Hogwarts' Professor of Martial Arts

This is a farewell message. I want to leave some of my personal feelings and thoughts to the author, which is an attitude of giving suggestions. First of all, I have been following the story from the first chapter to the present. When I started Golden Chapter Three, I said, "It's amazing, the new writers nowadays are all monsters." Harry Potter, which has a strong story setting of Naruto, has a great sense of impact and comedy effect of "Ah, this will work". From getting to know the Russian mage during the arena competition to making his debut at Hogwarts, it was all very interesting and funny. Then when I was framed in Azkaban, the rhythm of the whole story took a turn for the worse. As a reader, I could no longer integrate into the story, could no longer understand the rhythm of the story, and the sense of dissonance exploded. Secondly, I personally like novels with themes of infrastructure, revolution, and redization. I also agree with the author's three views, and I also agree with many specific details, such as the protagonist's behavior. So the question arises, why did I feel that I couldn't stand it anymore, and then decided to abandon the article completely? My understanding of this is that it should still be story-centered, not stalk-centered, nor concept-centered. If it is the latter two, it will make people feel that you are just splicing together the memes, just like a boss in the comment area. After playing with the memes, you don't need to build a complete story - the plot follows the memes instead of following the protagonist of the story; and if you emphasize the concept too much, it will become rigid, turning the novel that pays the most attention to the story and the complexity of the story into a fable created to express the concept. In short, my personal feeling is that the author wants to stuff too many things into it. The protagonist in the story, including some outstanding supporting characters, will be very embarrassed, because he will become a commentator who serves to explain the concept, and become a puppet for the author to play with, instead of an independent person, losing his own character, his own purpose, and his other characteristics. In this case, the author is left acting alone in a puppet show. As a reader who was very optimistic about it at first but quit halfway through, I really look forward to the author's improvement. Because I really value this writing skills, concept, and outline. My personal feeling is that starting from Azkaban, the story falls apart - that is what someone in the comment section said about the werewolf killer. This collapse does not mean that the outline itself is unreasonable, there is nothing wrong with killing werewolves, and the follow-up operations are also very complicated. It is just because the author is too addicted to playing jokes. The behavior of the main characters and the rhythm of the confrontation suddenly become startling and sudden, just to catch the feeling... Writing such a long review, I hope the author can understand my feelings as a reader! I didn't mean to complain about anything. I didn't mean to stop reading and leave with a lot of complaints before leaving (although I did do that). I typed such a long comment on my phone because I was so sorry - the author please think back to your feelings about watching Jiang Ziya's movie. Everything is good, the characters are interesting, the production is well-made, and the story itself has great potential, but the director didn't want to tell the story, so he left it here to write an argumentative essay. Good guy, all the main characters have turned into word-reading machines...

This book should be called "The Red Ghost Wandering in Hogwarts" Funny Dog Head. Jpg It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. The author is a true book fan, a high-quality book fan, and a good book fan who can see his own thoughts. But it is foreseeable that the author must pay attention and must follow the trend of the times, just like a certain novel called "Goblin Notre Dame" that was once criticized. It is like a spoonful of mustard suddenly added to honey water, which makes people feel happy, but in the end it cannot meet the review conditions. There is no logical feeling, please do not follow the outline and go online. Please don't complain, the author, hold on.

He should not be called a physical arts professor, but a reformer.

It's very good. I look forward to how Lockhart will change the wizarding world. Hahaha. The description of the oriental style makes this Harry Potter fandom seem a bit weird, but it seems pretty good so far. There is no ten thousand-year heroine Hermione. It's okay to copy the original work without any cancer (^･ｪ･^). I hope I won't enter the palace too soon

First of all, the baldness gene is on an autosomal chromosome and is inherited dominantly in men and recessively in women. Draco Malfoy is known to be bald, so he has at least one baldness gene, either from his father Lucius Malfoy or his mother Narcissa Malfoy. Narcissa Malfoy comes from the Black family. The portraits of everyone in the Black family have appeared in the movies, and not a single one is bald. Therefore, there is no baldness gene in the Black family, so Draco Malfoy's baldness gene can only come from his father, Lucius Malfoy. Since the baldness gene is dominantly inherited in males, it is speculated that Lucius Malfoy must be bald.

Oops, the co-authored comment area is full of advertisements, okay, author, could you please delete them? Quite affecting the senses

It's really great, but I always feel that if it continues like this, it will either go astray or lose contact 😒

It's extremely poisonous. A text made up of memes cannot be called a novel. Also, I'm here to read a book, not to be a Virgin. I'm trying to overthrow the Ministry of Magic without losing anyone, and start liberating the house elves? The black uprising started before the red uprising was finished? After all, Nico is also a human being. House elves are nothing. Does anyone really think that if a pig roars and I am free, everyone must give up eating pork? Slipping away

Did the author rely entirely on his own ideas? Something didn't feel right after killing a werewolf. How could this happen during the trial? Malfoy doesn't have such a big influence. Do you write whatever comes to mind?

Good guys, the underground party is out.