I Became an Angel in Claymore, Then Entered the Reincarnation Paradise

I discovered one thing that all Samsara Paradise fans cannot escape from the same circle, and that is swordsmanship. I have read several books and they are all about swordsmanship. One thing I want to say is that I want to read something different, such as physical skills instead of swordsmanship, such as Master Fa or Undead Daddy. , Techniques are not only sword skills, there are eighteen kinds of weapons, which one cannot be written? Swords, guns, swords and halberds, as well as fists, armors, claws, there are too many weapons. It's not that the writing is not good, but I am tired of aesthetics, and I lost most of my interest when I saw sword skills.

Women's clothes kill sister Su, I really don't want to poke it.

We cannot imagine the happiness of Emperor Ou. . .

Listen to your uncle Pan's advice. This kind of suture novel is very deep and you can't grasp it.

I still can't hold it back, it's so poisonous, Samsara fandom doesn't ask you to kill your sister on the night, and don't come to take the girl's shadow. They are really three losers. They are still living together. When they get to the paradise, Dinisha still wants to become stronger, and the other two feel like they are just useless. The protagonist does not want them to work hard, not to mention they are only 10 years old. Samsara Paradise also talks about age, and the virtual identity in the real world is set to the three wives he has married. I'm afraid this is not the prelude to a harem, leave early and save your life.

The first part is okay, but the second part is not satisfactory. Let's just let it be a little watered down. But in the end, it's like a tower defense battle world. What I want to see is the battle, not the bad show. As I write, I feel like I am not in the same rhythm.

The point is, isn't Big Sword a derivative world? Where does the overlord unit's overlord spirit come from and give it three paradises? The derivative world is completely controlled by the paradise. Where does the source of destiny and blood come from? If these things could be produced in the derivative world, they would have been killed by high-level contractors. From Morey's point of view, the timeline is closer to Bai Ye entering the reincarnation paradise than the ancient period, so the female destroyer has long since disappeared.

There are simply too many unreasonable things to summarize, first of all. Your bloodline should be extremely low-matching. , The power is set from scratch. It's unreasonable that you still have a super long lifespan! According to your initial attributes, they are several times higher than ordinary people. How can your fragile body have such a long lifespan? Why can you survive in the universe? There are countless harmful substances in the universe, let alone the ability to fly. Will the body disintegrate when flying at super speed? Ignore friction? Ignore conservation of energy? Is the power of angels so overwhelming to you? It's not incomprehensible to start from scratch, but you have too many loopholes.

What the hell is the Great Sword Chapter about? In addition to a few people with the same names, is there anything like a big sword? It has nothing to do with character, worldview, etc. Why don't you write an original world? What's the point of wearing a big sword's skin?

When writing about Samsara Paradise, it should look like Samsara Paradise. I don't object to the popularity. On the contrary, I prefer to have good-looking fan fiction. But what is written here? A reincarnation paradise filled with stress and a near-death life has become a playground for you, and bringing girls is the most disgusting thing. Even if you change it to Apocalypse, what can I say? The concepts of the three paradises are different. Furthermore, to correct a mistake, the derivative world does not have the high-quality things you wrote. It is really inconsistent with your imposition. You can say that the current Great Sword World has some connection with the void. Later, this world will be eroded by the void, and then you will come back. Just like the Dead City. You really didn't write what you should have written, and you didn't do anything you shouldn't have written. A problem will arise if your strength improves too quickly. The rhythm will collapse. In the middle stage, you will have learned some skills but cannot show them in fighting. Then you will start to write about what you have gained, and then you will not be able to write anymore. What attracted me to watch it was Samsara Paradise, and what made me unable to stand it was also Samsara Paradise. The premise of fan creation is to rely on a big world view or a tone. Alas, take care of it author