefeated and indestructible. Beheading me and enlightening the way will only disrupt the ancient times. The Emperor's Dragon Sword is an enemy to ten thousand people. Ascend to immortality and shine in the sky, King Jiuli shows his magical power. The ruthless man swept across the Three Thousand Worlds, and the cycle reached its peak. The God King in white clothes has always been cold and charming, and has an unparalleled and arrogant style. The red face and green silk hair pity the purple moon, and a leaf of mundane dust covers the sky.

For this Yun reader, Zhetian probably hasn't even finished reading it yet, and started writing the novel without understanding anything.

Zhetian fanfiction is a good book as long as it doesn't lick or criticize cruel people.

Since when did Beidou have Ba Ti?

Author, can you write a novel about buying a blind box in Zhetian, because Zhetian is the future of the perfect world, the past of the Holy Ruins, traveling to Zhetian to practice with Ye Fan, going to the past, conquering the Ertu Plateau in the future, and using Zhetian as the main world to travel through the heavens and worlds to train and then return to Zhetian to suppress all enemies. There are almost a lot of such novels, and there are books such as bookstores, sales of cans and blind boxes, etc. It's a cool novel, but there's not one single one. I opened a bookstore in Zhetian and was forcibly ended by the author after writing about 500 chapters. The protagonist led Ye Fan and others to the past to help Emperor Huang Tian, and then came to the future to solve the Etu Plateau with Emperor Ye Tian, Emperor Huang, and others in the future. It ended without writing. So I hope the author can write a novel about opening a bookstore in Zhetian or selling cans and blind boxes.

The author has not looked carefully at Zhetian, and there are obvious errors in many places. For example, the Beiyuan Wang Family and the Golden Family are not the same force. The underworld and hell are not the same force... Recommended by Shuhuang

Only Zhechui can write this kind of novel

Author, can you please read the novel I Open a Bookstore in Zhetian? Writing this novel is also a behind-the-scenes story, but when you write the protagonist this way, there is no sense of mystery at all. You should write the protagonist in a silent way, and a blockbuster style is the correct way to write it. Otherwise, author, you can write a bookstore story or a jar style novel again.

Author, when will you let the protagonist practice the skills of all heavens and worlds, such as the three thousand Tao skills of immortality, the sacred king's divine elephant's prison-suppressing power, the dragon's heart method of dragon talisman, the burning method of fighting through the sky, the martial world's great wilderness prison finger, the ten evil treasures of the perfect world, the six paths of reincarnation, the immortal sutra, and the method of transforming into an immortal emperor.

See Chapter 4: The Don's Lips and the Horse's Lips Are Not Conflicting

It's cool, but the author's timeline and character realm settings seem to be teasing me.

😅😅😅I am also drunk. . .

I hope the author can write a novel about selling jars in Zhetian, or a novel about selling jars in bookstores, or the most popular novel about answering questions, because the Zhetian Perfect Holy Ruins fandom has everything but lacks the bookstore flow, about selling jars.

Come on, author🙂🙂🙂

I think the protagonist can be more rational, be a little transparent, say something occasionally, and show his presence occasionally.