In Da Jian, He Became an Angel and Entered the Paradise of Reincarnation.

I discovered one thing that all Samsara Paradise fans cannot escape from the same circle, and that is swordsmanship. I have read several books and they are all about swordsmanship. One thing I want to say is that I want to read something different, such as physical skills instead of swordsmanship, such as Master Fa or Undead Daddy. , Techniques are not only sword skills, there are eighteen kinds of weapons, which one cannot be written? Swords, guns, swords and halberds, as well as fists, armors, claws, there are too many weapons. It's not that the writing is not good, but I am tired of aesthetics, and I lost most of my interest when I saw sword skills.

Women's clothes kill sister Su, I really don't want to poke it.

We cannot imagine the happiness of Emperor Ou. . .

Listen to your uncle Pan's advice. This kind of suture novel is very deep and you can't grasp it.

I still can't hold it back, it's so poisonous, Samsara fandom doesn't ask you to kill your sister on the night, and don't come to take the girl's shadow. They are really three losers. They are still living together. When they get to the paradise, Dinisha still wants to become stronger, and the other two feel like they are just useless. The protagonist does not want them to work hard, not to mention they are only 10 years old. Samsara Paradise also talks about age, and the virtual identity in the real world is set to the three wives he has married. I'm afraid this is not the prelude to a harem, leave early and save your life.

The point is, isn't Big Sword a derivative world? Where does the overlord unit's overlord spirit come from and give it three paradises? The derivative world is completely controlled by the paradise. Where does the source of destiny and blood come from? If these things could be produced in the derivative world, they would have been killed by high-level contractors. From Morey's point of view, the timeline is closer to Bai Ye entering the reincarnation paradise than the ancient period, so the female destroyer has long since disappeared.

The first part is okay, but the second part is not satisfactory. Let's just let it be a little watered down. But in the end, it's like a tower defense battle world. What I want to see is the battle, not the bad show. As I write, I feel like I am not in the same rhythm.

There are simply too many unreasonable things to summarize, first of all. Your bloodline should be extremely low-matching. , The power is set from scratch. It's unreasonable that you still have a super long lifespan! According to your initial attributes, they are several times higher than ordinary people. How can your fragile body have such a long lifespan? Why can you survive in the universe? There are countless harmful substances in the universe, let alone the ability to fly. Will the body disintegrate when flying at super speed? Ignore friction? Ignore conservation of energy? Is the power of angels so overwhelming to you? It's not incomprehensible to start from scratch, but you have too many loopholes.

What the hell is the Great Sword Chapter about? In addition to a few people with the same names, is there anything like a big sword? It has nothing to do with character, worldview, etc. Why don't you write an original world? What's the point of wearing a big sword's skin?

When writing about Samsara Paradise, it should look like Samsara Paradise. I don't object to the popularity. On the contrary, I prefer to have good-looking fan fiction. But what is written here? A reincarnation paradise filled with stress and a near-death life has become a playground for you, and bringing girls is the most disgusting thing. Even if you change it to Apocalypse, what can I say? The concepts of the three paradises are different. Furthermore, to correct a mistake, the derivative world does not have the high-quality things you wrote. It is really inconsistent with your imposition. You can say that the current Great Sword World has some connection with the void. Later, this world will be eroded by the void, and then you will come back. Just like the Dead City. You really didn't write what you should have written, and you didn't do anything you shouldn't have written. A problem will arise if your strength improves too quickly. The rhythm will collapse. In the middle stage, you will have learned some skills but cannot show them in fighting. Then you will start to write about what you have gained, and then you will not be able to write anymore. What attracted me to watch it was Samsara Paradise, and what made me unable to stand it was also Samsara Paradise. The premise of fan creation is to rely on a big world view or a tone. Alas, take care of it author

What about your second talent? The end of the world also rewards the second talent awakening. As a result, I completely forgot about it. Moreover, the basic settings of the original work have been changed too much.

I couldn't help it anymore, so I complained a few words. The setting was seriously unreasonable. The first few chapters shocked me. Angel's skills are powerful and numerous, which is understandable, but why did you activate it so early? How weak were you at the beginning, and you didn't know what to do? You can refer to reincarnation, slowly add skills to him, and activate them slowly, instead of activating them all at the beginning. Also, the rewards in the system are too generous. You can just do a few small tasks without any effort, let alone risk your life. Why are there such generous rewards? Aren't you afraid of collapse in the mid-term? Also, I really can't understand bringing three oil bottles into the park. I haven't read Big Sword, and I'm not interested in it, so I skipped through all the plots about this world in your book. For reference, see Caesar and the silly king entering the park. I don't see why you are qualified to bring three oil bottles in. The park actually agrees, just because of your great potential for inheritance? It's your business to like big swords, and we can understand that, but to be honest, bringing them into the paradise is, firstly, too abrupt, and secondly, there is no benefit in sight. What's strange is that I didn't see that there is any bond in your relationship. They are just ordinary friends, not relatives or lovers. I can't see the benefits because what can they do? Entering the mission world, Bai Ye also narrowly escaped death, including his followers. What about you? Where are these three you brought? Are their followers not more potential than you?

The various data and plots are a bit confusing. I can only say that for an old bookworm like me, it is tasteless and a pity to discard.

Having cut down hundreds of thousands of people with two swords, it is really hard to understand that he has no expertise in swordsmanship. Aren't the characters in the original world of Samsara Paradise all trained by themselves? Isn't he also a level 70 or 80 grandmaster?

I just took a look at the protagonist's panel as of Chapter 22, and complained about the bigger problems: 1. The protagonist's skills and level Is this LV.1 Serious? Although the attributes do not exceed the attribute limit of the first level, what the hell are these skills, soul killing and level A instant death on the verge of death? You tell me this level? And it's basically passive. Do you want to get lucky and kill the goddess of luck? There are also a lot of damage reductions of about 50% that can be achieved at the first level? That's it, there's also a 15,000% life recovery speed increase when you're near death. You can just use a near-death invincibility. Like that ghost, he does not accept additional statuses that do not exceed the third level and indirect damage immunity of the same level. This wave is about cheating without pretending. 2. The protagonist's main equipment I was confused by the concept of blue quality and immortality. To be honest, you said that this concept of immortality is blue quality, which is true, and it has raised the average quality of blue quality. I would like to give the author a suggestion, just say it is the original sin object, that way it will be more direct. 3. Title This five-star title that can evolve into an eight-star title allows the protagonist to decide what to write in the future at the first level. Don't tell me about Brother Su Xiao's Shocking Waves. That TM is because the mission has no bonus, and it was only completed at the next eight levels (it seems). 4. Adventure Group Level The first-level SSS-level adventure group is outrageous, and this member, once the good guy found out that all the protagonists are female, the author might as well rename it the harem group. To sum up, this is an invincible self-pleasure harem novel covered in reincarnation. Although it can be seen that the author wrote it carefully, this is too outrageous. If it is original, no one will say anything, but this is a fan after all, so it is better to refer to the original work more.

Taking a girl in reincarnation paradise...😓

While watching the Great Sword chapter, I felt that the plot was a bit confusing. There are too many skill descriptions.

A new author, just because of the title of this book, will definitely pounce on it

The relationship between Samsara Paradise and contractors is a bit like that between a boss and a worker. It doesn't matter if they squeeze the protagonist to the death. Do you think this is reasonable for a protagonist with such high strength to enter a low-level world to collect the paradise's wool?

This book can be renamed "Water"

It feels like there's nothing to see anymore, it's getting more and more watery, and it's starting to look a little like a memorandum at the end.

Among the 100,000 reincarnation novel fanfics, 100,000 of them all use knives, and 100,000 of them all follow the technique flow, and they will not change even if they are beaten to death.

Nowadays, there are still people writing data flows, and they are not afraid of death! Newcomers are the boss

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This guy is really good, I recommend him.

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It's pretty cool I feel like the protagonist can enter the reincarnation paradise and become a worker Hahaha

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. The more fans you follow Su Xiao, ah. The more bit parts I can write. Be sure to write harder (ง˙o˙)ว.

I went, I didn't even understand why Conan came when it was written about Dragon Ball Super, I was even depressed.

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