Part-Time Cartoonist

It's not without reason that this author broke into the street First of all, there were too many typos in the first one, and readers pointed them out, but they didn't even bother to correct them Then there was a problem with the plot setting of the second character, which is specifically reflected in the character Zhou Zhuo. As a good brother, he didn't talk about helping, right? At least don't cause trouble and make people annoying. Last and most important, I can't tell which one is the big one between the daily branch lines and the main line of the comic. It is true that it is a two-line advancement, but both sides advance very slowly. Generally speaking, when the main line of a comic reaches a certain level, it is necessary to start pushing branch lines, which means that the comic makes money and solves the basic money problem. It's time to focus on describing daily life. At this time, we need to describe the sweet feelings between lovers, the protagonist's personal progress and learning in terms of grades, and the protagonist's personal development in painting skills. Through the spring and autumn brushwork, the content is greatly reduced, so as to fast forward to the third year of high school, and then transition to college, and then start a new comic career and progress, maybe in the middle It can be mixed with some winter vacation and summer vacation content, but generally speaking, normal people will not focus on the description. This is obviously a very routine writing method, but the author still can't figure out what he is writing. College, but to be honest, at this stage of high school, there really isn't much to say. Besides, the author's writing skills are not up to that level at all. It's very interesting to write about the boring high school life, so I don't see why the author wants to stay in these time periods for so long. At this time, you shouldn't be entangled, and you should choose to transition to the next stage immediately. This matter is actually easy to understand. You are like Genshin Impact, right? There is a main line and branch lines. When the main line advances to a certain level, it just cannot advance. At this time, the branch lines must be used to make up for the content, transition the rough stage, enrich the characters, and intersperse some personal chapters in the middle. Otherwise, the rough stage will be too long, and the readers will all run away by then. Who are you going to show this to?

How can I put it 🙄, the more I read it, the uglier it gets. I keep writing about daily trivial matters and talking about love. I came here because of the subject of comics, that's it! I go

I have read more than 50 chapters, but there are only a few chapters about comics. Most of the chapters are about a few women. If you want to read the comics, I might as well withdraw them. This clearly shows whether it is a novel about picking up girls or about picking up a few girls.

I really like this type of novels, but most of the novels here are about eunuchs or have been discontinued. I hope the author can keep updating and not be a eunuch🙏🙏 I will keep following it. Come on, author!

It's quite interesting. The plot is very smoothly paced. It's not overly pretentious, nor is it a slow drag on daily life. The text also has a sense of life and the life scenes of more than ten years ago. I'm looking forward to the next story.

The assistant gets 50% of the royalties and even the copyright. This is outrageous.

I was so angry that I had the nerve to ask for a jump order! Who did you see putting these ten transitional chapters on the shelves? If someone puts it on the shelves, please let this hot news go. The first day of publication is for you to retain people, not for you to pass chapters. If you don't delete the book, you are tolerating it! This chapter says that if you don't read it, I will post a comment and tell you why the first order is high and the subsequent order is low. Be careful, everyone will run away in the transitional chapter. Just outrageous. That's it. Later, depending on the situation, I also jumped on the reservation. I fully ordered it for you two days ago because your free chapters were not too bad. Later, you pretend to be cool and slap the heroine in the face at the beginning of school, praising her beautiful new roommate for renting a house. If I don't write anything serious, I'll get mad. Judging from what you mean, I'm afraid I'll need water for two or three days.

The setting feels a bit strange, maybe because I have little experience. The family is not very wealthy, but both siblings study art. Is this normal?

Chunyan yyds!

It is recommended that the daily life be less and more about the plot of comics. Most people come here to draw comics.

This is an urban rebirth story about picking up girls who makes money by drawing comics. Students who want to read comics as a major part can withdraw it.

The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The protagonist's family is not rich, and he has two children studying in the art department. His younger brother has to pay for his sister's college education, and her sister's attitude is very annoying. I don't understand why she is so accommodating to her. No matter how you think about it, art is not promising and stable. There is a lot of gambling involved. It doesn't matter if you are talented. You are not the only one in the world who has the talent to study art.

If you want to read something about cartoonists, you don't need to read this novel. Eight of the ten chapters describe daily life, and the remaining two chapters are about comics.

Your main line is a cartoonist. You are originally a copycat and write so much daily life. In this fast-paced era, it is difficult to retain people if you can't find something exciting 😅

Let's talk about a few things that I don't like. I hope the author can pay attention to it and leave it up to him whether he changes it or not. 1. Stop asking others to draw comics and write songs. Comic assistants exist in Japan's bad streets. If you find something like drawing, an ordinary person can become a comic assistant after learning it for half a year. What next? How many famous cartoonists are there? The same goes for asking your sister and classmates to make music. It's disgusting, you know. After the music is finished, the copyright belongs to your classmates and sisters. What happens next? The protagonist doesn't get any benefits, and has to pay wages to these two people. It's not acceptable, but it's a bit estranged, and there are too many music producers on the street. As long as you give money, what can't you do? The copyright remains yours. I feel that arranging this kind of plot is like eating unpalatable chicken ribs, which is worse than throwing it away because it is boring. In addition to letting the author lose the word count, it does not have any benefit to the plot. Training is, I train you but you can only get what you deserve, instead of raising an "ancestor". 2. Use slam dunks to participate in competitions. I also commented in the book that it is very interesting. For me, I have always believed that the slam dunk master is a product of the times. The era of the slam dunk master was just after the explosion of the Japanese economic bubble (in Japan at that time, everyone formed a group to commit suicide). In addition, the NBA was promoted all over the world outside the United States, and the slam dunk was indeed good. It could bring people progress, passion, hard work, struggle and other ideas. This was also the reason for Japan at that time. What this book needs is that various conditions led to the popularity of Slam Dunk. Takehiko Inoue later drew other basketball comics, and most of them were rejected. Then the author insisted on letting Slam Dunk participate in the game and win the championship. I think it is unacceptable. Slam Dunk can be popular, but there is no historical background. I feel that winning the championship is unlikely, but it is not unacceptable. I hope that similar plots can be arranged properly in the future, or add some historical background, otherwise it will be too much for me.

When I saw that the heroine wanted to learn comics, I was afraid. In the future development, the protagonist would not copy it for her! In the name of providing creativity, it disgusts those of us who read novels. If this book were to remove some lengthy plots that are not comics, it could basically occupy a place among graphic novels.

Can you please stop drawing comics for other people? Forget it for your girlfriend. I can still tolerate it. Giving A Certain Magical Index to my male roommate is too poisonous.

Good guy, I fucking call him good guy. The author is still better than you👍. From the time you emphasized on part-time jobs and forced yourself to write about daily life even when you were scolded, I know that you are a hard-nosed person who is unwilling to write ordinary articles and copy novices. You have pursuits. But it's so strong, I can only give it a big thumbs up!

It's terrible that the assistant can get the copyright when he helps the original author draw comics 😁

I gave up after reading it for a few days after it was released. Now I have come back to see if the author is cool. After looking at the number of fans and the comments from everyone in the comment area, I feel relieved. By the way, is there any good comics or novels written by Reborn?

It's quite sudden that you have been raising it to death 😰

Has the author considered writing the comic "Rental Girlfriend"?

I am dissatisfied about whether the main members can be renamed, especially Dunk.

The biggest problem is that the main character has no passion for the manga and is hard to like.

After the two consecutive rounds of the Silly Hair King, Xingyue can continue to supplement the magician's world view, write some extras from time to time, and find some assistants. The long painting will be long~(￣▽￣~)~

The writing is terrible and the reading experience is terrible.

🐶Author, don't rest. I'm very empty now.

Can I still write? You're newer, you're getting better and better, forget it, say goodbye.

Recorded, seen, not suitable.

Who did this offend? A group of people were staring at the protagonist's comic book theme for his friend, and some even said that the work was only signed by Chunyan, and the protagonist was breaking the law? I thought that there were so many works that the protagonist could copy, and I probably wouldn't be able to finish them all in a lifetime. The novel has been updated so far, and the protagonist is no longer short of money. Giving up some themes, giving some ideas to his friends, and helping others can help the author to learn more about comic themes, and the protagonist himself will also be happy. Isn't that good? You have to be reborn, and if you have a golden finger, you have to work hard to make money, and everything must be your own? This is not some business war article about intrigues, or some disgusting copyright dispute in the entertainment industry. There are also those who complain that the protagonist has a golden finger and still works for the comic book club. The boss didn't do anything particularly disgusting to the protagonist, right? The protagonist doesn't have the performance of a worker, doesn't have to go to work every day, and has no pressure. He lives a happy life every day, so why bother giving himself the whole trouble. The problem with this novel is that it has become more and more popular since it was put on the shelves. It depends on the number of comments and the number of words, and there are no updates. However, isn't this the case for all literary copycat themes? Isn't the most famous one the big star of Chang Yu? I estimate that the book has basically come to an end at this point. The protagonists are already married and have children, so there are basically no other storylines except comics. When reading this kind of book, you basically want to be inspired by the author's comics or understand some of the stories behind the comics, or you want to see what the comics you have read before are like in the author's mind and whether they can resonate with you. In short, this book has flaws, but it is not shocking. Support the author and keep going.