Super Scholar: Starting with Quietly Controlling My Scores!

Having watched more than 640 episodes, I can't help but write down some of my thoughts for now! 1. It can be explained in a few sentences, but it is watery, verbose, and a lot of nonsense. 2. During Yingying's freshman year, men and women can have sex, and have sex under the premise of taking safety precautions, but using the word "reproduction" is a big mistake. With Jiangnan's character, it is impossible not to think of the bad consequences if Yingying gets pregnant during her freshman year. Especially the episode after Jiang Nan returned from Oceania for the second time! Lovers miss each other and then meet again. The love between two people is deep and natural, everything is silent! It's not like what the author describes. Maybe wearing a condom once will be more effective! Pushing the plot to a small climax will arouse readers' empathy! Reproduction will only deduct points from Jiangnan's great image! Murphy's Law is always bullshit, do you think readers are fools? Drunk too! 3. Obviously there is a good foreshadowing for the relationship between men and women after returning from Oceania for the second time, and it will arouse the readers' empathy! It's natural. From Yingying's point of view, she has a mental state of what she would do if she lost Jiangnan. The meeting later will naturally fall into place! } It's a pity that this climax was missed. The author didn't handle the emotions and mentality of men and women well, and the subsequent processing felt very abrupt. It was the second time I came back from Oceania to finish the work, and then I should study what I should study.

That's it? Will charging start at chapter 17? The writing is not very good either!

Adding a few more thoughts 4. In terms of academic writing, the author's writing skills of family and country feelings are superb! Must give a thumbs up! 5. However, when it comes to the emotional scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the emotional lines, emotions, mental states, words and deeds are really unsightly and horrible. At least there was no emotional fluctuation in my heart at all, and it did not arouse any empathy! The author needs to improve his writing style in dealing with the relationship between men and women! Not good at writing academically! {There's a lot of water, so I've stopped reading, okay! For the sake of your academic writing, okay! Forgive you! } Come on, author!

This was the first online novel I read, but I still thought it was good. I stayed up late reading it, and it's still so good now.

Really not🤐

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