Peach Blossom Mountain Is Full of Joy

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The writing style is good, but the ups and downs of the plot are not so good. Also, you don't need to write too cleverly. If the writing is too clumsy, it will easily make readers lose interest in reading. This is purely a personal suggestion. Take your time and work hard.

That. . . Can the author explain the title of the book? I don't seem to understand 😥

The story is great, the writing is good (it would be better if it was more relevant), big thanks to the author

Come on, the novel is very good, come on＾0＾~

Emmm I haven't read many romance novels, but the article is still okay in terms of character and environment characterization ~ Come on, author ~

I can't understand emotions now. Is there really a man like the male protagonist of the online novel? After reading Chapter 28, I really don't feel why the male protagonist likes the female protagonist. There is an obvious contradiction between his image and behavioral logic. No one's character is born, and this male protagonist is more like a virtual image than a real person.

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Thank you everyone, the book has been completed successfully, thank you for your support along the way~Thank you

Why can't I vote suddenly? What's the matter with insufficient review level?